My First FF: rishbala...Last Part Updated page-18 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow very gud update, i thought u will run this for long
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update. finally thay are engaged
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepak148

wow very gud update, i thought u will run this for long

so finally you liked update... no yaar... it was my first trial to write something... will write something else after this...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: adeeba21

awesome update. finally thay are engaged

Thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: colorsluv

Ohh Yeah !!! I loved the update. So finally Rishbala r getting Married. Yahoo !!! W8ing eagerly fr next update.

Thanks a lot dear...
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Thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i read the all part of your ff today and it is awesome...simply great...update next part soon:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey all'.

Here comes the last part of my FF'..

Hope you all will love it'..

Part-12

After two days, all had come to Delhi' Mohan Kundra had made all the arrangements'Balraj haudary's house as once gain opened and decorated'.. But Radha had insisted Malik's to stay at caudary Mantion however, their food was arranged at Kundra house'..At home , Madhu was in tears and recollecting her memories with her father Balraj'' Same was with Padmini' but she as very happy for Madhu o had got her lifetime wish'..

Next day morning, all decided to go for shopping, while Madhu said, she will come with Rishu as e was little bit busy with some work'.So Malik's dropped Madhu at Kudra's and took Radha with them'.

Madhu was going upstairs to RK's room'. Whe Patil called Madhu Bitiya, where are you going'.

Madhu: Kaka am going to Rishu'

Patil: But Rishu beta don't stay in that room now'.

Madhu: What? As she went, she saw Rishu's room was locked'..

Patil: till you had left from here, Rishu beta left this room and shifted in guest room on ground floor'' tis room is never opened by us.. only he opens it when he is very sad or very happy'.

Madhu was surprised to listen'. Kaka please bring the key of the room''.

Patil brought the keys' Madhu took the keys and opened the door'' she was in tears on seeing the room' it was still same as when Madhu was there'. Snaps of their celebrations were pasted here and there'. Ther games as well as books were placed at the places as she had left' she called Patil'. Kaka will you help me?

Patil'tell Beta''

After some time, Madhu went to Rishu: Hey'.

Rishu hugged her: you cam, just wait for some time as I get free we will leave'

Madhu: But why are you here not in your own room'

Rishu: I like working here'.

Madhu kept quite''. But was just looking at Rishu adorably'

Rishu: What?

Madhu: I have a surprise for you'

Rishu: Ahaan?

When Patil came: Madhu beta I am going to market for some time'.

Rishu : Finally, I am free, where is my surprise?

Madhu blindfolded his eyes'..Come with me''

As they went upstairs''. Rishu: Mady, where are we going?

Madhu opened the door of the room as well as his eyes'

Rishu was surprised to see his room' it was decorated beautifully'

Madhu: Rishu why did you leave this room?

Rishu held her hand' Mady I didn't like this room anymore without you'. Its everything reminded me of you'.

Madhu's eyes were wet with tears'She hugged him tight and placed kiss on his lips'. He pulled her in his arms. His one hand on her thin waist and another holding her neck. moved his thumb on her gentle and beautiful face. He touched her lips,she felt a jolt'He kissed her forehead and she closed her eyes giving him easy access to place a trail of kisses on her face and down'.He placed a soft kiss on her forehead and gently followed the trail downwards. Her eyes, cheeks, nose and ears all were kissed by him. He lifted her up and took her to the bed. He looked at Madhu for permission'She shuddered in his arms with all love in her eyes... She hugged him tightly . He placed his firm lips on her soft lips and kissed her hard and fast. His hands were exploring her body and his lips tasting and teasing her. They took the final step of intimacy. And a tear rolled out of her eye but this was the tear oh happiness' of completion of their love' He kissed her eyes and wiped the tear'

It was their wedding day' Madhu was wearing same dress designed by RK for her'.Rishu was holding her hand in the whole rituals of marriage'.This was the victory of their true love'..

Next day they had left for America for Madhu's treatment''.

After seven months'.. A celebration was going on at Malik's'

It was T's wedding party' Madhu was running from here and there and handling complete work.. and RK was holding her hand'..

After Marriage, in their room'

Madhu wrapped her arms around her neck: Patidev now you can leave my hand' as it works properly now'.

RK placed a kiss on her lips' but I promised to hold it forever'

Madhu: I kissed him back: I release you from promise'..

And both hugged'..

RK: Mady, I have a surprise for you'he gave her some papers'.

Madhu opened them:congrats' these are of MRK Fashion house'

RK: Ya these are for you' as I will be with Papa in his business.. you will handle my dream' I have changed the name little now MRK means' Madhubala Rishab Kundra Fashion House'..not Madhubala and Rishab Kundra Fashion House'.

And now where is my return gift' he pulled Madhu towards him in his lap'

Madhu: I have a better gift for you'.

Rishu:'.?

Madhu held his hand and placed on her stomach shyly'. Here'.

RK was surprised as well as very happy' Really?

Madhu nodded her head in yes'..

RK hugged her' it will be my princess' Mayuri'

No, it will be a boy' Ridham' punched Madhu to RK '.

They both were teasing each other' When Madhu placed her lips on his' and whispered'.There is enough time for us to fight on this topic'. Its time for second gift'..

RK picked her in his arms and moved towards bed as the happiness of whole world was in his lap at that moment''..

So this is all from me'.Sorry no PMs today again.. busy due to holidays...

I hope you enjoyed my first FF ever''and A very Happy New Year to all of you''.

Edited by jeenia123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
FF was beautifully written & ended on happy note. Loved it 🥳

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