FF/SS: The Tycoon's Obsession - Updt Pt 5 Pg 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys ... I'm mostly a silent member on this forum ... I juss felt lyk writin sumtin as the show is sumwat gettin on my nerves by not followin its original "passion & obsession" track ... Im still not sure wer I'm goin wit this but hopefully its gud enuff to continue ... I'd started this story on a different forum but the show got really annoyin so I quit ...

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Part 1

Rishab Kundra
Self made millionaire in the transportation industry. He's an orphan n due to the hardships he's faced in lyf he has become a stone of a man. He has no one to call a frend n spends all of his tym workin. He has everythin a man cud ask for n get netin he lays his eyes on but wat he really wants is a family. He wants sumone of his own ... his own blood. He tried datin but to no avail - they all wanted his money - no one seemed fit enuff to give him a child.He had no ability to luv ne1 but he cud provide generously for his future wife n never betray or hurt her.

Madhubala Malik
She was also orphaned as a child but she got all the luv from her sweet dadi. They live together wit her obnoxious chachu, Billu, who is the local bank manager. Although herchacha is a no good man she still luvs him for all the support n education he has provided for her growin up. Madhu also wants a family of her own. She wants a luvin carin husband n children she can dote on. Unfortunately her marriage was recently broken becoz her mama cud not afford the last minute dowry they demanded as his bank was suffering major losses coz of sum illegal stuff he was involved wit. She decides to take up a job of a nursery skul teacher to help wit sum living expenses n sort of fulfill her dream of being around children becoz there wasn't goin to be ne man out there who wud willingly luv her n marry her after the defamation the ex-boys side caused her n her family.

Rishab's usual schedule consisted of wakin up at 6, goin for his jog, gettin bck hme showerin n gettin ready, chowin down sum cereal n headin out to wrk ... He was always the first one there at 8am n last one to leave at 8pm ... Grab sum fast food for lunch n sum take out for dinner on his way hme ... He wud have to down a couple of drinks to relax n go to bed ... He cud juss see his lyf flashin b4 him - turnin into a sour old lonely man ... He needed to amp up his game if he wanted a child of his own in this lyf tym ...

Today he saw her - the woman who cud potentially fulfill his dream ... *flashback: he screeched his brakes to a halt wen he saw a woman flailing her arms tryin to get the traffic arnd her to stop - who cud miss her in tht bright yellow suit of hers - as the traffic stopped she lovingly made the lil children cross the street* ... He had to find out more bout her before he cud seek her out ...
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scorp1AN thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice! loved the update! looks like a interesting love story is abt to come up! can't wait to read more! please continue it! i am already looking forward to reading ur update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc start, sounds gud. Add me to your pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The title itself is amazing & I can imagine what an obsession it will be.

Rishabh Kundra's obsession for Madhubala... Woww.

Update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome... love this ff... seems like soon there shall be a love story blooming between our rishbala😊... plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@mizzwatever: Awesum n fantastic SS!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very gud start!!!👏 nd the The Tycoon's Obsession!!! really gud title. i guess u r still in doubt whether it is ss or ff. anyways i wud love to read ur story. w8ng for ur update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That sooo sweettt!! they both want a child!! but they'll be getting so much more once they meet. Obsessions are totally a good thing lolzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start can't wait to see how the story unfolds :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good start 👍🏼
continue soon

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