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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: smdosi

Its awsum dear...Plz pm me weneva u updt..

thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks a lot dear...
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Hey all... I am giving quick updates.. i think... i made it Monday to Friday show... really.. so no updates on Saturday & Sunday... just bear with this last update of the weak... hope you all like it...

Part-7

As T & Madhu reached home…………

RK called T…How's she…….

T: Waise to she is fine. just fuming in anger……….. that you didn't save her…

RK: Hahaha… let her feel so………… its good… but take care of her…. give my love to her…

It was morning.. when Madhu woke , heard a noise in Hall…. As she went there, she saw Shamsher talking to someone in anger…

S: How dare you Mr. Mehta, how could you talk so about my daughter…

Mehta: Mr. Malik, you are taking it otherwise,I just brought a proposal…

S: I understand your proposal, I know you and your son very well, you think by marrying your son with my daughter, your all debts will be cleared as well as your company will be out of financial crises.. How dare you?

M: sir, please I didn't think so, even then I just advise you to think twice about it because I know you will have a lot of problems in finding suitable alliance for you daughter due to…..

S: My daughter is my responsibility and not yours , her treatment is going on and she will be very well soon…. I have also applied for appointment from top doctors of America… So you need not to worry about her, worry about your debts ,you have to pay me within three months… and you may leave now….

As Mehta left… Madhu,T and Padmini all came to Shamsher..

P:What happened? I have never seen you in such anger..

S: He is such a cheap person, he brought proposal of Madhu's marriage with his son Rehan….

P: But whats wrong in that?

S: Wrong is that he has to pay me Rs. 15 Crores and his company is in financial crises…. now got it?

Madhu was really hurt and had tears in her eyes… but at the same time she was feeling warmth of love of Shamsher for her… She hugged him: Papa please don't be angry, he did what was better for him, you did what you found right, its ok na…

S: But how could he think so?

P: Relax Malik…. it happens sometimes, but what about that appointment for Madhu?

S: Ya , I forgot to tell you, I have applied for appointment of Madhu with a doctor in America, but it is said ,sometimes it takes months to get appointment but once his treatment is started, there are 99% chances of recovery.. Let's hope for the best…

P: One thing is there, now our both daughter's study is going to complete within four months, so its time to find alliances for them and get them married in time….

Both T & Madhu were shocked .

Madhu: Mom, Papa please don't talk about my marriage, you know I will never agree… but for Didu…should I tell? she asked T who was already blushig….

T told P & S about Abahy…

They both smiled, while Padmini told her to invite Abhay and his family for tea at home….

Abahy's father was known to Shamsher and family was good… So no objection was raised by both families and it was decided to arrange the engagement as they complete their study and marriage after one year or so when Abahy settles down…..

T & Abhay both were talking to Madhu.

T: Madhu: now you should also think seriously about yourself… you know what I mean?

M: Didu, you know, I can't marry someone else….

T: then why don't you talk to Rishu? Its visible to even unknown person how much he loves you….

M: didu, I will think about it later but now its time for celebration, Let's have a party….

A grand party was arranged for all friends by Madhu at a Disco, RK was also invited and he was accompanied by Dipz as he didn't know anything till now… Madhu was happy to see RK but she was suspicious about Dipz… why did she come as she knew it was Madhu's party…..

Party was on full swing, all were dancing and enjoying , dipz went to bar tender, gave him some amount and told him something…. after some time, bartender offered a drink to Madhu.. which she took while dancing… suddenly she felt dizzy and was about to fall, RK hold her and brought her to the chairs, he wanted to accompany her but she told him to join the dance floor as she is fine and will be there soon…as he went away.. .. dipz came, held her hand and took her to washroom…………….

T came to look after Madhu but could not find her, she went to washroom there madhu was crying," Leave me please…" As T entered, she saw someone running from the window…. She was upset but saw Madhu was fine but was dizzy yet.. so she decided not to tell anyone about this…… and brought her back to home…

Next day when all were in the class, a representation was going on and slides were being presented on the projector, suddenly the view changed…………. it was Madhu with a boy who was kissing her.. Madhu's eyes were closed , so it was looking like as she was also enjoying the moments…… All were shocked to see all this. because Madhu was like a girl next door for the whole class…….. RK was filled with anger and suddenly he left the class…….. Madhu was weeping and ran away from the class. while dipz was all smirking……….

RK was hitting his boxing punch with anger in his room when T & Abhay came……..

T: RK, Madhu is very upset, she is continuously weeping…… Don't you trust her…..

RK(Having tears in eyes): I trust her more than myself……. ………I have to find out the truth for Madhu's respect…

abhay: You noted, the snaps were from last night party?

RK and T both were shocked on listening……

RK: I could not see snaps properly but are you sure?

Abahy: Ya her dress was same , she was wearing at disco…….

T : I have hidden something from you people……. and she told them the whole story of last night…..

They both were shocked, It means something was mixed in her drink? but who can do that, she is too good with all , no one can think to harm her. but this all?

Suddenly Sikky came…….. RK, I have to tell you something……..

RK: sikky, please I am in no mood to listen any stupidity…………

Sikky: if I say its about last night……….

All were shocked……

Sikky: did you notice why everything wrong is happening with Madhu these days?, fire on her tent, she fell into pool and now all this……..

RK: what do you want to say. tell directly, don't pull the matter…….

Sikky told them everything from day one to till RK's party, I have not seen anything yesterday but I am sure this is also done by Dipali………

RK got up angrily, I will not spare that Bi*** dipali…was about to go.

Abhay and T stopped her..

abhay: do you think you will ask and she will accept her crime, where is the proof?

RK yelled at Sikky: Why didn't you tell before?

Sikky: I thought her such actions were bringing you and madhu together but you know she is also my friend I can't see anything on her image……….

RK: sikky I am really sorry for my behavior you are truly a sweetheart……..

Sikky: I have an idea… I know the manager of that disco… we may trace the boy with Madhu in pics……….

Abahy: Ya its right, if we get that boy , we can solve the whole case…

RK: T, you go and get Madhu in class……. I want her to be there when that Dipali will be……..

T: I try but she is not in condition to come…….

RK: Either you bring her when I call you or I will be there at home………

and they all went…….

After two hours , T was taking care of Madhu who was still weeping, when she get call from Abhay…

T: Madhu, we have to go to college.. let's go…

M: No didu, how will I face the class?

T: no sweety , its for you only, you have to come……

As both reched the class, all were staring at Madhu, she found it weird and turned to run back……. suddenly RK reached, held her from her shoulder and brought her in class….

M: RK, no please let me go…

RK: Not today Madhu, it's a matter of your respect……….

there Abahy and Sikky entered with two boys, Principal and their teachers…

the boys was bartender and the boy in pics….

Principal: Yes, tell me who was that girl…

Both raised their finger towards Dipali…. she was shocked…

Both told Dips had given them money to mix drugs in Madhu's drink and to click pics with her in washroom……………..

Principal immediately suspended Dipali and went away… All came to Madhu and said sorry for suspecting her, Madhu's eyes were full of tears with happiness….

Dipz was fuming came to Madhu, held her left arm, Madhu cried in pain… RK dragged Dipz… slapped her badly… Even when Dipz didn't stop, he again raised his hand to slap har…suddenly Madhu Held his hand… stop Rishu….

RK: No mady, how dare she to touch you…

Madhu: Didn't you listen Rishu, I said stop and let her go…

Dipz Ran in anger: I will see you both…..

Madhu realized what she had said….RK, I…..

RK(In anger): even now you can again say like first day that I am mistaken Mady…

He went from there fuming in anger… Madhu tried to follow her.. T : Madhu, wait I am coming…

Madhu: no didu, I have to go alone, to my rishu….

RK had reached his car and was about to sit… madhu came running from the college building… Rishu, Please stop and listen to me…

RK: Now what?

Madhu : Rishu Please stop… don't go… rishu I am sorry.. for every thing…. and Madhu started weeping…

rishu could held anything but her tears…

Mady stop crying… you know, your tears make me week every time….,( they hugged each other with tears in their eyes)…... but I will take the revenge from you for each and every second, I have suffered in last eight years… for every moment, I have missed you… and no one can spare you from me…

Madhu slapped him in love…. they both shared a beautiful smile and hugged again…

Madhu: How's aunty and uncle there…

Rishu: they miss you people a lot…. you know I have not told them till now that you are here with me.. I wanted to give them surprise…

Madhu: Same here, I also didn't tell Mom about you… you want to meet Mom?

RK: yes….

Madhu: should we go now… or later…

RK: First lets go for lunch….

Madhu: Ya , I have not anything since morning and I have a lot happenings to tell you in last eight years….

RK: No, first you will tell me why you were running away from me till now? You know, how much it hurted me, you were in front of me after six years, I came to you happily and you said I was mistaken?

Madhu kept quite…. had tears in eyes… It was not only you who suffered ,me too was there but… ok I don't want to talk about it now.. first lets celebrate……but lunch will be of my choice…..

RK(teasingly): obviously , when you are with me how can I get a chance to chose anything……. both were too happy and went away………..


Thats all for now...

Is it going to be happy ending or fate has some thing else in store for them? stay tuned till Monday….

Take care all………………….

Remarks and criticism is mostly welcomed...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
hey nyc update, can't wait for monday update soon and i'm not gonna read if there is tragic ending. i'm not fan of tragic endings. If u really gonna give it tragic ending, plz tell me. i will not read it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepak148

hey nyc update, can't wait for monday update soon and i'm not gonna read if there is tragic ending. i'm not fan of tragic endings. If u really gonna give it tragic ending, plz tell me. i will not read it


Please, me too hate tragic endings... its an indian story not a hollywood movie part.. in india... in the end ,all is well... but there should be some twists in the tail na...
but i really love to see your comments so quickly on my updates.. thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
i'm not against twists lol, but give it happy ending and how many updates are remained ? I cmmnt on ff's worth reading
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepak148

i'm not against twists lol, but give it happy ending and how many updates are remained ? I cmmnt on ff's worth reading


May be four...(as per story in my mind)... or five... depending on the response i get...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks a lot dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gr8... I hope this story will b having Happy Ending :)

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