OS:RK's bday on his dad's death anni.-Updt Part2&3

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ankita mishra

@ankita24

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

no Prish it ws indeed grt OS..really doesnt look u r writing fr d first tym...👏

i felt like m really watching a show wd thr dialogues too...i cn even feel radhaji's shivering voice too..😆

do continue..😊

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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Wowww What a Beautiful os dear:-):-) plz continue na... Love Rk:-)

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Arpita Mukherjee

@arpita20

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

so touchy..

well written OS...

loved it

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

@prishiya: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊

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BadtameezBrat

@BadtameezBrat

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Vivnisha
very nice dear😊

thank u dear... 😳😆

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BadtameezBrat

@BadtameezBrat

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: ritzi12
res itna lamba

ha re... gabra mat.. pura read kar le.. yaad rakh hum tumhare sath hai hamesha... 😛😆

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BadtameezBrat

@BadtameezBrat

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: emptyworld
👏wow prish beautiful and sad os just love it, update soon dear... will wait for it. You are a great writer and I loved it so so much.😳🤗

Thanks to dedicate this to me.😃

ow thank u shahi... 😳😆... m i a good writer 😲😲😲... shahhi kinna juth bolti hai re tu... 😛😆😆

ow ur welcome dear... actually kal maine tujhe pakau post dedicate kiya to aaj socha ye gift karu.. though both r pakau posts... 😛😆😆

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BadtameezBrat

@BadtameezBrat

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: NIDIZ
awesome... do continue...

ow thank u... 😳😆... ok i ll update next part soon.. hope u like it... 😳

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BadtameezBrat

@BadtameezBrat

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: srija273
Superb Prish
BTW yeh tu hi hai na...I mean u n emotional story😳...very nice start👏
update zaroor kariyo😆

ow thank u sri... 😛😳😆
are ha main hi hoon... teri hateli frnd/sis... ha re mujhe bataya gaya tha OS me emo story likhate hai.. to bana ke chhap diya..😆... o really... u thnk its really nice... thank u dear.. 😳😆... sure i ll gonna update it...😃😛
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