Separation ss part 11 page 16 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
loved it can't wait for more! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
i have writers block on this i know i need to write more 😭 hopefully soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i always like to finish my ss n this one had writers block i could not get my head round it anyway i decided that i was going to a do a dream sequence this way i can incorporate more into this ss if dramas can do this so why cant i anyway i hope all enjoy.
part 7

It was the same dream madhu had been having each time it haunted her, she was still by herself in her bed she looked round n saw the time she was suppose to go to the studio what was roma thinking n then she remembered her dream, Madhu walks out n sees bittuji leaving, She looks at roma she tells her she is not feeling good, roma asks her whats going on, Madhu looks at her i want to forget everything i dont want to remember a thing, it was hurting her she was not going to get trapped again by no one, she bathes n goes out padmini makes her favourite breakfast, she looks at it n smiles then malik tells her that rk has brought back the money, madhu gets angry she walks out of the door n she goes straight to the liquor store she tells them give her the strongest drink they have, he gives her vodka madhu takes it n goes back home, madhu goes into her bedroom n drinks with coke n spits it out she comes out totally drunk malik looks at her, Malik i love you ma i love malik, dido i love you, even roma looked shocked. madhu have you been drinking padmini asks madhu replies madhu starts to giggle, padmini slaps her she takes her into the bedroom n makes her lie down. Madhu throws up, ma i loved him but rk he hurt me well what else was i going to expect a man marries me n does it for revenge, he wanted to see me destroyed well ma he has me destroyed the worst kind of revenge . Padmini n malik both have tears in their eyes seeing the apple of their eye like this what they had planned to get rk n madhu back together was a total flop they thought when she heard that rk had sent the money back madhu would be angry but instead they see her all broken, malik calls rk tells him its not as easy as you think madhu is totally broken he tells her what happened rk is shocked to hear this, he tells malik he is coming over malik agrees.
Rk arrives he sees madhu lying on her bed she looked peaceful, malik tells him that he had spoken to madhu last night she seemed to be ok she opened up to him so he thought i did not realise how hurt she was rk.
A tear came down rk face he never wanted madhu like this at first it was revenge but now he wanted her love her, Rk you know the pain of first love malik says to him madhu is feeling the same pain you had.

Madhu heard rk n malik talking she gets up she heard everything she goes out side n shouts OUT OF MY HOUSE, her head was spinning but she want rk out she was about to pass out rk gets up n catches her he could smell the alcohol this is what he had done no one else, rk looks at malik i want her back in my life how am i going to do that. Malik says this is the first time madhu has drunk hopefully the last let her get sober then we shall talk. Rk puts madhu back in bed n then moves her hair from her face, he whispers in her ears i hope you can hear this i love you only you i am sorry for what i said i was wrong. Rk then goes to leave followed by malik n padmini madhu opens her eyes again in tears she did not have the heart to trust again she can not cope with this pain he gave how was she suppose to trust what he was saying.

i hope you enjoy
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Plz add me to ur pm list and lovely update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
yaar apne part 6 main unko ek kar diya aur yeh part 7 main wo alag. plz explaim sis.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepak148

yaar apne part 6 main unko ek kar diya aur yeh part 7 main wo alag. plz explaim sis.

deepak its a dream madhu had a dream on part 6 i had writers block on this one thats why i changed it . Remember madhu had a dream sleeping next to trishna n she was dancing with rk its the same concept
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
superb ss prittb,,,,keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: PWIRK

superb ss prittb,,,,keep it up

yes prittb is doing a excellent job on my ss 😳😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
That was a very long SS but I loved the story line! Great job! Keep writing more please!



***"You know that when I hate you, it is because I love you to a point of passion that unhinges my soul." ~Julie de Lespinasse ***

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome SS
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Thank You

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