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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm

Wlw sher sherni ki fight i like it
chalo puri shaddi to ho gayi ab shuru hota hai mission biwi ke dil mein pyaar jagao
now we want nxt update tomorrow okies
gn tc ks hsd

part 5 is complete but i just need you guys to enjoy part 4 😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow but asa kuch serial m kab dekhne ko milega... a fabulous part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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LMAO sooo funny..do update soon :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 5 I am using some of the scenes from madhubala so plse enjoy

Rk return a few hours later, its seems that him n malik were long lost pals just catching up, as he walked in he hears his mother say to Madhu to hurry up as they are going to the mandir, "ji Ma" madhu replies, Rk hides himself n sees madhu n his mother leave.

He follows them to the mandir whilst madhu is praying with her eyes closed he stands next to her. After she finishes she opens her eyes n feels someone close to her she does not like it, then she looks to see who it is she is surprised its RK who is praying with eyes closed, she looks at him confused what was he doing there, he opens his eyes he looks into madhus eyes both are in a deep trance. Radhji comes "Madhu shall we go?" she looks at RK "Rishab when did you come n why did you come"? " I came 5 minutes ago n I came because I want to make sure biwi comes home today" Madhu glares at him, in his mind bappa marf karna.

Back at Rk mansion rk madhu n radhaji come home. , "chief I am sorry I know you asked me to put bhabhi jis clothes in her bedroom but I am afraid we have a termite problem," RK glares at him, " chief the room has been sprayed but it will take about 10 days to kill them all also I have asked for a decorator to come to redecorate as most of the furniture is been destroyed." Madhu looks at Radhaji" ma can I sleep with you", "madhu I have started some prayers at 2am you are working your sleep will get disturbed". " Biwi you sleep on your side of the bed n I will sleep on mine like before until your room is ready" Madhu looks at him "its ok Rk you sleep on the bed n I will sleep on the couch" Madhu replies. Rk smiles n says "suit yourself fine with me". Rk leaves n goes upstairs to his gym.

Madhu calls Roma n asks her about the script for dil mill gayyee, "glycerine can you relax I have got it for the day after tomorrow I shall send it over.

Madhu looks at the clock 7 30 pm I will sleep for a hour then have dinner she goes upstairs n lies down on the couch she goes to sleep. At 9pm Rk comes into the room he sees madhu sleeping he smiles n then smirks. He lifts madhu from the couch to the bed. At 1am in the morning he says chi chi n pokes madhu "hello Biwi", Madhu says "rk I am tired " "rk says I am too I thought you said you would be sleeping on the couch" Madhu wakes up confused how did she get from the couch to the bed. She looks at RK who is holding a tissue on his nose with red on it. "what happen to your nose rk" "biwi why don't you ask you hand it hit me' madhu looks at her hand "this one" she looks at him again then her hand, "sorry" "if you wanted to sleep on the bed then you should have told me I would have gladly given you half of the bed". Madhu still confused as to how she got to the bed. "Rk put your head back the bleeding will stop" . "madhu I know you don't like me but how am I going to do a shoot tomorrow my nose is red n swollen," Madhu looks at him " sorry rk" " RK turns round n pretends to sleep he smiles. Madhu on the other hand keeps looking at the couch n her hand confused "Biwi I would like to sleep can you plse shut the light". Madhu does n goes back to sleep.

Next morning Madhu wakes up sleeping on Rk 's arm she gets up n looks at him n thinks how did this happen. Rk wakes up his nose pink n now his arm aches. "Biwi this is not fair first my nose now my arm", Madhu doesn't know where to look "sorry rk". "rk let me massage your arm for you", she gets the oil n massages it. Rk closes his eyes n enjoys he thinks sorry biwi . once madhu finishes she goes into the shower, she comes out with wet hair she look beautiful, Rk sees this n just stares, madhu doesn't notice, "rk bathroom is free" Rk looks at her with a angry face n smiles after he passes her.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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i hope he doesnt stop her from working...its not fair...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow this is moving fast, 5 parts in one day! Nice!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved ur story very much!!!!!!!!
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
wow its so interesting suk..👏i have finished all the five parts..very well written..thanks for the pm suk😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 6

Downstairs Madhu, radhaji n bittuji are getting ready to have breakfast Rk comes down, madhu looks at RK nose its no longer pink but normal Rk looks at her " I used some of ur makeup to cover it up" Rk looks away n smiles.

"ma can you send me some lunch I wont have breakfast now as I am already late for my shoot." Madhu looks at him confused n thinks "ma".

"Ma I will drop off Rk's lunch for him I have to meet roma to get script". "ok madhu" radhaji replies , "madhu I did not put much salt in the dalh plse taste n add it in for me also I have done a tiffin for bittuji", "ji ma".

Madhu arrives at the studio, everyone welcomes her, Madhu sees bittuji , Bittuji I have brought lunch for you, "thank you bhabhi ji" Madhu smiles "what action movie is Rk working on now?" "bhabhiji rk wanted to do a light comedy its actually really funny come you can see the bedroom scene", Bittuji takes madhu to where rk was filming, both are watching , madhus mouth is wide open RK lifts his reel wife from the couch puts her in bed then pretends to have a bloodied nose n then the arm massage scene, madhu is looking at Rk furiously, Bittuji looks at Madhu "bhabhi ji are you ok" Madhu smiles n looks at Bittuji "I am fine I will go n get Rks lunch ready I want to surprise him bittu ji so plse don't inform him I am here.' Bittu smiles"ji bhabi ji .

Madhu takes out the food from the tiffin boxes n pours it on the plates one for Bittuji n one for rk. Rk comes in the cabin madhu smiles "rk I am so sorry for last night I brought your lunch' " Biwi its fine I am ok it just hurts when I lift my arm n touch my nose", "biwi when did you arrive?" " Rk I arrived when you were putting your reel wife on the bed from the couch then the nose scene then the arm scene" Rk looks at Madhu n smiles . "Madhu I needed to rehearse my scene", Madhu looks at him "Rk do you realize how bad I was feeling?" "Madhu I am sorry" ' your lunch is ready" Bittuji here's your lunch " chief I will eat it outside" "Bittuji cancel my shoot for today " "ok chief".

Rk sits down "Madhu I am going to tell you a story plse hear me out". "I met this girl madhu is her name you annoyed me, you had a fighting spirit she believe what is wrong is wrong n what is right is right, I on the other hand was a a stubborn, arrogant man, no one could challenge me n you came in my life you challenged me I don't know how or when I fell in love with you, I trusted you I needed you, n then due to my own fault you were gone, I could not breathe my days were spent working my nights were spent drinking I would sleep on your side of the bed all I could think about you then I saw those videos I was jealous men were leering at you I didn't want that I wanted you, in interviews you never once spoke about me, you didn't even want to see me again it hurt it hurt so bad the pain was worst than the gun shot I received. Madhu I gave the money back to malik at first was to blackmail him but I couldn't do that and I told him, I told him it was never about the money it was because I wanted you I needed you, He called me told me I had one chance to get you back so he told me to stick to my plan of the contract. Madhu I don't want no contract marriage I want to live my life with you only you" Madhu has tears in her eyes " you hurt me" madhu says, " I know I am sorry," "Rk when you got that shot that day a part of me died my hate for you I was not sympathizing with you I was falling in love with you n then you believed what deepali had said you told me to leave I did not want to but you wanted me gone that hurt a lot,RK hugs madhu n kisses her on the forehead, "madhu I love you" Madhu rests her head on his chest he holds her for 10 minutes. The cabin door opens "chief they are ready", madhu looks at RK, "madhu we have a surprise for you, first I will eat lunch then we shall go," "Rk plse don't eat that" "why ma has sent it for me" "ji ma has sent it she told me to taste it as it had little salt so I added salt in it the whole bottle", madhu smiles n puts her head down, Rk smiles "I deserve that lets go".

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Posted: 12 years ago
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atlast thank god picture is clear... nw lets see what is surprise...

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