Separation ss part 11 page 16 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very interesting story so far...quiet enjoyed reading it. I would love to read more of this ss, please send me a pm if u can. keep up the lovely work :) :) :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow really nice Story. Continue Soon.

Thanx for PM

PM me when you update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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liked it . keep the good work
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Posted: 13 years ago
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a interesting and beautifull story... just nw i catch ur ff its interesting... plz pm me next time...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting and nice ss
plsss update soon and dont frgt to pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks everyone part 3 coming up😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part three

Kuku ji was arrested for attempted murder in shooting RK as he was on the run for a couple of months after Rk found out. As for Deepali she did divorce Sikandar n he threw her out of the house she had no where to go except to a one bedroom house where she use to live. As for sikandar he started to work on ads then he was offered a south indian movie ( I want all these characters out of the way also I am skipping geet hui sabsi parayi otherwise a few months will turn into years )

RK attended the gold awards with his mother n watched madhu perform her with Gurmeet Choudary . The performance was excellent. The anchor comes up to RK sir how did you like your wife's performance?" RK smiles" i did not like it i loved it".

Radhaji went back stage " Madhu beta" Madhu turns round she stands up n goes to touch Radhajis feet but she stops her n instead hugs her. "madhu come home, you promised me I would get my son back but how can I get my daughter in law back?" "Ma Rk and I was yesterdays past today this is my future it has ended" Radha smiles "Madhu it has not ended you are still wearing my sons manglesutra you did not leave him, he left you, I was angry with you because I believed what everyone said to you then soon realized my son was drowning, because he was not with you then I found out the real truth madhu plse forgive me". " Ma you did nothing wrong who am I to forgive you, you are my elder if you thought I did something wrong then you were right to say what you said I know deepali had been deceiving you but it was not my place to tell you, you had to find out yourself". Madhu says to Radhji. Just then Malik comes in "madhu ready to leave?" "ji Malik" "Madhu plse beta come back home as she puts her hands together" "ma plse don't force me".

Outside Rk is about to come in, as Malik walks out, "rk not yet I will speak to her, I know my daughter the only way I can get her to admit anything is my way she will close up to you she is coming out with your mother don't let her see you plse trust me" Rk nods his head. RK stands back of Malik facing the other way so madhu does not see, "ma I will go" madhu hugs Radhaji n tears swell up in both their eyes.

Malik does not take madhu home he takes her to the Ganpathi temple, "madhu beta we need to talk about what has happened I need to know about where my childs smile has gone?" Madhu smiles n shakes her head "malik nothing happened" " beta we are in front of ishwar" All of a sudden Madhu starts to cry "he hurt me he told me my real father was right to have me killed as I was a cheap person" "beta people say things in the heat of the moment and you have never taken this to heart before so why now?" madhu tears flowing "madhu shamsher malik why now?". Malik knew the answer he knew his daughter her heart was RKs, Malik cups madhus face softly he says "you fell in love", Madhu hugs him he holds her tightly n cries, " yes she loved him but it was a contract marriage its over now." malik closes his eyes n holds madhu until she stopped crying.

Malik and Madhu reach home after midnight, padmini makes them something to eat, she doesn't ask questions she puts the food on the table both Malik and Madhu start to eat then Malik asks for butter, Padmini brings it to the table, madhu grabs it n says" no as your bp is high n your cholesterol," padmini eyes start to swell up, Malik smiles n says "our madhu is back".

Malik calls RK at 2 am, RK panics" is madhu ok?" Malik says " calm down RK madhu is fine in the morning she will be in a rage she will be bringing the 50 lac back to you just giving you a heads up you better not mess this up I am giving you one chance with my daughter be ready she is very ziddi" "Thanks malik" RK replies. Rk smiles he wakes up bittuji tells him the plan.

Edited by suk19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey dear😭
awesome update👏👏...
poor madhu...
plz update soon ..n pm me nxt time
luv u
sunita
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
Omg !! poor Madhu she's so broken
you brought G-awards 😉 I like it 😛

Superb update
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Wow really nice update...

Thnx for PM.

Continue Soon.


Waiting to see how RK impresses Madhu in his only chance.




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