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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3:

(its total filmy 😊😆)


Suddenly light up all over… n all ppl start singing… "Happy birthday to u.. happy birthday dear Rishabh… Happy birthday to u…"…. yes this is the plan of madhu… all family members including Radhaji, Padmini, Shamsher, all chawl ppl gather thr to celebrate Rishabh's birthday.. yes RISHABH's birthday.. not superstar RK's birthday…


Rishabh is so shocked to see all this.. he jst stand thr like statue.. Madhu asks to play music… and start dancing… to cheer Rishabh…


Gun gun guna re, gun gun guna re, gun gun guna ye gaana re

Ho maayoosion ke chonge utaar ke phenk de na saare

Candle yeh shaam ka phoonk raat ka cake kaat pyaare

Seekha na tune yaar humne magar sikhaaya re

Dumdaar nuskha yaar humne jo aazmaya re

Aansuon ko chooran chaba ke humne dakaar maara re


Madhu asks Rishabh to blow the candles.. bt he still feels the pain… by remembering his dad… Madhu understand tht n try to divert his mind… n again start dancing…


Hain, sar pe tere uljhanon ke jo ye tokre

La humko de de halka hoja re tu chhokre

Jo teri neendein apne naakhoon se noch le

woh dard saare jalte chulhe mein tu jhonk re

Zindagi ke raashan mein, gham ka quota zyada hai

Black mein khareedenge khushi ka pitaara re


thn madhu takes rishabh to one side n show him pics on projector of Rishabh & his father's happy moments.. which they spends in rishabh's childhood… Radhaji also thr in pics… whn rishabh show those pics.. he cant stop himself.. n tears coming out from his eyes… all are stopped… all could feel Rishabh's pain.. Madhu comes near to Rishabh.. n hold his hand… n say.. "I am with u Rishabh.. I am with u always… if u want to remember ur father.. thn remember him with smile… this way u r hurting him more.. see all r here for u… ur mum is with u Rishabh…I am with u…"


thr is silence for sometime… no one uttering a word… after sometime… rishabh also start dancing with smile…


Ho.. bindaas hoke har gham ko yaar khoonti pe taang dunga

Thoda udhaar main itminaan tumse hi maang lunga

Hai seekha hai maine yaar jo tumne sikhaaya re

Dumdaar nuska yaar maine bhi aazmaaya re

Aasuon ka chooran chaba ke maine dakaar maara re


All start dancing with rishabh…. All are happy … all are happy for RISHABH…


Radhaji comes near to Rishabh and try to say something… she wants to say lots of thing.. which she couldnt tell to her rishu all ths year… she is literally shivering… she politely put her hand on rishu's head… her eyes asks forgiveness to rishu… Rishabh understand this… and hold radhaji's hand….


Radhaji : Rishu… rishu mere bachhe…

Rishabh : Maa ye hath mere sar pe itne salo se kyun nai tha.. maine aap ko kitna miss kiya pata hai… mujhe jab aap ki jaroorat thi.. aap kyun nai the maa… apne rishu ke pas aap kyun nai the… aap ki aankhoke saamne aapka rishu.. rishu se RK ban gaya… aur aapne ye sab kuchha hone diya… kyun nai roka mujhe… kyun nai daanta mujhe… main tha to aaphi ka rishu na ma… maine har pal aap ko bahot miss kiya maa… I MISSED U MAA… I LOVE U MAA…


Radhaji cant control herself… n hugs rishabh…


Madhu has tears in her eyes.. seeing all this.. she is very happy for Rishabh… today Rishabh is born again… today Rishabh's family is complete…


Rishabh comes near to Madhu… n jst looks at her… both look at each other.. n forget whole world around them… Rishabh hugs Madhu… n kiss her on her forehead…. Rishabh sees in madhu's eyes.. there is so much relief in both the eyes…

"Still, somewhere inside me,
there is a little life remaining..
A new heartbeat came up,
I got to know that I am still alive..
Some such drive
is there in this moment,
where was this moment of mine..
now it's in front of me,
should I die or should I live a little..
should I kiss joys,
or should I cry a little,
should I die or live for a while.."


Again Rishabh hugs madhu.. this time more tightly.. which saying.. don't leave me ever madhu… we will never leave each other.. jst hold me.. hold me… n tears coming out from both the eyes… n its like Rishabh says..

rone de aaj hamko do aankhen sujaane de

baahon mein lene de aur khud ko bheeg jaane de

hain jo seene mein qaid dariya woh choot jaayega

hain itna dard ke tera daaman bheeg jaayega

adhoori saans thi dhadkan adhoori thi adhoore hum

magar ab chaand poora hain falak pe aur ab pooren hain hum



The new RK who was reborn on his bday went on to live life to fullest with his complete family !!

They continued their life in a way that even his father is smiling where he is seeing his son living life with such delight ! !


this is beginning of thr love...

When love is not madness...it is not love...

**************** END ****************

PS : end of my OS.. hope u liked it..
Edited by prishiya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
mujhe yeh song ki hi feeling aa rahi thi prish and tune daal diya 😆👏loved last line yet to read all


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read all so well written u did grt job prish loved whole songs and setting and emotions u are great writer prish 👏
Edited by ritzi12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
haha i was expecting the same song , lovely prish
Awsum os
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Finally a forehead kiss😛...yipiee😆
jokes apart awesome ending👏
superb song selectio n somewhere inside me...part I loved it❤️
Edited by srija273 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Really Prish superb OS..i really wish cvs read this n we get birthday celebrations lk ds..so perfect 👏
madhu showing Rishabh his memorable moments wd his father..made him feel so special..where ppl nt loving your stardom...giving you that love n affection which u always wanted..its such a beautiful feeling wen u feel dt u r also loved n adored by ppl...his patch up wd mom...Rishbala sharing close n happy moments so sweet..really very emotional n amazing birthday of Rishbah..loved it...hope u wl write more such amazing OS⭐️
Edited by ankita24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
REALLY FILMY AND SOO MUCH EMOTIONAL I JUST LOVED IT DEAR...
U WROTE REALLY A GOOD OS...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome and lovely os dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88


Prish awesome OS 👏

Write epilogue of this . If you feel like .
Edited by manesha76 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
sach kaha prishi filmy tha lekin bohat acha tha. Well written👍🏼👏
Please write more os. I loved the line (still inside...) you put in between- perfect.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: prishiya



oh mere inne lambe essay se.. tere face pe inni chhotu si smile aai... 😡😆... yahi prob hai teri.. janha appreciate karna chahiye.. wanha speechless bolke baith jati hai... 😡😆... chal maine itni mehanat se OS likha.. woh bhi romantic kinda... as per ur wish... n ab no comments... 😡😆.. chal fatafat... appreciation essay chhap mere liye... 😡😡😆

jokes apart.. so sweet... thank u dear... 😳😊... n m not giving up writing.. m taking tinny minny sa chhotu sa break... i ll continue to write fun posts..bt cant say about OS... i hate to write posts in several parts... 😆

n for my readers 😕😲😲... who reads my posts btw... 😆😆...

ow thank u so so much shahi... 🤗

ha bt appreciation essay chhapna mat bhuliyo... 😛😆

Arre prish jab mujhe bohat acha lagta hai tab main speechless hi ho jaati hoon..😉🤣
Arre haan I mean a simple smile in face is like- it was there through out I read it. It was simple and pure romance which I loved it...Clap Yes you have many readers. I knew many had said me as well so asking not to give up. Ya tiny miny sa break thik hai.Embarrassed

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