My First FF: rishbala...Last Part Updated page-18

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Hey Every body,
This is Jeenia here. i merely make any posts but don't know why , i felt like writing one FF on Rishbala. Just hope, it goes well... I will not give any character sketch because it will be revealed as the story will proceed ...but hope you people like it, all suggestions will be welcomed to improve my writing skills...
Here it goes...

In Delhi:
It was night time, and two couples with two teens standing on the road, talking to each other...

Rishab: Madhu, Madhu please, i am saying na sorry , please let's go to my home, i will never repeat my mistake again, i assure you and i promise , i will never think so again about you ... Please come with us.
Madhu : Ok. i accept your sorry but today i will go to my home, and please don't force me to come.
Their parents were busy in their own talk and were standing at a distance.
Madhu: Mamma , Papa Let's go home.
Rishab's Mom (Radha Kundra) : Beta are you not coming with us?
Madhu: No aunty , i have to go home, i will see you tomorrow. Papa Let's go..

and after a small distance, a car starts burning. Boom...😲


Rk jumped from bed in shock and cried" Madhu..."
His parents Radha Kundra & Mohan Kudra came running to his room.
Radha: Rishu , what happened? same dream... why don't you forget all that... why don't you accept Madhu has gone, she will not come back...
Mohan Kundra : Beta , not only you but i have also lost my best friend in that accident... but we have to move ahead... six years have passed to that accident , now at least try to move ahead...
RK: Good night Mamma Papa, i want to sleep... see you tomorrow morning...
and RK tried to sleep again but there he was not feeling sleepy at all. He took an old photograph of his birthday and said, Madhu where are you, you forgot me? didn't try to meet me even once after that day... it was all my mistake, if i would not have... then at least you would be with me today...
Early in the morning at breakfast table:
Mohan Kundra: So, rishab, What have you decided for your future? i wish , you go to London fr further studies and join my business, it was also your dream na that you wanted to be a fashion designer , so go ahead.
Rishab: Papa i want to be fashion designer but now i have decided that iwill continue my study here in India,i have applied to admission at Mumbai... so if you permit...
Radha: It is just for Madhu na?
Rishab: Yes Mamma... if you allow... i want to go there. Papa please give me four years , i will complete my study there, if i get Madhu, then it will be good. otherwise my life will be as per your wish and i will join your business...
Mohan Kundra: If you get Madhu back, who will be happier than us? Hena Radha?
Radha: really i want my sweetheart back...If you can bring her...
Rishab: thanks Mama Papa, you are best parents of the world. now i will make my and Madhu's dream come true, i will own a fashion house, "MRK Fashion House", with her name in front as per her wish.


At same time somewhere in Mumbai:
A girl sitting on the bed with tears in her eyes, a very simple girl, brown eyes , long black hair, fair color but small scars on all over face and watching n old snap... when her mother came,
So beta , what have you decided about your admission further?"
"What has Madhu to decide yet Padmini ji?, she will go to best medical college of India. Look at her results. she has topped in Maharashtra in her Senior secondary exams. My daughter will get admission any where in India., Said excitedly Shamsher Malik.
No papa, i have decided something else,i will be a fashion designer... , said Madhu.
Padmini: so its your final decision?
Madhu : Yes Mamma, i can't fulfill my dream ever in my life, but i can fulfill Rishu's dream na? i will own a Fashion house, "Rishbala Fashion House" with his name in front as per his wish...
"And i will company my Glycerin"said excitedly Trishna.
Shamsher: So trishu's wish will be automatically fulfilled to enter into glamor world... but on one condition, Trishu, you will have to take care of Madhu at each and every point.
Trishna: Your wish, my command Papa...Now let's go glycerin, we have to go to Institute to fill up the form and fee,and to market for shopping, new dresses, and papa, your promise, if i get good marks, i will get a new car?
Shamsher: Ok my sweeties, i have ordered cars for both of you in your favorite brands and favorite colours. Now you go and get admissions., Madhu ,he addressed to her, I want to see you fulfilling all the dreams with full confidence. forget all your weeknesses and move ahread beta.. but before that if you want i can get your appointment with best doctors at America..."
Madhu: No papa, i know, nothing is going to work... you have tried a lot in last five years na? did it mattered ? so please... i am happy as i am with all of you...and also Didu is with me na at every point, so why do i need anything else... please forget about my treatment papa...
Padmini: Ok beta, now you get up and get ready to go and hold her left had carefully... form where Trishna held her left hand and took her to washroom...


After few days...
it was their first day to the fashion institute.
Trishna was wearing a beautiful short black dress, whereas Madhu was in her usual dress , a black shirt and blue jeans, with her long hair open , but she was looking beautiful as usual... Madhu stopped at once as they both entered into their class room for the first time, as her heart skipped a beat...
Trishna: What happened dear
Madhu : Nothing. but in her mind, 'is is Rishu?( as she saw a boy sitting in the last row?) no,how can he, he must have gone abroad for his studies, he can't be here...and moreover he must have forgotten me till now in his large group f girlfriends who always surrounded him there...'

Same was with Rishab,sitting on the last seat and laughing with girls but mind still towards Madhu...It was his charm that it was the first day and he was surrounded with so many girls of the class who wanted to introduce themselves to him with one of them was Dipali.
When RK saw Madhu, he was shocked, just stood up and went to her who was sitting in the first row.
RK to Trishna: Hello dear, i am Rishab Kundra, you may call me RK.
Trishna: Hey i am Trishna Malik, You may call me T.
RK(Happily) to Madhu: May i know your name sweety?
Madhu: Hi, I am Madhu, Madhu Shamsher Malik (Madhu told her full name deliberately)
RK: do we know each other?
Madhu: No, i think you are mistaken..she just stood and moved with Trishna out of room leaving RK shocked behind.
Outside the room,
Trishna: Madhu, He is Rishu na? your Rishu?
Madhu started weeping.
T: Then why are sad, its happiest moment he is infront of you. and you told him you don't know?
Madhu: Ya he is same but not i am not the same girl, whom he knows. Lets go inside, i am ok now.
And here comes Sikky Bhatia
Sikky:
Hey RK, How are you?
RK: you , here, you didn't leave me here too?
Sikky: Infact my father Kuku Bhatia said, follow RK, Do whatever he does.
RK: but even the you can't be RK and don't even dare to come on my way here. got it?

When the class instructor came and introduced himself
"Hi, i am Indresh, you may call me Bittu with love", he said when RK laughed at him.
Indresh or Bittu was manager at RK's father's Fashion house before he got opportunity to join this institute, so RK knew hm very well. It was he who had helped him to take admission here.
He said everybody to introduce themselves.
When it came to Madhu , he was shocked and about to say something just when RK called him and said: Sir, we are also here... however he nodded him not to say any thing to Madhu.

So the class was over and all students went when Bittu came and said RK: Rishab, she is Madhu na? but why are you sitting apart and she is not with you?
RK: Sir, its a long story but i just request you if she is hiding her real identity , let her do so.
Bittu: Its ok, i understand, but if you need any help, tell me i am there for you.
Then came Sikky to RK: RK, that girl Madhu looks like Mady na, just if her face was clear and her hand...
RK (Angrily) who allowed you to call her Mady? and never even think so, its only my right to call her Mady. Sikky we are enemies since childhood and will always be... but i request you first ad last time, please be away from this matter. this is my quite personal and you know when it comes to Madhu, i can do anything,... so please when you know she is my Mady, be away from her.
Sikky: Yaar i know ,we hate each other, but i also know what she matters to you, don't worry, its Sikky Bhatia's promise. i will never be there.
And all went when RK standing lonely with tears of happiness in his eyes: If you want to run from me then you may, but how will you run from yourself Madhu Balraj Chaudhary , sorry Madhu Shamsher Malik?

Precap: Success Party of Madhu at Rishab's home...

I hope you all like this , this is my first FF... so sorry for mistakes...

Part-2 Updated below
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc and different concept. Balraj had died and shamsher had given Madhu and padmini roof hmm and what rk has done ? How he knows she is in mumbai ? loved it and update soon. Add me to your pm list.
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INTERESTING ND NICE FF...UPDATE IT SOON...
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@jeenia123: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊
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Part-2

RK reached back home and started thinking about Madhu.

There madhu was also in trauma, what did it happen, how is it possible? how will she face rishu like this and be away from him? and the point is, does she really want to be away from him?

then she recalled her past:

It was a Madhu's success party at Rishab's home , she had stood first in the class as usual and Mr. Mohan Kundra had thrown the party for the success of his best friend Balrja chaudhary' s daughter Madhubala.

Mohan Kundra & Balraj Chudhary were two business tycoons, two rivals but more than that two childhood best friends and their friendship was continued by thie children Rishab and Madhu, who were studying in same school and same class. Madhu had always stood first in the class and party was always organized by Rishab Kundra. The two families were counted as single for the outer world. .

Padmini and Radha were talking to each other about the arrangements of party , when both noticed that Rishab and Madhu were not there.

Padmini: Radha, where are Rishu and Madhu?

Radha: Don't know, they must be fighting somewhere for something as usual.( Both laughed)These two can niether stay together nor apart.

Mohan and Balraj joined them too.

Mohan: Really at the age of 13, they keep fighting as husband and wife on small issues. That's why Ballu I say you that one day Madhu will be Lakshmi of my home.

Balraj: Monu, who will be happier than me if this happens in future,but who knows about tomorrow, where does life move. We can just hope for the best…….. all laughed .

Padmini and Radha both went and brought Rishab and Madhu, both were in sad mood, anyhow Madhu cut the cake but didn't feed it to Rishab.

After Party, only both families were sitting there.

Radha to Rishab : What happened beta? why you are so sad?

Rishab: Mom, She called me Rishu in front of my class, I have told her many times to call me RK, it looks cool , Rishu doesn't suit to my personality, but she never listens to me.

Radha: For only that you fought with her.

Rishab: no I didn't fought with her.

Radha to Madhu: Beta then what happened to you?

Madhu: Aunty, I had just called him rishu na, that's a part of his name. But he said me Mady infront of others. all made my fun as mad……………

Madhu started weeping and run away from the room.

Rishab could handle anything but not her tears. Before anybody could say something , he also ran behind her.

Outside I garden:

Rishab: Mady please, don't weep, ok, you want to bite me, you can, you want to slap me , you can, but please don't weep na. I am really sorry , I will never say you mady in front of others………

after small fight, both started laughing and entered into the room holding hands of each other.

Madhu: you know Rishu, when I cut the cake, I had kept first piece of that for you on side.

Rishu: I knew it, mady can't give first piece of her cake to anyone except me, where it is?

Madhu : Patil Kaka, please bring the cake.

And both were sharing the cake.

Madhu and Rishab were best of the friends and best of the enemies at the same time. Their life used to start from each other and day ended woth each other sometimes both studying ay Madhu's home, sometimes at Rishab's home.

Usually Madhu studying and Rishab reading comics. Madhu completing home work, assignments for both and Rishab playing video games. There life was perfect with each other, till something wrong happened.

It was Rishab's 14th Birthday and Madhu was about to be 14. Their feelings were changing , they were entering to adolescence from childhood. Their behavior for each other was changing. From care to possessiveness, from friendship to ……….

On Rishab's birthday, both families decided to go for outing as it was Sunday on that day. First they all went for picnic and then for dinner. It was time to dinner, they all decided to go for movie. When entered, the families got separate seats four seats on front row and two on back row. Madhu and Rishab sat in back row……..

It was a romantic movie, due to which Madhu was feeling awkward to sit with rishab. It was first time when she was feeling something like that. Till now it was always nice for her to sit with him. She was unable to understand what was happening to him. All movie went well. But it was last scene, suddenly when she felt Rishab touching her face and when suddenly he kissed her.She was shocked on Rishab's behavior. It was right she was habitual to him but she never felt , she could not understand, started weeping and slapped rishab. Rishab, who was already feeling embarrassed on his mistake, what he had done, Only then movie finished and Madhu ran weeping outside the hall.

Rishab ran after her.

Rishab: Madhu , please stop, I am sorry please, I was taken away by my feelings , please forgive me.

Madhu: No, please don't talk to me, I never expected so from you. leave me, please.

Madhu was continuously weeping. suddenly she saw their parents coming towards them ,she just stop crying and wiped her tears. she knew, if Mohan uncle came to know about rishab mistake, he will be punished badly, may be sending him to hostel. What ever it was , she could never imagine to live without him even a single day. She decided not to tell anybody.

Rishab: Madhu, Madhu please, i am saying na sorry , please let's go to my home, i will never repeat my mistake again, i assure you and i promise , i will never think so again about you ... Please come with us.
Madhu : Ok. i accept your sorry but today i will go to my home, and please don't force me to come.
Madhu: Mamma , Papa Let's go home.
Rishab's Mom (Radha Kundra) : Beta are you not coming with us?
Madhu: No aunty , i have to go home, i will see you tomorrow. Papa Let's go..

Balraj: Ok Beta , Let's go..

Balraj, Padmini and Madhu sat in their car and moved while Mohan , Radha and Rishab were coming in other car.

Suddenly they saw a blast……….

Balraj's car had stroked with a tree…… all were taken to hospital……..

Balraj was dead on the spot, while Padmini who was sitting on back seat was almost safe, just unconscious, but Madhu………. Front glass of car was stuck into her face which was completely bandaged, she was not able to speak yet and left part of her body was not giving response as car had rolled on the ground from left side.

Everything was finished in one moment. Rishab was weeping with pain, if he could not have committed the mistake, Madhu must have been in his car and she would have been safe……

Suddenly when Madhu's Maternal grand father had come and taken Padmini and Madhu with him.

Rishab just hold her hand : I am really sorry dear, I know you are angry with me till now.. but please forgive me and come back soon……………..

This was their last meeting.

After that he tried her phone but no response, he wrote letters, mails, no answers…………

After six months, Padmini had come back without Madhu for last time and sold all property , industries(Madhu industries) of Balraj except their home to Mohan Kundra, As she was getting married again as per her father's wish in Mumbai.

Rishab was left alone for ever, he had become a RK from Rishab ,a charming person , a wish of every girl, but his heart was still ruled by Madhu………….

and there in Mumbai, Madhu was taken to her new home, Shamsher Malik, a man widower, having daughter Trishna at the age of Madhu, a manager at Padmini's father's aompany but a man of values who never differentiate between Madhu and Trishna, loved them equally. with treatment, Left part of Madhu's body had started working but her hand was still non moving…….. but Trishna was always there for her. who helped her and never let her loose confidence…………

Once again everything was perfect in her life. but something was missing. and that was Her Rishu…….. all knew about Rishab in Madhu's family , they knew her feelings for him, they had no problem with that but problem was she herself. Padmini and shamsher had asked her many times to go and meet Rishab, but she could never, she could not find herself appropriate for Rishab anymore…………. She knew that he must be handsome , smart as he was in childhood and teenage, but she? She was having scars on her face of broken glass which were still there , her left hand which she could not move till now. How will rishab accept a handicapped girl, when he deserves the most beautiful girl of the earth?????????

Trishna:Are you sure, you will not tell rishu?

Madhu:No didu, i will never reveal her true identity to Rishab, I can't ruin his life. I love her but I will never let him know that I am his Mady and Didu, you too promise me……..

Trishna: Ok, if you say so, but all I wish is your happiness……………..

and there Rishab thinking about how to vow her back. when Sikky came to his room in hostel……

Sikky: RK, I just want to ask one thing if you don't mind, do you still love Madhu?

RK: Yes , I do . do you have any problem?

Sikky: No, how can to me? but after watching her face ???????????

RK: Did you see so? You know there is a saying……Beauty is in the eyes of beholder.

I just saw her beautiful eyes, which are still same, innocent and having lot of love for me, I saw her beautiful long hair, which I used to pull during fights and she always said that she she will got them cut…. and I got promise from her. you will never……..

I can just say. I love her and she will be just mine till the end of the world…………

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OMG such a gr8 update. can't wait for next part. plz pm me and plz update soon.
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Originally posted by: girlz-rule

@jeenia123: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊


Thanks Dear...

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thanks Dear...
Its a first attempt. hope for betterment...

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