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Posted: 12 years ago
so many lovely comments hehe.. i wont be long.. updating next part ;)
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Wow wow wow wat a twist.poor rk.he will b shattered after knowing da truth.abhay nd rk r twin brothers amazing.plz pm me nd continue soon.
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~Ajeeb Dasta~

~PART - 23~





Abhay arranged a family shopping day. He securely made his two kids sit at the back of the car, double checking there seat belt than he hoped on the driver seat, while Madhu on the passenger seat with her bag. She double checked for Roy's inhaler and jearsies cream and abhays wallet along with her, than she looked up with a smile. 'all done, let's go!'

'mum can we eat outside? Can we eat nandoos?' Jearsy questioned, while looking at his dad. 'dad didn't take us anywhere for 4 weeks! He promised when you are back he will take us... So can we... Can we... Can we...'

Madhu laughed and looked at abhay, who was busy ignoring there plead and moaning and kept his eyes on the road.

'sure we can...'

Meanwhile RK came out with his car, he really did find pointless spending a single day in his flat, he requires to look for Madhu...

'so...' bittuji looked at RK. Who wasn't happy with anything...

The restless heart wanted to feel the presence of Madhu. He have never felt this restless and that feeling, his mind wanted to get rid of it soon as possible.

...

Madhu lovingly looked at her husband, irritated with there children. Telling them off now and than, picking on most smallest things. She smiled, holding his hand, as they both sat opposite of one another with each kids. 'have I been way to long?'

Abhay looked carelessly first, unable to catch her words but in matter of second when he did realize, he instantly looked at her.

'even a second way from you is to long!' he simply replies. There eyes never wanted to remove that beautiful gaze. She was 16 again, meeting the love of her life... Abhay, 18. He have matured, every gap of Madhus mission and every time she comes back, she discovers a more mature man, a mature father, a loving husband.

'I love you...' Madhu replied, feeding him a spoonful of rice.
'I love you to...'

As the dinner came to an end, they arrived home, putting there both child to bed. Madhu slowly walked in to there kids room, taking an album, observing jersy's new born photo. She always miss all this in her absence. Abhay picked Madhu up and both sat on a rocking chair, Madhu comfortably resting on abhays lap and slowly leans on his chest.

'isn't she beautiful?' abhay whispered. 'she is so grown up now.'

'time flies by.' Madhu mumbled. She puts the photo back amongst many other, leaning back in her husbands comforts. 'do you remember when I first time I told you I am pregnant and mom thought it was to early!' Madhu laughed. Kissing abhays jaw line slowly. 'and you ... Your face when the our baby was first time delivered...'

'I wanted to be the first one to hold!' abhay proudly claimed.

'our love, our baby..'

Madhu hugged abhay tighter, remembering each and every sweet moments of there life.

Abhay slowly gave Madhu showers of kiss without her permission, making her tremble to lose her self again and again, before they knew... They were making love on the rocking chair...

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~Ajeeb Dasta~

~PART - 24~





RK restlessly moved one side of the bed to another... The tension were building up in his mind slowly, and suddenly, yet slowly the realization of never finding Madhu was driving him mad. It has been a day of failure. He never in life felt this restless, let alone helpless beyond point. A feeling of he being so poor gave out a new feeling. Money did not worth anything in his life. Money, glamourous life, or to be precise the title RK was nothing in front of Madhu. He was truly a lost bird under the vast open sky, where he blindly looking for his final destination. Madhu. Madhu provoked his mind in such depth that nothing els mattered. Nothing els bothered him. 'I love you Madhu... I love you... Please please please come back!' he whispered while looking at the ceiling.

The Sleeping was surly not in his card tonight. He sat up and walked into the kitchen for something to eat.

'now now, RK... When have your tasteless mouth started to fall for the pointless food?' RK looked at the clock.. 2 am! Some odd reason his heart started to thump rapidly, there were no answer or explanation however the name Madhu kept reminding him of something... Not that it ever left his head, but the name and her warm feeling... The smell it was more wake than before.

RK knew, if soon he does not find this girl, he sure to destined to be in a mental hospital. He smiled at his own thought. 'when have you learned to insult your self like that RK?' RK laughed while taking a milk bottle out of the fridge, drinking.

He sat down in front of telly to waste time, drifting in to sleep...

...

Madhu woke up on her bed, raped warmly in abhays arm. She kissed him softly before slowly slipping way. He seemed tired, and now it was her turn to get the kids ready for school. She smiled at his deep sleep, maybe in her absence he never get that... He deserves the sleep.

Madhu woke Roy up first, picking him up, than slowly gave the sleepy boy a shower. Who was complaining each and every second.

'oh mama, why do you give us a shower early morning!! Dad tell us to have it after school!' he pulled a face. Trying to wake him self up from the sleep.

'I will tell papa off. Because morning shower always helps anyone to concentrate during the day!' Madhu pulled a face while putting shampoo on his head. Roy wasn't happy, he wanted his dad...

'mummmyyy!' Roy moaned.

Madhu ignored, laughing at his ancient! 'you are carbon copy of your dad Roy! Try to be more like your mum!'

'I love dad!' he sweetly mumbles.

'and what about mum?' Madhu looks at him with little announce.

'but you always leave us!' he whispers...


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~Ajeeb Dasta~

~PART - 25~





Madhu froze with his words, with a realization, she was missing her kids... She was missing in contribution to look after them. She was missing and failing to be a mother.

'that's not true at all. I am here now!'

'but you will leave again in few weeks & ... & you have missed my parents evening. The teacher were wondering where were you... And than dad said you were off somewhere!'

A pain hit Madhus heart like a throbbing needles. She was indeed missing so much, she is so busy that her life barely reviles around her kids and husband... But aren't they are the main reason for her being absent from there life.

Madhu half smiled and covered Roy with towel, rapping him warm. Madhu changed Roy, putting all his school cloths than called Jearsy to get ready. Breakfast was ready. Abhay was still sleep, she didn't feel like disturbing him.

She feed both of there kids and Securely placed them in the car, putting the belt on.

'you dropping us today mum?' Madhu looked at Jearsy who was indeed in delight. Her one smile was enough for her to make her day.

'I will be dropping you everyday from now on!' Madhu wasn't sure why she mumbled that, however somewhere she knew its time to stop! She can not be absent from there life anymore. Every second kills her...

Madhu drove to school, mostly all the parents were surprised, even the teacher... In past few years, actually long as any patents can remember they have encountered Madhu only few time! Maybe less... Once!

One of Madhus school friend came by as the kids ran in to the school field with there prospective friends.

'Madhu?' kat mumbled, stating at her with big eyes. 'oh my god!''

Madhu smiled back, she looked lively, yet tiered in there eyes.
'you look so different... What happen? Where have you been? Even in my sons party, I only met abhay, where are you now days?'

Madhu sadly looked down. 'my jobs require me to be abroad! But I was thinking I should stop now!'

'of course, you want to be there for your children, you want to be there for them, abhay only can not complete or give mothers love... What's going on Madhu?'

Madhu of course couldn't disclose, a normal life that seems from far, it's no normal family. She have to risk her life in order to keep her family way from the danger.

'anyway,' Madhu tried to keep everything short. 'I have to go. Abhay is home & than he also have to go to office. I have to run. I will ring you later!' Madhu smiled before disappearing.




She was indeed in worry, little annoyed the fact how much she have missed Through out this years...

...

Her car stopped at the traffic light, in her luck, on the other side of the road laid RK's car. They barely noticed one another but Madhu, she can presence abhay anywhere, she instantly thought it was abhay, but seeing a completely different car skipped Madhus heartbeat, and of course it could no one be other than RK.

Madhu picked her phone up, to make sure abhay was home and it wasn't him...

'hello baby...' Madhu spoke while looking at RK, on the traffic cross road.
'hunny, have you dropped the kids?'
'yes baby... I am looking at RK at the moment!' Madhu mumbled over the phone as the traffic light turned from red To green without realization of Madhu but that soon broke when few car started to beep... And at the same time RK looked as he drove pass at the opposite road.

His heart stopped beating instantly... He was truly staring at Madhu. He screamed at the driver, 'stop... Stop... Stop...' without a second thought. The car annoyingly started to beep behind him, seeing Madhus car disappears skipped his several heartbeats.

On the other hand as Madhu drove from one side of the road to the other half, she quickly looked back, and seeing RK run like a lunatic feared her what if he meta an accident! Madhu stopes her car on the pavements... Explaining everything to abhay over the phone.

'he is mad! He is walking over the road like a lunatic!' Madhu complained.
Abhay worriedly listen to her. 'bring him home!'

Madhu walked out, staring at RK as he ran across the road towards her...

RK couldn't explain what was he doing. Everything happened in matter of second that it took time for him to realize that Madhu was there, standing right in front of him...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Happy Eid Mubarak 😊
Can't believe it I m the first one to comment...
lovely updates ...
so now we will see the meeting with the twin brother 😉or with the Bhabi ya woh ...lol
you stopped it at the crucial point ...hope to get more
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Originally posted by: Dilsay

Happy Eid Mubarak 😊
Can't believe it I m the first one to comment...
lovely updates ...
so now we will see the meeting with the twin brother 😉or with the Bhabi ya woh ...lol
you stopped it at the crucial point ...hope to get more



hehe thank you..
i am glad u enjoying it
and hopefully u will love it in near future 2.. :D
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Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE



hehe thank you..
i am glad u enjoying it
and hopefully u will love it in near future 2.. :D
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Read Mahsoos ...
mind blowing ...simply AWESOME
i AM SO HAPPY that u have descided to continue the FF...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dilsay

Read Mahsoos ...

mind blowing ...simply AWESOME
i AM SO HAPPY that u have descided to continue the FF...



i am glad you enjoying it.. there are so much to tell..
i hope i can bring out the mahsoos all over again..

anyway how is this ff going?
is it any good..
bcs maybe after 20 parts the emotional bit will start... and thats when the story will really start...
is it really annoying to read abhay bit?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE



i am glad you enjoying it.. there are so much to tell..
i hope i can bring out the mahsoos all over again..

anyway how is this ff going?
is it any good..
bcs maybe after 20 parts the emotional bit will start... and thats when the story will really start...
is it really annoying to read abhay bit?
xx

I am throughly enjoying reading the Janoon of RK for Madhubla ... ofcourse the making out part of Madhu and Abhay is pretty annoying
You have already build up the plot with the flow I can see more drama and lot of emotional tussel is coming up...
quite deligently following your updates as usual lol😉
hope to see the seduction part soon in this FF😉😳

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