FF/SS: The Tycoon's Obsession - Updt Pt 5 Pg 7 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hmm...looks like u r plotting sumthng big in next update.just a gut instinct!!! well cumng to update...hmm it ws short bt a glimpse of madhu is also shown. she is nt totally takrar for rk. bt yet cn give a whip if she needs to give. dats wat came into my mind wen she told her chachu billu abt the convo of she gng to his place at nyt. wat i dnt get is...madhu knws her chachu is pain in a** ...nd still she says wid him. did she knw dat he is nt a gud guy?? bcoz frm convo between dem its luking like she respects him nd does watevr he says.

i do want her to recognize her so cald chachu is a sick person. anyways nyc update!!!😊

w8ng for their meeting. wowww... in serial ballu nd madhu meeting nd here rk nd madhu meeting. hoping for a bit long update. just a wish!! no push!.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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niceee... plz plz pm me the nxt part :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vishpra

hmm...looks like u r plotting sumthng big in next update.just a gut instinct!!! well cumng to update...hmm it ws short bt a glimpse of madhu is also shown. she is nt totally takrar for rk. bt yet cn give a whip if she needs to give. dats wat came into my mind wen she told her chachu billu abt the convo of she gng to his place at nyt. wat i dnt get is...madhu knws her chachu is pain in a** ...nd still she says wid him. did she knw dat he is nt a gud guy?? bcoz frm convo between dem its luking like she respects him nd does watevr he says.


i do want her to recognize her so cald chachu is a sick person. anyways nyc update!!!😊

w8ng for their meeting. wowww... in serial ballu nd madhu meeting nd here rk nd madhu meeting. hoping for a bit long update. just a wish!! no push!.


hey there thnx for appreciatin the story :) .. sorry the updates seem short i juss update wen im goin to sleep so do it from the fone in bed ... i dnt kno how far i get so yh ... but ill try n update often to make up for the length ... as for her chachu - he's not totally bad - lyk in the first part i mentioned he helped bring her up and paid for her education n all - so she respects him for tht ... he isn't evil to her ... but in general he isn't a great guy ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: rocking-girl123

niceee... plz plz pm me the nxt part :)

sorry my linking and pming skills on if aren't great ... n i do it frm my fone which isn'g great either ... but ill try n work around it ... thnx for appreciatin the story :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: deepak148

hey can u tell what is in d contract and update plz.


when madhu will meet wit rishab they'll discuss the contract ... lol so u'll find out then :P ... it's comin up :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 4

As the clock slowly ticked away, the tym drew closer for their meet ...

Rishab had the weekly housekeepers come in early this week to hv his place cleaned and he bought dinner for two from his favourite Chinese restaurant - even the manager was surprised as he only ever ordered for himself ... he laid out the table and put the food in warmers ... he had bout another 20mins or so before she arrived ... he quickly went over the papers again - the lawyers had assured him that it wasn't a loose pre-nup and the contract was binding ...

On the other hand Madhu was getting ready to leave ... she opted to dress her normal self - as it is she wasn't goin to go about impressin tht arrogant man ... but her dadi caught her - and refused to let her go lookin lyk a drab ... she made her change into a beautiful white anarkali suit n put on sum light makeup ... she was gettin late but her dadi wudn't budge till she looked perfect - she figured the man cud wait ...

His alarm zinged alerting him to the fact tht sum1 was on his property ... it muss be her - as he went to the CCTV to confirm ... he was already agitated tht she was 20 mins late n she was agitatin him summore by sittin in her car in his driveway n starin into space ... she sat there in her car thinkin wat a fool shes n cursin herself for bein late n overdressin for this so called meetin n mentally tryin to pik up the courage to go knock his door ...

just as he was thinkin of goin n gettin her ... she moved out of the car ... she lukd gorjus ... he cudn't take his eyes of the screen ... he was mesmerized by her approach ... as she looked around abit confused ... walkin slowly towards the main door ... nervously liftin her hand to the bell n droppin it several tymz ... and finally after a deep breath it went off ... he himself took a deep breath, walked towards the door, fully prepared for wat was bout to hit him.

Madhu had been at the door for ages n she was gettin all fidgety as she was completely unprepared for this meeting ... she felt like a fish without water ... y hadn't she prepared better - she shuda grilled chachu more, tht way she wud hv known wats comin her way n wudn't be this nervous ... n then the door swung open ... catchin madhu slightly off guard ... nothing cud hv prepared her for this ... he took her breath away ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww..im first!!! well il read nd den comment!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mizzwhatever


hey there thnx for appreciatin the story :) .. sorry the updates seem short i juss update wen im goin to sleep so do it from the fone in bed ... i dnt kno how far i get so yh ... but ill try n update often to make up for the length ... as for her chachu - he's not totally bad - lyk in the first part i mentioned he helped bring her up and paid for her education n all - so she respects him for tht ... he isn't evil to her ... but in general he isn't a great guy ...

Ahaaann!!! ballu is nt bad guy!! hmm well den cn i expect tht he protects her ,if needed???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just read your story dear...its amazing...loved it...just too good..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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All the parts were superb ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
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