OS: Rishbala Heroine Track and Broken Mangalsutra

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: .Priya2000.
Oh nice I loved the suspense till the dream broke 👍🏼
good one ⭐️

Thanks Priya 😃, I was trying to build the suspense and I didn't want anyone to know the ending so you get all surprised and a bit happier with the ending. 😉😆

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Ravz333
WOW,its awesome.
There r lots of surprises,till the end.
Dips and sikki out of house,yay,hope to see this in the show too.

I was in tears for RiMa's broken marriage.

J just laughed after reading the last para.

Thanks a lot for the PM

Please do PM me for ur future works
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😊

Thanks a lot for reading and enjoying 😉, I was trying to build up the story, some nice bits or is that how she becomes a heroine then twist doesn't happen after all then story getting worse and worse until then finally relief it was just a dream 😆😛, I'm happy you enjoyed yaar.

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: colorsluv
Luvd the suspense . Its really gud 1 Nafs. Hp 2 see more OS.

Thanks a lot yaar, i'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: ranitha
Please don't ever ever ever ever scare me like that again- You just crystallized my worst nightmare into a story😆
And the worst part was that it was damn good😡

I know Rani, I should have written this during halloween time because it felt I was writing horror story when I was doing it...😛😛😳. But I was trying to think how madhu will end up doing the films, and I know it's going to be like accidental, but it needs to be at least a little bit logical for us to understand how she falls into that, but this idea of mine of the broken mangalsutra started out as means to make RK jealous but the problem I had was the character of madhu would know the significance of having that broken and would nt stay more then one day without it, so I was faced with writing an OS where the heroine's all takes/shots were made on the one day, when she didn't have her mangalsutra so when the movie comes out all think she is unmarried or just settle in for the horror story route which I took, had I gone the other way it would have taken me forever to build up to the end of the story, also possibly shooting all the heroine scenes in one day not exactly believable 😳.Anyway I will stop waffling, I'm glad you liked it Ranitha.

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: hifzaa
wow nafs jxt loved it
You must continue it

Thanks a lot hifzaa. 😊

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suk19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

wonderful nafs a dream sequence i hope so

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sabreen_06

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

vry nice os nafisa..loved it:-)
n thnx for pm

Edited by sabreen_06 - 13 years ago

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Tanmaya1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Nafs,

A very Nice OS. I hope RK really throws Dipali out in today's epsisode. Even thought it will not happen in serial there is nothing wrong in hoping.

I don't want to see Dipali atleast for a month.

Once aagain a very nice OS where you maintained suspense till the end. Please PM me when you post another OS.

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: SAnonymous

Nafs,

A very Nice OS. I hope RK really throws Dipali out in today's epsisode. Even thought it will not happen in serial there is nothing wrong in hoping.

I don't want to see Dipali atleast for a month.

Once aagain a very nice OS where you maintained suspense till the end. Please PM me when you post another OS.

Thanks Sarada, tried to maintain the suspense and make it interesting to read, glad you have enjoyed reading it. I will send you pm next time when I write again.

p.s. forgot to say dipali survives this time I saw a video today by Afshan that said RK tells Bittuji to take care of Madhu at home whilst he goes to work on set, because he knows Dipali is at home and she will be up to something to harm Madhu all the time.

Edited by Nafs_Sweetheart - 13 years ago