OS:RK's bday on his dad's death anni.-Updt Part2&3

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Hello frnds… this is my 1st OS… actually I dnt knw anthing about OS… bt jst writing OS for testing… actually m technical gal n cant play with words more… n being technical.. I test in all area.. so hw can i miss this area… hope u like this..

This OS is my gift to you shahi… on becoming Sizzler 🥳... Pinku…. Ewww…🤢😛😆

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It was beautiful morning.. bt smthing was in air which making madhu restless… smting which unknowingly giving terrible feeling.. her heart was crying… she was feeling pain of someone… suddenly she wakes up.. n look at RK's bed side… but he was not thr…

Today is RK's birthday.. n madhu arranged some surprises for him… but was lil angry by not seeing RK.. today she wants to make RK's birthday spl.. very spl… she wants to make him feel good… n wants to say his importance in her life… she jst wants to spend whole day with RK.. jst RK n Madhu… small beautiful world of only madhu and RK.. whr no one is superstar… no camera…. No disturbance… in beautiful silence only RK and Madhu…

Madhu gets up and searching for RK… but he was not in room.. he went to his gym area… bt he was also nt thr… she comes down stairs to search RK…. And sees Radhaji…

Madhu asks Radhaji : Maa… aapne RK ko dekha… pata nai subah subah kanha chale gaye bina bataye…

Radhaji knows the reason and also where RK supposed to be… she is dejected… feeling helpless… whole these years… she couldn't do anything for her child… this is the day.. whn Rishu cut off himself from this world.. n spend day remembering his loving father…. Radhaji blames herself as she still unable to fulfill rishu's dad place in his life… she thinks.. she is unsuccessful mother and father… she knows some way she disappointed his son in every phase of life…

Madhu asks her again : Maa kya hua… aapko kuchha pata hai…

Radhaji : aaj Rishu apne dad ke sath pura din raheta hai….

Madhu : means..

Radhaji : aaj rishu ka bday hai… bakio ke liye ye din khushiya leke aata hai.. bt mere rishu ke liye gum… woh kabhi nahin chahta ke ye din aaye…. Woh nafrat karta hai is din se…

Madhu : kyun maa… aisa kyun hai…

Radhaji : uske birthday ke din hi rishu ke papa ne suicide kiya tha… ek bte ke sar par se baap ka saaya uth gaya tha… rishu us din ko us pal ko kabhi maaf nai karega… yeh din uske dil me kaante ki tarah chubhata hai… ye aisa dard hai rishu ka beta.. ki chah ke bhi na who khud.. na koi aur kam kar sakta hai… isiliye… woh pura din apne papa ke studio me spend karta hai…

Madhu is so sad to hear this… she could feel RK's pain… with tears she says to Radhaji : Maa.. hum RK ko aise apne aap ko hurt karne nai de sakte… main use vapis laoongi…

After saying this… madhu leaves for Studio where RK is there at present…

Madhu reaches to studio… RK is there… he is sitting on his dad's chair with his n his dad's birthday photo….. which they celebrate on that dreadful birthday night.. the night which takes away all the happiness from rishu's life… the night whn rishu became RK…

Madhu standing there… she wants to be with him… bt she cant see RK in this situation… there is long silence in air… RK doesn't know.. madhu is thr…

After sometime RK looks at the picture and says : kyun papa.. kyun… aap mujhe chhod ke kyun chale gaye…

Aaapne apne aap ko kyun khatam hone diya papa… mere bare me.. apne rishu ke bare me ek baar bhi nai socha papa… aapse rishu jitna pyaar karta hai.. utna pyaar aap rishu se nai karte the na papa…

Tears coming out from RK's eyes… madhu's hearts also breaks in thousands pieces hearing all this…

RK : log kahete hai…. Bachha jab 12 saal ka hota hai tab tak apne maa ka aanchal pakadke chalta hai… n 12 saal ke baad…apne baap ka hath pakadke udata hai…. Bt papa… main jab 12 saal ka hua… maine jab maa ka aanchal chhodke aapke pass aaya udane ke liye… aap nai the papa… aap nai the wanha… aap kyun nai the papa… aapka rishu akela ho gaya hai papa… bahot akela… aapke jane ke baad socha… maa ka aanchal vapis tham lu… bt maa ka aanchal to pahele se hi chhut gaya tha papa…. Aap aaj hote to aap ka rishu itna akela nai hota papa… ye kaisa rishta hai papa…. Main aap se toot ke nafrat bhi nai kar sakta…. par toot ke pyaar karne ke liye aap ho nai yanha…. I HATEEE…. I LOVE U PAPA… why u left me.. y u go away.. why pa why…

Madhu can't see all this more… she jst leaves from thr…

RK is still thr.. on dad's chair n drink non stop…

Since early morning he was in studio… its night now… he gets up to go back to home…

RK reaches to RK mansion… he is not in sense… even cant stand properly…. He enters in bedroom… n calls madhu… "Biwi.. Biwi..".. bt madhu is not thr…

Bittuji comes and says… "Bhabhi Ji.. nai hai… woh apne maa ke ghar gai hai…"

After listening this… RK says… "why…. I want to meet her.. right now… bittuji… gaadi nikalwaiye…"

Bittuji says : "ok chief.. main bhi chalunga aap ke sath…"

RK n Bittuji reach to Madhu's chawl…. its around 11 oclk in night… no one is there… thr was pin drop silent… night looking more dark than RK's life… he yells… "Madhu… Madhu…."

To be continue….

PS : Sorry if disappoint u... bt this is just try... if anyone like my this attempt.. i ll write next part... else no worry... milenge mere fun post pe vapis... 😆😆

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Part 2 updated on page 9 :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/3356000/os-rks-bday-on-his-dads-death-anni-updt-part2-and-3?pn=9

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Part 3 (last part) updated on page 13 :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/3356000/os-rks-bday-on-his-dads-death-anni-updt-part2-and-3


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Posted: 12 years ago
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res itna lamba

kk read i loved the rk dialogues baacha barah saal waala it was so well written and touchy tu prish hi hain na 😲😆

u have written so well tum log ko likhte hue dekh mujhe vi likhne ka man kar raha hain !😆chodo i wont torture all nw itna kaafi hain lolz!

but do update quickly haan😳
sorry for late reply
Edited by ritzi12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏wow prish beautiful and sad os just love it, update soon dear... will wait for it. You are a great writer and I loved it so so much.😳🤗
Thanks to dedicate this to me.😃
Edited by emptyworld - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb Prish
BTW yeh tu hi hai na...I mean u n emotional story😳...very nice start👏
update zaroor kariyo😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😊awww the CVS have to read and include parts of this in the show. It was very touching👍🏼, now waiting to see why Madhu has gone to her Maa's house and what she has planned for RK. Very well written! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice and emotional os dear
plsss cont soon and dont frgt to pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A v nice os.would love to watch a track on same lines in da shw.continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dear nice os and pm me whenever u update next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice work. waiting eagerly for the update :)
please PM me.
thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good one 👏..well written update..waiting for next...continue soonnn

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