Rishabala OS- Second Chances - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: deepak148

for me there is only one chance, i don't know how to forgive any1, seriously if someone done a mistake, why forgive that person ? ok cmng to ur os, superb, never expected this ending lol


Deepak Bhaiiya🤗Thanks for the reply and the lovely comment!

I know there is no hope and no need of a Second Chance but I guess when it's Love, you should give😳

Same here, Me too couldn't find any good ending, then it struck me that why not get the daughter!

Love,
Mayu


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: xoanyaxo

Aww I love this story:)) It's just so refreshing:D


Thanks so much🤗

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifully composed
The last bit was endearing 👏 👏
Lovely ⭐️ ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS. 👏 👏
You have dealt very important points of life, Forgiveness and Reconciliation. We have to learn to forgive and reconcile with the people whom we love most and who mean everything for us in life.
It is Awesome to see Madhu reconcile with RK and also tell their story to their daughter. You have written a very beautiful piece of work.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey...very nice OS...😊 short and sweet...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏aww this was a great OS! Especially the ending, very nice. Hey one has to forgive in order to move on, I loved it! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved the daughter part awww ❤️ her telling their story to their daughter lovely concept 👍🏼😳 beautiful OS thanks for the PM dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
nice & cute OS.
thanx 4 the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
As amazing yes I have to steal a few people's comments : beautifully written as I felt this os clearly displays exactly what rishab is feeling and yes he got a second chance personally I felt end was a bit rushed but dont throw champals at me just my opinion but beautiful do carry on pming me on ur works!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: -Mayu-


Priittiii🤗Thanks so much for the lovely reply😳I am glad you replied as you are my Fav OS writer on this forum.😃

I agree, but you can take the risk of second chances when you really want to do something, and especially at Love!❤️

Thanks so much! And I dont think that mine is better, Hehe I am being Modest here. ILY for saying that to me:)

I couldn't find a perfect ending, and that's when I decided to bring their daughter in!😳

Love,
Mayu


Awww really? That's so sweet! 😳
And agreed! You can take the risk of second chances if need be!! And actually I said only some cases because I was cheated on even though I was in love, and so no second chances for that boy! 😆
Your ending was perfect! I'm glad you brought their daughter in! It was a nice kind of twist, wasn't expecting it! 👍🏼

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