Destinies Entwined [SS continued]Part 4# PG 16

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: ddhifan
good one

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nknaini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

i luv ur story,luv the way of ur writing its fabulous really,hw u have potray the emotins of rk in ur writing in 2nd part just luv it..just waiting for madhu entry...keep doing it and update soon

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: nknaini
i luv ur story,luv the way of ur writing its fabulous really,hw u have potray the emotins of rk in ur writing in 2nd part just luv it..just waiting for madhu entry...keep doing it and update soon

😳thanks a lot dear

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tistaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

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WOW WOW WOW 👏

Such a beautifull SS dear 👏

Nowdays I am in real love with RK and I really want to join this forum but I feel lil hesitation 😳

Anyway my RK is crying 😭

Oh I can feel his pain 😭

Really I loved this SS 😳 Plz PM me when you will update it 😊

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: tistaa
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WOW WOW WOW 👏

Such a beautifull SS dear 👏

Nowdays I am in real love with RK and I really want to join this forum but I feel lil hesitation 😳

Anyway my RK is crying 😭

Oh I can feel his pain 😭

Really I loved this SS 😳 Plz PM me when you will update it 😊

😆plz do join the forum

will pm u surely thank u 😳

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

PART 3

RK then took out a box from a cupboard a bejeweled box !

he opened it with shaking hands and there laid inside cushioned in cotton a beautiful

mirror with golden silver frame . But the mirror glass was covered with a paper he

removed the glass and the mirror transformed into a photoframe with his and dads pic of

child hood!

Happy bday rishu scribbled on the photo!

RK crying and saying "dad apne mujhe yeh gift diya tha yeh keh ke ki jab main bhatak jaun

samajh na paun ki main kaun hun kya kar raha hun tab yeh mirror dekh sochne ke liye ki main

kya kar raha hun maine socha tha yeh aina main tabhi istemaal karunga jab aapka sapna pura

kar dunga kyunki aksar kehte hain success destroys a person more than failure! par meri

himmat nahin hui isse kabhi use karne ki dad aur shayad kabhi hogi bhi nahin ! "

he stares at the pic and then replaces the glass and keeps the mirror back !

RK hears and knock and say" haan bittuji gaadi nikawaaye party mein jo jana hain aahan!"

Vulnerable Rishu back to RK !

RK gets ready for the party at studio for his five yr celebration !

Rk reaches for drivers seat

Bittuji "chief yeh kya akr rahe hain driver hain na woh chala lega aapne abhi itni pi hain

aur gaddi chalayege !"

RK" bittuji RK ko koi kahain nahin le jaa sakta woh jaata hain toh khud iss liye baithiye

dariye maat iss baar kisiko nahin udaunga ! aur na hi aapko udne dunga !"

HE puts his glares and sits in the car and vroom!

He reaches the studio ! "Lijiye bittuji one piece mein pahuch gaaye studio !"

RK enters the studio and a smirk spreads on his lips seeing the arrangements

"Main hamesha yeh sochta hun bittuji ki kahin hamara khoon ka rishta toh nahin har baar aap

meri pasand taste aache se parakhte hain ! "

"chief mujhe maalum tha aapko yeh decorations and party ke arrangement pasand aayegi !"

"kahi aap mere pichle jamam mein mere humsafar toh nahin the ?"

and rk sees a person greeting him h e moves on !

"chief aap ki mazak ki adat gaayi nahin !hehe"bittuji smiles to himself !

Party guests arriving a private party sans media ! RK moving and getting wishes he is star

superstar of the party! lavish bouquets tonnes of fan mails awaits him !

RK goes to washroom to freshen up cake cutting to be done !

He opens the door which is jammed and asks mere private vanity mein kaun hain ?

The door opens RK enters to find a girl clad in shabby salwar suit muddied and all messed

up ! face ! "Am sorry sir actually !..-"

RK "bittuji bittuji kahan hain jaldi aaye!"

The gal with muddied face stares at RK she cant believe her eyes and she is embarassed at

same time to be caught in such a way !

Destiny !

Credit to siggy maker 😳

Edited by ritzi12 - 12 years ago

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ankita mishra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

wow...first me eyes fell on your beautiful siggy..aww i love them..😳

what a beautiful gift...loved this line"removed the glass and the mirror transformed into a photoframe with his and dads pic "

RK self talks wd his dad touched my hear..how beautifully u created ds scene..

then RK going to a party to celebrate his success...loved his talks wd Bittuji..aww i love them...they look like jai n veeru frm sholay or sm couple from last birth..😆

RK opens up the vanity van n finds a girl ..ahaan...bahut badhiyaan ritzi😳

waiting for next..😃

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: ankita24
wow...first me eyes fell on your beautiful siggy..aww i love them..😳

what a beautiful gift...loved this line"removed the glass and the mirror transformed into a photoframe with his and dads pic "

RK self talks wd his dad touched my hear..how beautifully u created ds scene..

then RK going to a party to celebrate his success...loved his talks wd Bittuji..aww i love them...they look like jai n veeru frm sholay or sm couple from last birth..😆
RK opens up the vanity van n finds a girl ..ahaan...bahut badhiyaan ritzi😳

waiting for next..😃