FF/SS: The Tycoon's Obsession - Updt Pt 5 Pg 7 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
looks like a interesting love story is abt to come up! can't wait to read more! please continue it! i am already looking forward to reading ur update! and dont frgt to pm me
Gm tc ks have a gud day
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Part 2

He cudnt sleep tht nyt at the mere possibility of havin a carin woman lyk her be the mother of his child - it also dint hurt the fact tht she was beautiful. Its too bad he figured she was the niece of tht cheat Billu. Every1 had such nyc things to say bout her but then again there were all these rumours from her previous wedding to be. He had to approach Billu for her hand but he also had to make sure none of their interests lied in his wealth. He remembered his last meetin wit tht cheat Billu ... Billu had refused to give him a loan to start his business n infact had the gall to ask him for a bribe to approve his loan ... Wen Rishab refused Billu had him kicked out of the bank. Ever since they shared a bitter relation n the bitterness grew as Rishab's company expanded n he started givin business to an out of town bank which burnt Billu even more. But now the tables had turned. Rishab knew Billu was sufferin from the loss his bank was incurrin. He knew if he propositioned to save his bank in turn for his nieces hand he wudn't be able to refuse.

Next morning Rishab went in to see Billu.
B: "Mr. Kundra we meet again" his voice laced wit fake delight.
R: "yes Mr. Malik ... I'm only seein u as I've a proposition to save ur bank ..."
Billu was all ears as he needed help very badly ... Even if tht meant callin this street wise orphan Sir n treatin him wit dignity ...
R: "I will pay off ur debt n open an account wit u but in return I want your niece"
B: "thats very kind of u sir but y the sudden interest in my bank ... Or shud i say my niece"
Billu's brain started workin over tym thinkin how he cud marry Madhu off to Rishab n extract money out of her as well.
R: "Do u want the help? Dont question my ways ... Oh n if u think ur goin to get ne money out of ur niece u can forget it she'll have to sign a pre-nup agreein to ownership of nuttin as my wife ... If this marriage is agreed upon plz have ur niece come over to my house to discuss the details n sign the papers - Alone!"
B: "oh Mr. Kundra I'm sure we can work somethin out"

Chachu seemed very excited today. He ran into the house n exclaimed bout the proposal I got. Madhu cudn't believe her ears - after everythin that had hppnd sum1 still wanted to marry her. For sum reason tht dint settle very well wit her. He told Dadi to start makin the weddin arrangements asap. Dadi was delighted n started organizing things n makin calls.

The proposal had come from none other than the biggest rags to riches story maker in town. Rishab Kundra. As far as Madhu had heard frm the towns gossip, he was a cold, calculatin n ruthless budinessman - he had no real friends n spent most of his time alone. She hadn't seen much of him in town but then again she did see him make news several times wen he made appearances at the bigger cities events - sum which was more personal than others - linkin him to several socialites n givin him a playboy status ... he was handsome no doubt n it juss made it all the more unsettling wat he wanted wit a plain jane lyk me ...

Then Chachu came up to me n told me, "He wants to meet u in person before things can proceed. He is helpin me out wit my bank so plz dnt say no to this marriage or netin else." This sent a chill down my spine - it seemed lyk I was being sold as part of a deal. Nevertheless, I smiled at Chachu n told him not to worry as he finally seemed relaxed. Dadi also looked quite happy n she dint wanna take tht away frm her.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
nyc update dear, but plz give long updates and update soon. I'm waiting for next one. plz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Hey Guys ... thanks for showin interest ... i'm not sure how to work the whole linking thing and the PM thing ... so juss bear wit me ... n i also juss update from my fone ... so i'm not really sure how long my updates are n wat not - but i'll try n make it better ... plz do let me kno if there's netin else u'd lyk me to do or netin u'd lyk to see in the story ... also i'm not sure wer im goin wit the story or if it's a FF or SS - i'm juss goin wit the flow ... if ppl lyk it n i hv a reasonable response i'm sure i can make it grow :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mizzwhatever

Hey Guys ... thanks for showin interest ... i'm not sure how to work the whole linking thing and the PM thing ... so juss bear wit me ... n i also juss update from my fone ... so i'm not really sure how long my updates are n wat not - but i'll try n make it better ... plz do let me kno if there's netin else u'd lyk me to do or netin u'd lyk to see in the story ... also i'm not sure wer im goin wit the story or if it's a FF or SS - i'm juss goin wit the flow ... if ppl lyk it n i hv a reasonable response i'm sure i can make it grow :)

yea...i gt it wen u put up FF/SS. bt in anyways...the story u progress makes it better rather dan ss or ff.what matters is ur story nd hw u gone tell us or present us.yeah...u hav made index dats better. bcoz it wud make ppl access properly. im really looking forward nd eagerly for another update. last bt nt least...THE TYCOON'S OBSESSION!! i really like the title.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Heya.. liked the update.

RK wants Madhu.. woww. Waiting to see how the story proceeds. I like such dark love stories. Hope you take this concept well ahead.

Coming to the lengths of the update, I do understand that while typing it from your phone it is irritating. But I would not mind if you give daily updates. Phew !! I talk so much 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
hey can u tell what is in d contract and update plz.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Part 3

Madhudint kno how to approach him. Her chachu gave her his number to arrange a meeting with him but she cudn't gain the courage to do so. She was juss feelin really uncomfortable bout this whole issue.

Dadi saw her sittin wit the fone in her hand lookin apprehensive n went n sat beside her n gave her sum wise words of advice n encouragement. Madhu was finally able to place the call.

R: Hello
(Madhu gulped ... it was his voice - it sounded so strong n rough ... it gave her goosebumps ... she had to mentally slap herself to continue ...)
M: H-Hi may I speak to Mr. Kundra (she stated juss to confirm ... continuing to mentally slap herself for sounding so nervous)
R: Speakin
(It was her ... her voice was so soft ... n the lil hint of nervousness in it was quite endearing ... she sounded equally as angelic as she looked)
M: this is Madhu I mean Madhubala Malik my chacha Billu asked me to call u ... (she said tryin to sound a bit more confident)
R: Nice to hear from u Miss. Malik. I was expecting ur call. I'm guessin u've called to confirm the arrangement?? (smilin at her courage)
M: Yes Mr. Kundra (wonderin how he was so sure she'd call)
R: Well then let me tell u all the papers r ready n u can come by my placetonight n sign them
M: *confused* What? What papers? N wat do u mean come at night to ur place?
R: *smirkin* i c ur chacha dint discuss ne of tht wit u. Well I dnt have tym to explain it to u over the fone. If u want to go forward wit this, meet me at my house at 8pm tonite alone.
M: *irritated* excuse me Mr. Kundra ... u can't be expectin me to come to ur hse at nite alone ... i'm not one of those types of girls u go arnd wit ...
R: *laffs menacingly* is tht so? ... Well we'll see bout tht ... I'll see u tonite Miss. Malik.*disconnects the fone*

Rishab cud not believe he juss behaved tht way wit her. He dint have netin to prove to her so y did he get so worked up over her disapprovin tone. This wasn't how it was supposed to be. Why was he threatened by her being judgmental bout him. He took in a deep breath to clear his head n arrange for tonite to avoid ne more drama.

Madhu frustratedly threw the fone on her bed. I can't believe it our first communication ended lyk this. Wat does he think of himself. That arrogant twat! I'm not seein him tonite tht will teach him to behave.

Chachu came home later on n asked Madhu if she was able to set sumthin up.
M: Chachu I do not want to see him. I dont think we r a very gud match
B: What? Wat do u mean? Please don't do this.
M: But chachu he was such a jerk to me over the fone n expects me to go to his place alone that too at nite.
B: Madhu look there mite have been sum communication error y dnt u juss go see him ... I kno it doesnt look good for a girl to be goin alone to a mans house at nite but I also kno Rishab ... I hate to admit it but he is a man of principle n he won't do netin wrong wit u ... n besides u guys r gettin married ...
M: Chachu wat r u sayin? He wants me to sign sum papers ... He said u knew bout it ... Is tht true?
B: *lookin a lil nervous* oh that it's nuttin dnt wrry bout it juss go have a word wit him n it shud be ok ... Now go n prepare for tonite ...
M: yes chachu

Madhu goes bout doin her wrk n thinkin bout wats guna happen tonite ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Oieee update time!!!

Rishbala's first convo. Umm... Me likes it. She won't go!!!! Haww.. why can't she realize that she is making things difficult for herself.

Update soon & thanks for the quick update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
nyc update, plz update soon

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