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Posted: 12 years ago

~Ajeeb Dasta~

~PART - 18~







'do you know Madhu... I always wanted to tell you... You... You make me feel different!' Madhu froze with little surprise tone... She mumbled... Than looked right back at his brown eyes...
'w..h...a...t...'

'I don't know what I feel... But... It's sweet... It's believable... It's...'

Madhu pushed RK way without any delay as she could observe the seriousness on his face... She looked down and than around the party... Mostly all were lost in there own little world...

RK looked back at Madhu with little surprise and her shocking face. The light slowly started to disrepair along with Madhu over the stair case...

RK spines around, wondering did he say something wrong? He just want to share his feeling... Nothing els...

After one hour, as the party seemed to calm down... RK walked up to Madhu's room to confirm his words...

RK slowly knocks but there were no answer... He knocks few time, still no answer, he slowly pushes the door, the room was empty... His heart was still calm, unable to think outside of the box. He just wanted talk about his feeling. Nothing else.. Nothing more...

He was about to turn around to leave however than he realized that the room was too empty. He looked on the bed, the black sari neatly folded on the bed, left alone... Her luggage was not there... Was she gone?

A panic suddenly without realization smacked RK's face. In worry he rushed in to the room opening the cupboard, it was empty. Was she truly gone?

RK rushed downstairs, asking the guards...
'where is Madhu?' he in panic questioned, out of breath... His eyes restlessly looked here and there around the gate... Maybe a glimpse...
'she left about an hour ago sir!' the guard with little worry tone replied back...
'WHAT? WHY DIDN'T YOU CALL ME?' RK screamed at the guards...
In fear guard took few step back... Breathing heavily in fear.
'sorry sir... I thought you all new!'

RK spines around, brushing his hair back...

...
RK restlessly rang the CIA, however, they simply refuge to give any details. He knew it was pointless to call them for Madhu's information, however, he have to, he was in love, madly in love with Madhu. RK burst his hair back in frustration... 'Madhu... Where are you? Please call... If you have any feeling for me please...'

RK restlessly spines his phone, wondering what to do. Bittuji on the other hand looked at his chif in worry manner.

'if this worry you that much, why don't you go to England! We know roughly where she lives! Right!'

'what rubbish?' RK snaps. Do you know how big is England? Where would I look for her?'

'I remember she was talking over the phone once mentioning one of the area in London. Now there can not be more than one area with the same name and that to in London!'
RK looked at bittuji with little thoughtfully face. 'ok... Book my ticket bittuji!'

His restless act was simply unbearable, radaji, along with all the house member looked at him...





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Posted: 12 years ago

~Ajeeb Dasta~

~PART - 19~






Madhu smiled at seeing her dark brown door, gosh it has been long. 'oh I missed my house so much...' she came by, kissing the door... Oh baby... Back home...

'If you missed home this much what took you long?' the man showed a false angry face. Madhu looked back at his gentle sweet face...
'are you doubting my love for you all?' Madhu simply questioned.
The man smile... With a reply 'I could never...'

'there is a surprise for you...'
'hmm...' Madhu looked sideways at him... 'acca... And what is that... I want all the mess to be cleared... Soon as possible!' she looks back at him with a false angry eyes...

Soon as Madhu touched the door, it flew open with two crazy kids... Screaming as they threw bunc of popper on Madhu and the man who stood at the door step with her luggage...

Both closed there eyes, in anticipation what els will hit there face... Madhu suppressed her whole body on the person who stood behind her, while he securely engulfed her in his hug in protective manner...

Than came the big blow as trishna popped a massive popper on her face...

'ypiii... At last you are back...'

'MUMIII...' the 2 kids screamed... Madhu slowly opens her eyes, tears instantly build up by seeing her two angel... Jearsy and Roy... Her two kids. Jearsy, her 8 years old daughter and her 6 years old son... Roy... Both was reflection of Madhu and abhay...

'welcome back baby...' abhay, kissed Madhu from the back, resting his one hand on her waist and another held her luggage to enter the house.


Madhu looked at abya: Abhay, a perfect reflection of RK. A perfect mirror image of RK. Madhu was surprised enough to encounter RK on there fast day back at that party... For a moment she really thought it was her husband... But his arrogant and rude words made her realize... No.. No one could be her abhay...
'I love you...' she kissed his cheek, before talking her both child in her arm. They came by hugging her tight...'

'oh mama I missed you so much. I love you... I love you... I love you...' Jearsy her eldest daughter kissed Madhu on the face madly, while Roy, who looked like his dad gave her one kiss.

'I am angry with you..' Roy angrily spoke through his 1 less front teeth.

'meri baby lost teeth?' Madhu held his small face, 'now open your mouth?'
'awww...' roy opens his mouth wide to show his gap. 'tooth fairy gave me 2 pound!' he proudly claimed.

Abhay laughed... While trishna sat at the corner with her hubby.

'kunzoos...' Madhu looked back at her husband while picking her angel up. Roy spines his hand around Madhus neck, loving his mummy. 'couldn't you pay my son little more?' abhay looked at Madhus mischievous complaining face.

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Posted: 12 years ago

~Ajeeb Dasta~

~PART - 20~







Roy distracts, 'but it was tooth fairy... Not pappa!' he cutely looked at his momma...

'I know beta..' Madhu spoke while walking in to the dinning room, 'but tooth fairy requires permission before entering our house and ask how much she should put under the pillow... And do you know why they should ask momma and pappa first?' Madhu questioned.

'because pappa and mamma knows what's best for us!' he happily smiled, while giving a small peck on Madhus lips.

Jearsy came by, hugging his DAd. 'have you brought me everything? I have to show it to my friends. Some traditional Indian gifts...'

Madhu looked at abhay with rolling eyes. 'at-least let mama rest.' abhay tells his daughter. Your mum just came!

Jearsy keeps quit, smiling sadly... Madhu came by, brushing her hair gently back, '2moro morning. Promise...'

Trishna came by to hug than her hubby to shake hand.

'All the foods are done, all the cleaning, everything... And now.. You four enjoy, I will see you 2moro..'

Abhay walked upstairs with Madhu's luggage, while Madhu fed Roy & Jearsy... After they went to bed, Madhu slowly slipped in her warmth bath, relaxed from the 9 hours flight. Abhay came in with the warm candle smell... She looked up at him, picking her wet hand out, to hold his...

Abhay wore a sleeveless top and night tracks, his strong muscle gave his bicep a shape,... He sat on his knee next to the bathtub, stroking Madhu's cheat under water, than her shoulder...

'was it tiring?'' he came forward and kissed her forehead...
'everything disappears and calms down... Soon as I see you...' Madhu mumbles while lost in his handsome face...
'have you asked mum about RK? What did she say?'
'she thought my twin brother was dead!' abhay smiles...
'he looks like you but that's it...' Madhu brings her naked body up from the water, holding abhay by his neck... 'because you are my only abhay...' she suppressed her lips on his, sucking the tongue out... 'oh abhay... I have missed you so much...'

A tear rolled down Madhu's eyes... Abhay looked back, stroking it way... 'I could never see a single tear on your eyes...' he kissed both before helping Madhu to clean her self, warping her around a towel and than carried her to there bedroom.

She cuddled her self up against his body, unable to let go...
She roughly dried her hair before dragging abhay to the bed, kissing him hungrily and abhay replying the taste with equal pressure...

'leave this job..' he eventually spoke between his breath... His hand slowly came up, stroking the wet hair way from her face. 'I need you... Our kids needs you...' he looked back at Madhu's worry eyes... He knew well why she couldn't, but abhay had no regret...

Madhu came by, stroking his face, 'I can't risk that. What if yash hurts you?... He shot RK, thinking it was you... He may be lucky, but I can't take that luck chance with you...' Madhu suppressed her lips again against his lips. 'I will die...'

'shh...' abhay picks Madhu's naked body, covering with a warm duvet. 'no... I always pray to god... That he should take me before you...'

Madhu instantly covers his lips. The word "lost" itself brought Madhu in to a living hell. Her heart started to beat in random motion and she always fails to control as it travels down her eyes as tears.

'I love you abhay... & this love have greater meaning than a simple words...' she looked back at her husband, he still posses the same young face when she met him 11 years back... And for 11 years her heart only throbs for his presence, his love... His demand...



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Posted: 12 years ago

~Ajeeb Dasta~

~PART - 21~







'let's forget everything and enjoy our life like never before...' Madhu smiled, suppressing her back against the pillow while abhay slowly crawls his way up with his lips, from her gentle stomach to her curves... Than to her soft neck to the delicious lips...

Abhays hand twisted in-between her bony finger, smothering his smell, stroking lovingly as they made love after almost a month...

'I missed you so much...' Madhu mumbled as they rocked in rhythms...

'so have I...'

...

RK opened his eyes slowly to see England's miserable days... 'gosh England!' he annoyingly face ways under his blanket imagining Madhu... 'when will she be here?' he mumbles... 'my morning comes with your good morning and your sweet face and the night disappears in your arm...'

He looked up, frustrated yet feeling a welcome warmness. His lazy mind wanted to dream about sweet Madhu, sweet lips, those curly hair... Playing in-between his finger... When that will happen?

RK sat up, when bittuji walks in. 'any news?' RK questioned.

'no chief! I - am trying to locate, I have send people to examine tall the roads, there are about 70 odd roads in that area... it will take few days... Meantime why don't you look around London, maybe you are lucky enough to encounter her, as she is in holiday!'

'do you really think, bittuji, I will met her in London?' RK annoyingly rolled his eyes and stood up to walk in to the bathroom...

His 20 million pounds flat gave a view of the river themes along with London eye. He looked at it, and endless building... Laughing mockingly... 'great! Blind goose chase!'

...

Abhay plaid with Madhu's curly hair, as they laid comfortably under there thick white duvet, cuddled up in one another's arm...
'I could never get board with your curly hair...' abhay mumbled as he looked down... 'gosh you are so beautiful...'
Madhu instantly opens her eyes, remembering how RK had said in past... She smiled, thinking, identical twins yet so different... Her abhay had so much maturity and only behaves like a kid with her and there RK... She can compare him to Jearsy and Roy...

He pushed her naked body up, kissing abhays neck, and strolled down his chest than back at his lips... Abhay enjoyed the flow than grabbed her by hair, bringing her up to make love again...

...

Madhu and abhay took long shower, after than made breakfast, there both kids ran down, fighting while Jearsy trying to act all grown up.


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Posted: 12 years ago

~Ajeeb Dasta~

~PART - 22~







'mama, look, Roy is trying to steal my makeup. Don't he understand he requires shaving machine not lipstick!' she pushed her hair back with little anyonece...

'mum... Tell Jearsy to give me the lipstick!' he pulled a face...

Madhu puts an omelet on both of there plate and than at abhays... Looking at him annoyingly. 'that's what you were teaching our kids?'

'I have tried!' he looks at roy, his half face covered in lipstick. 'and I did not teach that! That's why I tell you we should have another boy at least Roy will show his boyness!' he laughed.

'that's not a solution abhay! You can't even look after this two...' she walked in to the kitchen while complaining... ''

Abhay left there two kids eating than he flowed Madhu... 'it is the solution!' he hugged Madhu from the back...kissing her cheek gently... 'that means 2 years... You are not moving way from my eyes!'

'no!' Madhu snaps, shyly looking down.. 'we are not having another kid!'

'and why?'

'because you my-husband, never take the responsibility!'

'oh look who is talking!' abhay suppressed his body more over Madhu... 'who is been looking after our kids for past month?'

'pata hi...' she elbowed abhay.. Mum called me that how much you have disturbed them and malik... Trishna... You even called lolo...'

'have they been complaining to you?' he scratched his head... 'I only gave them to mum when I went to work!... That's just a lye!' abhay complained.

Madhu giggled... While giving two toast to the kids.

'mumy I can't eat this much!'

'shh! Look how much weight you have lost! Have you seen kids at your age... They are so fat!'

'good na!' abhay distracts... 'we don't want fat kids... What like our next door neighbor, who requires wheelchair to move!'

Jearsy and abhay gave one another high five... Remembering how fat is there next door neighbor is!

Madhu spines around, pointing a spoon at abhay... 'shh!... You remind me of that RK now. And I was so proud that my husband is so different!'

'what can I do? After all we are twin!'

Abhay's laughter disappeared as soon the reality smacked him, that his brother is alive, a super super star... He was truly alive! How he didn't know?


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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg huge shock.
She have 2 kids one 6 another 7 omg...
Geet is only 27...
And she and her husband together for 11 years

Omg omg very shocking twist
And they are twin

Omg poor RK I can't imagine him when he finds everything out.

Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Mind blowing ...

I will just say zor ka jhatka haye zoron say laga ...
omg what a jhatka twist ...
Madhu is the mother of 2 kids and very much in love with her husband...
Abb what RK will do ...
Edited by Dilsay - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
triple jhatka !!
madhu married...two kids...rk's twin = her hubby !!! :O :O
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg cant wait for next update !
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Posted: 12 years ago
FIRESafiReFIRE great FF! Please keep updating more!


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