My First FF: rishbala...Last Part Updated page-18 - Page 5

Originally posted by: aroran

well weitten 😃 .. It must be Dipz outside & listining...

thanks dear... for appreciation

Originally posted by: colorsluv

Hey !!! so sorry fr late reply.
Lovely update & Story is becoming more interesting.
W8ing fr next update. Cont soon.

thanks dear ...

Hey all... thanks for the appreciation, i am getting, i was about to wrap the story within one or two parts but now thought of writing little more to torture you people... so sorry...

so Here goes Part-6

As RK left the tent, and Madhu was weeping, Dipz entered the room'''..

So its you , due to which RK rejected me tonight Madhubala''''

Madhu looked upward and was shocked.

Madhu: No, dipz, its not so, you are misunderstanding,all know he is your boyfriend.

Dipz: Oh really, all know he is my boyfriend, but why does he always follow you? In class, in parties even at this trip, why Madhu? I didn't know RK has such a bad taste,a Behnji like you'''..

Madhu: Shut up Dipz, you have no right to say such words about Rishu'..

dipz: Rishu? oh really when did RK become Rishu for you?

Madhu: dipz, I am not going to give you any explanation but I can tell you I am no where in RK's life.

Dipz: Shut up Madhu, how could you come in between me & RK, you Bi***?

Madhu: Mind on your language Dipz , I was happy for RK till now that you are in his life but now I can say you don't deserve a gem like him. I would never let you spoil his life'..

Dipz: No, Madhu , you will have to pay for it and you will see''

Madhu: do , whatever you want to , but I will make sure you will be thrown out of his life'''.. now Get out of my place'''.

Dipz came fuming out of her room'

At mid night, when all were sleeping in their tents, someone saw Madhu's tent was on fire'''. he shouted to save Madhu'''

All came out, Trsihna was weeping and screaming to all for help'. RK saw the fire, he went running inside the tent, Madhu was trying to go out but tent had caught fire from all sides and the tent was filled with smoke'''. She saw him, RK reached her.

RK: Mady, nothing will happen to you , I am here , you are not alone. He hugged her.

Madhu: rishu, you came''' she hold her hand and fell unconscious in his arms'...

In the meanwhile, outsiders started throwing water on the tent, fire had extinguished, RK picked her and brought into his tent, all were also there, someone ran and called the doctor from the forest rest house. Doctor came, checked Madhu, gave her injection ad said, nothing to worry, there is minor injury ,she fell unconscious due to suffocation' she will get consciousness within one hour' now let her take rest'. all left the tent except RK and Trishna, Doctor was about to leave, Trishna said Doctor to check RK's hand, that was also burnt'''..

After doctor left..

RK: Trishna, you can stay here, I go outside. He was about to leave''..

Trishna: RK, we need to talk''

RK: No need to say thanks, it was my duty as she is ( paused for a moment) my classmate.

T: Classmate, r u sure?

RK: ?

T: Are you listening RK or should I say Rishu?

RK sat there shockingly: so you know?

T: Definitely, she is my little sis, what if we are not real sis, but we had never hidden anything from each other and you? you are integral part of her life , then how will I not know about you?

RK: So why does she pretend to be unknown to me? Even today now she called me Rishu' now she will have to accept, she is my Mady'

T: you know her more than me, you know how stubborn she is, if eight years back it was decided by her to be away from you , she will not change her decision, she wishes just best for you. you think, when she get consciousness, you will go to her and she will accept? she will have more than 100 reasons for the same'.

RK: why don't she understand that she is best for me'' and nothing else? now what to do.

T: At first, I was with her decision because its her life but now I know whats best for her ''.. and its just you''..

RK(Smiling): thanks T, If she wish so, let her complete her wish''.

T(shocked): What?

RK (smiling): Now it will be she who will come to me to accept her love and not me''..and she knows I am more stubborn than her' He turned towards Madhu, caressed her with love, said to T, take care of my love'. went outside'''.

Soon Madhu get consciousness, and got up from the bed'

T: Madhu, are you ok? its all my mistake, I should not have left you alone' sorry sweety..Madhu: Het didu, its nothing to do with you even I am sorry, I spoiled your first date with my would be jiju, both giggled and hugged each other'

In morning, Madhu went to RK..

RK, thanks for saving my life.. it's a debt on me'

RK:oh , you are always welcome, but at night you were calling me with some other name..ummm'. I don't remember.. whats that?

Madhu (looking here & there): Was that so, I'. I don't know''. I was just not conscious.

RK smirked, no problem dear any way, how are you now?

Madhu: I am fine. hows your hand?

RK: small burn, will be ok soon'..

and she didn't give him any chance to talk further and moved from there when she saw Dipz'..

Madhu: Hey dipz, nice move'''

Dipz(shockingly): What are you saying?

Madhu: Please don't try to pretend in front of me.. do you think I am a fool'.. you warn me to take revenge, after some time suddenly a burning wood flies from bonfire and fell on my tent''.. but you know what your plan totally failed, infect RK is always there to protect me''.. so please take care next time''..

Dipz: Madhu I am not going to leave you at all.. I will never let RK with you'..

Madhu: even I don't wish so, but I will make sure, he will not be yours''''

and Madhu went away''.

Dipz was fuming in anger: don't overreact Madhu, it was he to protect you here. but he can't be everywhere to protect you''' poor didn't notice Sikky was standing behind her listening everything'''

Few days passed in the same way. Trishna had told everything to Abhay and they both were trying their best to convince Madhu''.. but no use at all'''.

RK, T and Abhay were in canteen'''..

Abhay: RK, you will have to think something big to make he confess'''

RK: but what?

T: Any party? only you and she?

RK: Ya really, I will say her , Mady come with me alone and she will come running''. what a great idea!

T: Don't make fun of me..

RK(Suddenly) : I get idea. its my birthday tomorrow''.

Abhay: Oh that's great.. throw a party and we will convince her to come there''.

T: No chances ,as its her father's death anniversary too''.

RK: ya, I know and you know what from the day she left , I never celebrated my birthday even I don't enjoy the day alone''

T: Ya, because she is not there to share first piece of your cake''..

RK:You know!

T smiled.

Abhay: Hey whats that'

RK: Infect, whenever there was cake cutting ceremony at our home by me or madhu, the first piece of cake was always shared by us. when she left I never liked to have cake alone'. black forest was her favorite and it was worst for me'' but we always managed somehow''.

T: She is just like you. she also never celebrated her birthday, her success and you know what ,she left eating black forest cake. she says I don't like eating it without fight'. once we forcefully celebrated her birthday. she cut the cake, took first piece, went to temple and placed in front of god. but did not allow any of us to eat that piece''.

RK: Ok, uncle's death anniversary's rituals will be in the morning na, there will be a party in the evening. and don't tell her its my bday party.. and abhay do me a favor. order black forest cake for me''..

T asked Madhu to come for party' but she was not in good mood''.. Padmini and Shamsher suggested Madhu to go and have fun.that will change her mood'''. In last two years, Madhu never told her mother that Rishu is her class mate. she knew if Padmini comes to know about it, she will try to meet Rishu as she loved him a lot'''.. even today Padmini didn't knew whose Bday party was it'''.. But Madhu agreed and got ready for party''.

As they reached party, Madhu: Didu whose Party is this?

T: Its RK's Birthday''''..

Madhu: What? He is going to celebrate his birthday? but in last two years, he never?

T: May be got a reason to celebrate it. anyways Madhu entered Party hesitatingly''

Sikky was annoying Dipz..

Sikky: from last eight years, he is not celebrating his birthday. you know what he always shared his first piece of cake with his sweetheart''..(He avoided to take name of Madhu)

Dipz: so its going to be me today?

Sikky: You never know, but I don't think so'. and went away'

Dipz to herself: I know who it will be, but I will not let her eat that piece'.

RK was looking quite handsome, he saw Madhu as she wished him Happy birthday, he simply nodded thanks and went away.

Madhu was quite surprised to see his behavior these days. he was treating her just as a classmate and no special attention''. was getting irritated.

and RK was enjoying her irritation.. he was happy his plan was working'.

He cut the cake, took first piece' was about to feed Dipz but looking at Madhu from corners of his eyes'Madhu's eyes were wet on seeing that he was feeding first piece to Dipz..' suddenly he dropped the piece in plate again, said sorry and took another piece , fed to Dipz'.

dipz knew why he did so, she knew it was not first piece which was fed to her and was fuming' RK called waiter who was serving te cake to all, picked the piece, he had dropped, had a bite from it, placed in plate and tell him to give it to Madhu. Dipz seeing all this, as plate was handed by Madhu and took one spoon from cake, she stroked with her making her plate fall,

Dipz(Smirked): Oh , so sorry sweetheart, you cake fell down'' was special one sent to you by The RK'very sad'.

Madhu(Smiling): no problem dear'.. I was expecting such action from you'

she bent down, picked the plate , called the waiter and handed to him, dipz was all smiling, suddenly when she saw Madhu having cake on her finger and she was eating it'.

Madhu: Its not necessary to share a big piece of cake, only a small bite is enough to feel the love''

Dipz: youuu''.. and went fuming..

RK looking from distance could not hear their conversation but was happy when Madhu picked the cake and shared'..

Madhu was busy having dinner with T & Abahy' They both were happy when RK told them about sharing of cake by Madhu''..and were having fun.. As they went to dance floor, suddenly they heard a scream. All moved towards swimming pool.. Madhu was there in the pool'.. T got worried. she shouted RK to protect her.

RK smiled and said her: don't worry, she will be fine'''

Abahy : If you don't go, I am going'..

RK stopped them and said just wait and watch''.

After some struggle Madhu started swimming with one hand and her legs'

T: Madhu knows swimming? I didn't know?

There Dipz smiling. : Even RK is not going to protect you Madhu, he is enjoying the scene. what would happen to you'.

sikky: Oh poor dipz, your this plan also failed, you must have checked her biodata.. she was inter-school champion of swimming in her early days of school''''

Dipz was shocked on listening: you knew?

Sikky: Ya I knew from very first day. when you put her tent on fire, you tore her assignments in class, you spoiled RK's first piece of cake' and now this'''you know what I thought I loved you'.. but I really feel pity on you'''' it's a free advice . Be away from these two love birds. they will loose nothing but you will be ruined'''..

there RK to T: She doesn't need help for swimming she just needs confidence that she has lost in herself'''''

When Madhu came near, he just gave his hand to her came out of pool which she held hesitatingly. and he wrapped towel over her, Madhu was fuming in anger on RK that he didn't save her. He gave her smirking look and went.

T: Madhu are you ok''.. I thought you don't know swimming.

Madhu: Oh I really loved it after so many years''. She shouted in happiness looking at Dipz. thanks to one who pushed me into pool''''

RK was happy on seeing her happy and with new confidence'''

Dipz thinking. now I will have to think something big for this Madhubala''''

Sorry could not include last precap , may be in next part'''.

Hope you all like it... even if not please at least spare a minute of you busy life to tell me my deficiencies...

Thanks a lot...

LOVELY UPDATE...I REALLY ENJOY TO READ UR FF IT'S AWESOME...UPDATE NXT PART SOON DEAR...TNHXX FOR PM ALSOO...

Originally posted by: zoshad3119

LOVELY UPDATE...I REALLY ENJOY TO READ UR FF IT'S AWESOME...UPDATE NXT PART SOON DEAR...TNHXX FOR PM ALSOO...

thanks dear .. hope to update tomorrow if get time in office...

nyc update dear, but dipz is a witch lol. plz update soon

Originally posted by: deepak148

nyc update dear, but dipz is a witch lol. plz update soon

I was thinking to keep Dipz good. but how could be the twist. and without vamp. it gets boring. so vamp should be of high class na...

Originally posted by: barbie100

lovely update

thanks a lot...

Originally posted by: colorsluv

Nice part.
Loved it.

thanks a lot...

Its awsum dear...Plz pm me weneva u updt..