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Separation

Dips finally got what she wanted separation of madhu and RK, he was all hers now. Flashback Madhu was helping RK get out of bed when Dips walked in with two persons, who told rk that it was malik who wanted him dead, Madhu looks at dips n realizes that she is setting up her Malik, then she shows her telephone to Rk she says rk watch this video n all Rk hears n sees is malik telling them a job well done. Rk looks at madhu "I know the pain of losing a father but here your father wants me dead" madhu looks at RK "rk my malik would never do this", then dips starts rave how madhu came to her n asked her to help her n give madhu 40 lac, but she refused and says how madhu is deceiving, RK loses his temper at Madhu tells her now he knows why her real father wanted her dead, Madhu says rk this is not true, Rk tells her to get out, then sikander comes in he was already the main suspect he says to RK how madhu is cheap she came to him both dips n sikander played one big game. RK grabs Madhus arm n tells her to get out of his life.

Madhu leaves in shock, as she is leaving bittuji comes up in his car "bhabi ji" she just looks at him "take care of him" n leaves. Madhu walked for hours she reached at her chawel, Padmini sees her "Madhu" she does not talk she goes n sits on her bed n lies down, Padmini questions her but madhu still does not talk shes quiet, then padmini decides to call Radhaji she is now angry tells "padmini keep your filthy daughter and family away from my son" and puts phone down. Malik and trishna comes Malik starts to ask padmini , but padmini could not tell them anything.

A month passed Madhu went back to being simple, she rarely spoke her words were "yes, no" Malik, padmini n trishna tried to get the old madhu back the same nok jhok nothing worked, Roma says to trishna that at the studio they are looking for some dancers for a song will she be interested, Trishna looks at Roma " I have given up that dream", Madhu speaks Roma " I will do it" Everyone looks shocked, Madhu went for the audition she got the job.

Saiyan dil mein aana she rocked in that video, Roma watched her she had not seen a smile on madhus face for a long time. After the shoot was done madhu went back into her simple clothes n back to being quiet again, then the director asks Roma if Madhu would be in another video a Punjabi song "Nachle Soniye Tu" Once the shoot was over a modeling agent comes up to n asks for madhu to be a model for a magazine, Roma asks Madhu, she agrees one after the other madhu was on adverts for tv magazines she did colgate , chevolet and Reliance ads and then a offer came she could not refuse to play a character " Dr Muskan Chadda in Dil mil gayye it was a role she could not refuse with all the advertising jobs, modeling jobs over a three month period madhu finally had what she wanted 50 Lac.

Madhu calls Bittu ji n tells him to meet her without his chief knowing. Bittuji comes to meet Madhu "Bhabhi ji how can I help you?" "Bittuji here plse give this to RK its with interest as well" Bittu looks at Madhu " Bhabhi ji what is this? " "Bittu ji its 50 Lac Rk gave the money to help my father I am just returning what is his". "Bhabi ji the leeches are sucking blood from him he is drinking more than ever", "Bittuji as madhu fight back tears take care of him". She leaves.

At Rk mansion, rk was looking at madhus clothing, he remembers when he came back home from the hospital dips had taken them all out, he demanded they be brought back as he wanted the memory of pain to be with him always. He sleeps with pillows in the middle of the bed, Dips tried to change the sheets to satin but he used to get back the ones he n madhu slept in. Her ear rings were always in his pocket. Bittu ji comes in dips has brought rk some food, "Chief I met bhabhi ji today " Rk looks up "chief bhabhi has given me 50 lacs". RK gets angry "I don't want her money give it to beggars" Dips says " Rk I will give it to the beggars " as she takes it from him, Bittu looks at her with disgust he knows where its going certainly not to the beggars. Dips takes the money back her bedroom n puts it in her suitcase. "Bittuji to go to the courts tomorrow n file divorce papers, our contract has ended"

In the morning Bittuji goes to court n gets the relevant divorce papers, he then takes the over to RK who signs them, then he takes them over to Madhu, "bhabi ji divorce papers" Madhu smiles n starts to walk off, Bittuji runs off "bhabi ji you need to sign" Bittuji the divorce has happened already, rk has signed the papers, I was his half wife he had phere with me I did not have phere with him so there is no need for me to sign" Bittu shocked n looks at madhu. He goes back to RK who is in his cabin at the studio n tells him what madhu said, "rk smirks". "bittuji I will have to go myself" he cancels the shoot n drives over to where madhu was, he goes upstairs n knocks on the door, Padmini answers it, she looks at him shocked "what are you doing here?" she asks. "nice to see you too sassuma, I have come to see my wife", "she is no longer your wife you signed the divorce papers" " sassuma I signed the divorce papers she did not", he walks in "Madhu" he shouts. " she's gone I don't know when she will be back probably after her shoot is finished". RK looks at her confused leaves.

He drives to a bar where he asks for a drink, then he hears "kya item she is? Yaar what is her name"? then he hears "Madhu" he looks round n he sees Madhu dancing to "saiyan dil mein anna" [YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rj7AyLuLCAY[/YOUTUBE] he is mesmerized then the next song "Nachle soniye tu"[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xfirxYsAEXU[/YOUTUBE] he looks n hears the whistling in the bar he clenches his fist. Then a fight breaks out in the bar, Rk was fighting with 4 or 5 guys he was in one rage, the police came n arrested all.

Bittu ji bailed out RK the next day the newspapers "Rk in brawl at a bar". They mention how RK's wife was in a video n how RK got furious as men leered at his wife. They also say that madhubala was playing the role of Dr Muskhaan chadda in Dil mil gayye. RK furious, "Bittuji my wife is not be in the film industry ," "chief i spoke to bhabiji this morning she told me she was no longer your wife as you have signed the divorce papers so plse the next time you do a press conference plse let them know." Rk looks at Bittuji.

"Chief i have some information from the police the shooter has been found," "Bittu ji i know who is responsible" "chief you don't its Kuku Bhattia" Rk looks at Bittu then remembers what he said to madhu, Rk sits down, Rk says "madhu asked dips for the money" "no chief deepali tried to give bhabhi ji the money but bhabhi said this was between you n her n she did not what another person to be in debt to, she or her father will pay her you" Rk looks at him "bittu ji why did you not tell me that day at the hospital" "chief i did not know that deepali had told you that", "sikander said that madhu had come on to him" " chief that is not true the day that madhu refused to come on the set he had gone into her room n said he would become her personal everything but bhabhi ji said to him that she can do everything her self as it keeps her healthy just in case she needs to use her arms n legs" RK clenches his hands, "bittu ji how do you know this?" "chief neeta told me she was outside the door bhabhi ji was in the shower n saw sikki on her bed sitting with the plate of fruits" "bittuji what have i done?"


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Posted: 13 years ago
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i hope you enjoy i have taken real tv career in my short story enjoy n comment plse 😉

index
part 2
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3232009&TPN=2
part 3
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/3232009/separation-ss-part-11-page-16?pn=4
part 4
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/66933786
part 5
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/66944565
part 6
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/67012273
Edited by suk19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome story plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I liked it. We are all wondering how the CV's will start the process of making Madhu into a star, and now you've written a short story really plausible that it could start with an item song and because she has the right look it could lead to something more permanent in the industry. Also dealing with the disagreement resolving the shooting was all well thought out and written.

Will you continue to the homecoming of Madhu at least and the dealing with kukuji by RK?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nafs_Sweetheart

I liked it. We are all wondering how the CV's will start the process of making Madhu into a star, and now you've written a short story really plausible that it could start with an item song and because she has the right look it could lead to something more permanent in the industry. Also dealing with the disagreement resolving the shooting was all well thought out and written.


Will you continue to the homecoming of Madhu at least and the dealing with kukuji by RK?

nafisa it will be a while a good while before madhu goes home. i am glad "u like it" u are most welcome😆😉
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Originally posted by: suk19

nafisa it will be a while a good while before madhu goes home. i am glad "u like it" u are most welcome😆😉


I borrowed from RK his catch phrase 😆 you know it's been a while since he said it, his so troubled with this Ganpati babba matter his not enjoying himself to the fullest. You know when he said to Padmini like mother like daughter and to Shamo like father like daughter, I expected him to finish the line with "I Like it" but it didn't come, making me sad 😔, use the catch phrase RK please.

ok i'm glad to hear you will continue it to homecoming of madhu. When will you update?
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Originally posted by: Nafs_Sweetheart


I borrowed from RK his catch phrase 😆 you know it's been a while since he said it, his so troubled with this Ganpati babba matter his not enjoying himself to the fullest. You know when he said to Padmini like mother like daughter and to Shamo like father like daughter, I expected him to finish the line with "I Like it" but it didn't come, making me sad 😔, use the catch phrase RK please.

ok i'm glad to hear you will continue it to homecoming of madhu. When will you update?

i agree i would have loved him to say like father like daughter i like it but he didnt i am sure it will come soon anyway read part two n tell me what you think
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Part two

"chief what happened that day at the hospital?" RK explains everything what went on. "Madhu took care of me and all I did was hurt her, I told her that her real father was right that she should have died before birth". "chief I spoke to Roma, malik's sister she told me that bhabhi ji does not talk, does not smile, she said it was if she was a dead person alive. She does rarely goes out unless its to work, she does not speak to anyone there either, Roma said what ever was said or done that day killed their child."

"Bittu ji bring me the money that Madhu sent me," says RK "chief why?" " just bring it too me" " chief deepali has it" Rk starts to shout as he walks down the stairs " DEEPALI" she runs from her room, "Rk what happened?" "get me the money that madhubala sent" Dips looks at RK " Dips your wish is going to be finally coming true, you can divorce that Bandar" "I have a job for you to do" Rk says. Dips goes to her room n gets the money where she had hid it, RK says to her "these are divorce papers mine n madhus go and get her to sign it" "then go to the courts n get divorce papers for you and sikander" Bittuji looks at RK confused. Bittu ji she will be out of our way and will get what she deserves.

Deepali first goes to the courts get the divorce papers, then she calls sikander tells him to meet her quickly as she has to get a contract signed by him, she tells him it's a big deal one he has been waiting for the past five years, Sikander meets her she tells him to sign the documents as she has hurry to get the deal in her hand he signs without looking. She goes back to the courts to process them Then she rushes down to the studios where madhu was shooting for dil mil gayyee, she goes over to Roma n says Rk has sent her for Madhu to sign the divorce papers, and don't keep her waiting as she has her wedding to plan. Roma goes over to Madhu but madhu does not come over to her she continues to shoot, Dips starts to shout, so the director gets security to throw out Dips . Roma laughs. Dips says to the security man "do you know who I am I am RK fianc I will be marrying him very soon I will have you fired for this" the security guard looks at her " and I am married to madhubala " he tells her to get lost. Dips walks up an down waiting for madhu. She leaves without seeing Madhu.

Rk starts to watch Dil mil gayyee he loved it when madhu came on she was a natural, 'Bittu ji I want to do a guest appearance on madhus show to promote my new film" "yes chief" Bittuji replies. The buzz at the studio that superstar Rk was going to be on the show, he would be coming in Madhu speaks to the producers and directors of the shows she tells them she will be on leave for that week but do not inform RK she will do all her shots beforehand.

Rk arrives at the studio everyone the press all waiting to see him he looks round to see where madhu is?, the producer of the show tells him that ms madhu has gone on holiday for the week she has taken all the shots they just need him to do some of the shots n their creative team will take of the rest. Rk does it but is angry he does not show it he happily did everything they wanted him to do take pictures with the other cast memebers . All the news media asks if his wife was there he tells them No as she is on a break. Rk looks at Bittuji who tells them no more questions that's it thank you.

RK and Bittuji go to Maliks home, Rk walks up the stairs, Malik is talking to padmini n trishna about Madhu then they see RK. Padmini looks at him Malik asks "rk why are you here?" "I want my wife back", Malik looks at him "we have paid you contract finished RK" "yes it is I came here thinking how could I get madhu back by hurting you all again I don't want to do that," " I cant live without madhu I was wrong" "RK the last time you came her with a apology you ruined our daughters life you forget " " I did this time its different " "how?" Malik asks "I love madhu" RK replies Malik says "it took you 5 months to realize that" Rk tells them everything what happened, padmini , Trishna n Malik listen to everything Rk said. Malik shakes his head "no your not coming back into madhus life". RK looks at him "I understand I came here thinking I would blackmail you by saying the contract was between me n you but I wont heres the 50 lac madhu sent I don't want it I never wanted it, it has always been madhu I wanted if I a truthful to myself I have wanted her the first day I met her". Sorry Trishna I know I have used you I apologise for that. "Where is madhu?" RK Madhu left a couple of days ago she did not tell us where she was going." " madhu is very ziddi as you already know it will be hard to convince her". Rk smiles " I can but I need to see her".

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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting...
pls put an index too... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashred12

interesting...
pls put an index too... :)

thanks i always screw the index up will try

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