Rishabala OS- Second Chances

Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: ...RamonaG...
I loved the daughter part awww ❤️ her telling their story to their daughter lovely concept 👍🏼😳 beautiful OS thanks for the PM dear

Ramona Baby🤗

Thanks a LOT!😃 I knew everyone would love the daughter part! Its damn cute and perfect I guess😃

Its like their daughter needs to know that how their parents fell in love:)❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: adeeba21
nice & cute OS.
thanx 4 the PM.

Thanks so much🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: LadyFlame
awesome OS👍🏼

Thanks so much🤗

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Originally posted by: Aishah8
As amazing yes I have to steal a few people's comments : beautifully written as I felt this os clearly displays exactly what rishab is feeling and yes he got a second chance personally I felt end was a bit rushed but dont throw champals at me just my opinion but beautiful do carry on pming me on ur works!

Thanks so much🤗

I know. I was not in my great creativity totally, so I guess it was rushed but it had to be fast paced!😳I promise to give you a bigger OS the next time:)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: cuterishabhala
Its awesome

Thanks so much🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: PrittB

Awww really? That's so sweet! 😳
And agreed! You can take the risk of second chances if need be!! And actually I said only some cases because I was cheated on even though I was in love, and so no second chances for that boy! 😆
Your ending was perfect! I'm glad you brought their daughter in! It was a nice kind of twist, wasn't expecting it! 👍🏼

Awww...yes, I mean it:)

Well to take the Second chances in love is purely that person's take, but I guess that Madhu saw that he truly loved her, he had made a mistake and was ready to accept it. He regretted it and she saw how her words broke her. ☺️

When I thought about it as a Diary, I thought why cant it be she telling their daughter about it:)

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Posted: 12 years ago