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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
will give you some picky info..

angad and kripa


shabd and mahi



thats prem

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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
you finally introduced Angad and prem...loved their entry. can't wait to see who Prem is exactly. I also liked the little character traits you gave shabd. I am a huge Shabd and Mahi fan. I am curious to see how there story plays. eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Thanks
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow... hook... now im just DYING to know more of the story!

continue soon =D
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank you guys...next part wil be up tonite... hopefully...hehe 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART EIGHT



"are ye prem kaun hai bhai??? aur usne kripa ko kyoun le gaya?? woh bhi kaha???", angad was lost in thoughts....after a few minutes, however his thoughts changed..."wo gayi...muje kya farq padtha hai... kisi ke bhi saath jaaye...mujhe kya...hmmpphh... kitne saal ke baad aaj dekhi dhi usko aur me bhi kitna buddhu hoon. pehli mulaaqat me hi usse rootha... what the heck??? kyoun me baar baar uske baare me sochta hoon???"...
angad took leave for the day and headed home. there everyone was quite excited to see him. but everyone was rather dissappointed not to see kripa with him since he had gone to office. he then told her she went out with someone, purposefully avoiding telling them that she was hurt. he soon became the same way with mahi as he used to be with her in childhood. he loved mahi just like he loved shabd.after a few hours mahi and angad were sitting in the couch on the sitting room joking and laughing wen the door bell rang. mahi went to open the door and kripa hobbled in with the help of prem.
"KRIPA!!! ye kya hua tumhe???,"mahi was quite shocked to see kripa in such a way that she forgot to notice prem. she started fussing over kripa asking her wat hapend and how she was hurt. kripa just smiled and went and sat on a spare couch keeping maximum possible distance from angad.

mahi's yell brought all the others downstairs. they all startd fussing over kripa. kripa was calmly saying over and over again.. "muje kuch nahi hua hai...bas stairs me gir gayi thi. woh bhi is silly heels ke wajah se. aap log itne pareshan math huiye...muje kuch nahi hua hai. doctor ne bhi yahi kaha hai. poocho prem se.."

only then people noticed prem standing there. mahi squealed and ran to him and hugged him.
mahi: prem!!! sorry yaar...is kripa ki pareshani me tuje dekhi hi nahi.

prem: its okay mahi...muje pata hai tum apni behn ko kitni pyaar karti ho. is mamle me tujhe maaf kar diya. agli baar aisa kuch hua toh teri chotti kheenchoonga me.

mahi{pinching her ears}: na baaba na!!! aage se galti nahi hongi...

suryaban: aao beta...bait jaao. ab tum kya kar rahe ho? kitne mahine ke baad mil rahe hai. aur woh bhi aise...

prem: jee uncle.. me bas apne papa ko help kar raha hoon. juneja hotels ke managing director hoon. papa ne mere aur mere do bhaiyon ke naam kiya hai hotel. toh me use chala raha hoon kyounki mere dono bhai pad rahe hai.

dilip: arre!!! juneja hotel ke malik bhaite hain humare saamne?? vishwas hi nahi ho raha. itni kam umr me itni zimmedari ka kaam. kamal hai!!! mere toh dono bete administration ke mamle me bilkul buddhu hai.

kripa and mahi started guffawing and angad looked angrily at them and then at his dad.

prem: angad ko abhi tak tv me hi dekha dha...aaj kripa ki wajah se nse mulaqat bhi ho gaya.
prem went to angad and held out his hand. angad thought for a while. he still hadnt forgiven prem for taking away kripa. but both shook hands and exchanged a small talk. angad thought prem was the kind of model son anyone would expect. far different from angad that is...hehe!!

gayatri: prem...tumne bataaya nahi tumhare bhai kya pad rahe hai?

prem: aunty jee dono MBA kar rahe hai. kripa aur mahi se bhi bade hai. final year hai dono ki.

gayatri: achcha!

prem talked for sometime and then got up to leave. while leaving he went over to kripa and gave a small hug to her and told "get well soon."

kripa: prem, barso tho sunday haina. kya plan hai???

prem: abhi tak toh koi plan nahi. chahe toh bana sakthe hai.

kripa: theek hai. hum sochke bataayenge.

prem: okay then bye

kripa, mahi: bye bye. c ya soon!!!

mahi helped kripa into her room. mahi sat with kripa for sometym then left. after a few minutes kripa slept off. at that moment angad crept into her room with intention to talk. he always badgered into anyones room just like that without even knocking. his idea was if anyone wanted privacy they would lock their door. seeing kripa sleeping, he left the room all dissappointed.
that evening shabd made a complete fuss over kripa and was helping her around. he dint let mahi touch kripa at all.

after dinner, all were sitting together in the family room. naina called to mahi, "mahi beta...kripa ne toh kaam shuru kar diya. tumhari kya plan hai??? kya karna chathi ho??"

mahi: pata nahi mummy jee... me toh kaafi confused hoon.

kripa: me batathi hoon mummy jee. ise modelling achchi lagthi hai.

mahi: haan...achchi lagthi toh hai. par...i dont have an experience in this field and it would be difficult to get a platform.

dilip: humare ghar me ek kaafi achchi aur mashoor fashion photographer hain. aakhir wo kiske kaam aayenge agar woh humari mahi betiya ki madat na kare toh?

angad and kripa giggled, then looked at each other and suddenly looked away. shabd who had been too busy with a magazine, suddenly looked up wen he felt evryone's eyes on him.

shabd: kya hai??? aap log muje aise kyoun dekh rahe hai??? playgirl magazine nahi hai. bas filmfare hai. sachchi!!!

everyone laughed at this. then naina talked again.

naina: hum mahi ke liye kuch kaam ke baat kar rahe the aur kripa keh rahi thi ki mahi ko modelling me dilchaspi hai. kya tum uski madat karoge?

shabd: haan...kya??? woh...main... umm... haan...help karoonga... hey come to think of it. aaj ke meeting me sab log nayi model ko dhoondne ki baat kar rahe the. suhani ko UK me ek saal ki contract mili hai aur woh jaa rahi hai. mahi could easily replace suhani.

dilip: ye bahut achcha hua. kal se mahi ko leke jaana kaam pe. isi bahane kaam pe toh jaayega humara beta.

shabd: dad!!!

everyone laughed again. shabd again went back to his magazine and was in his own world again. just then gayatri nudged naina who nodded knowingly and showed her hands as to wait. suryaban and dilip nervously nodded to each other.

suryaban to angad: angad beta... tumse ek baat poochu?

angad: jee papa... boliye... aapko mujhse kuch bhi poonchne ke liye permission ki zaroorat nahi hai na...

suryaban: pata hai beta...par...ye tumhara presonel matter hai...

angad: gharwalo se koi personel baat nahi rakhti... aapko jo poochna hai poochiye

suryaban: tumhara koi girlfriend hai kya?

angad, quite surprised: well...papa... mera tha ek...mishty... par humare beech daraar ho gaye. we broke up long back. mera is maamle me koi interest nahi hai shabd ke jaisa..

on hearing his name being mentioned, shabd again looked up from his magazine.
shabd: meri buraayi ke kahani chal rahi hai kya???

everyone laughed again.

angad: nahi mere bhai...tum apne kaam karo... agar kisi ne tumhari buraayi ki to me uske taange thod doonga.

shabd: u rock bhai!!!
and again he went back to his book.

suryaban: achcha beta... toh hum sab tumhare liye aur kripa ke liye kuch soch ke rakha hai. tum dono mana toh nahi karenge na? hum tumhare bhalayi aur khushi ke liye kar rahe hai

kripa: jee papa bataayiye...aap logo ki khushi ke liye me kuch bhi karoongi.

angad: me bhi

naina: achcha hoga is gehri dosti rishtedaari me badal jaate hai toh

angad: me kuch samjha nahi

gayatri: hum log tumhare aur kripa ke shaadi ke baare me baat kar rahe hai...

both angad and kripa stood up.
kripa: ANGAD KE SAATH???

angad: KRIPA KE SAATH???

mahi and shabd together: SHAADI???

both angad and kripa: NO WAY!!!!!





DO COMMENT GUYS....
Edited by giggling gurl - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
this is soo funny, I loved this part..I am really excited to see what happens between Mahi and Shabd. Mahi's gonna be shabd's model. and Prem sounds like a really nice charater too..I cant wait to see what happens in this triangle. please update soon..waiting...thanks
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Posted: 17 years ago
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double treat for you...

PART NINE


after half an hour of talking and advising from the parents part, both angad and kripa agreed to get engaged. they were ready to do anythng for their families happiness and all of them were very very elated to hear that they were ready for the marriage. angad had a little liking towards kripa and so did kripa. shabd and mahi were in heaven with happiness.

shabd: mujhe lagta hai ke, in dono ke sagai barso hi kar deni chahiye. warna phir se raay badlenge.

naina laughed: shabd!!! barso??? kal kyoun nahi?

shabd: kal...naaa!!! shopping toh karni hai annd i have to call my friends and the press. aakhir angad the rockstar ka sagaai hai.

mahi: bilkul bilkul...pehli baar muje shabd ke kehne se sehmathi hui hai,,,

angad: haan haan sab log taali bajao

mahi: angad!!!! muje pata hai ke shaadi ke baad sab mard kadoos hothe hai. par yaha sagai bhi nahi hui hai...

everyone started laughing. angad turned red in embarassment.

angad: teri toh...
and he started chasing mahi...both of them left the room and dint come back for a long time. by the time they came back, it was planned.
tomorrow suryaban and gayatri wil do the necessary shopping and the others wil do their shopping. naina wil arrange the house decorations and other things and dilip wil give a press conference.everyone went to bed after the long discussion. both angad and kripa had a sleepless night.

kripa's thoughts...
ye kya ho raha hai mere saath??? sagaai itni jaldi??? woh bhi angad ke saath??? i dont knw... kya me ye chahthi hoon??? kya me ye nahi chahthi hoon??? kya me usse sachchi me pyaar karti hoon??? pata nahi... muje kuch samaj me nahi aa rahi... kya isse me khush reh paaungi??? muje nahi pata... muje itna pata hai ki sab log mere wajah se khush hai aur unki khushi hi meri khushi hain.


Angad's thoughts...
aakhir ye kya hua??? kripa??? kya woh hi meri life partner hai??? is this wat God has destined for me??? itna sab hua hai...muje use apnana hoga...

both smiled to see a little love spring in both of them. they turned over and slept.

next morning, everyone went for shopping. angad, shabd, kripa and mahi together went to the mall. in a few hours, angad and shabd had their shopping done. angad took a black suit with slightly translucent
material black shirt, new black shoes. he left out the tie due to shabd's request. shabd meanwhile got himself deep blue trousers and deep red shirt. they went around to find the girls and saw that mahi and kripa were confused in tAking kripa's dress. they first did mahi's shopping{kripa did the shopping for mahi coz she was confused as always}. mahi had bought a light yellow and blue lehenga...

it was kripa's dress that took most time.
mahi: dekho na angad... meri dress toh jaldi se select kar li... khud ke shopping nahi kar paa rahi...

angad: woh toh me dekh hi raha hoon

mahi: dekhte hi rahoge ya kuch madat bhi karoge??

shabd: me madat karu???

mahi: plz no!!! angad ko karne do

shabd: whatever!

angad smiled and went over and took out a light pink lehenga with Full silver works. mahi and shabd looked at the dress with so much awe that their mouth was open.

mahi: wow!!! its soo beautiful

shabd: waah bhai waah...tera taste toh kamaal ka hai...

angad gave the dress to kripa who looked at it and smiled and then at angad. both had a moment in heaven looking at each other. they did the ornament shopping pretty faster and headed home by almost 9pm.till then the house had been ceremoniously decorated for the grand function. flowers and candles and curtains were all done. the function was next day evening.everything went on well....angad and kripa were getting happier for their engagement. soon the time arrived.

the engagement...

the guests had startd arriving. shabd was all ready. he and dilip went to the entrance to recieve the guests. after sometime suryaban came and took over shabd's position. shabd went around checking if everybody was comfortable and giving out drinks. he found his friends in a corner and went to chat with them. after sometime one of his friends looked towards the stairs and said "hey guys...woh dekho!!!"
everybody looked in the direction he was pointing and heaved a breath. shabd was almost lost in his world. it was mahi coming down in her beautiful yellow and blue lehenga... she was looking absolutely stunning for words.
his friends startd badgering him that shabd had to come out of his trance.

"hey shabd...kaun hai woh??"

"shabd bata na...who is she???"

"man!!! so damn sexy....where did she come from???"

to all this shabd just smiled... and said..."meri ladki hai...she is my girl." after saying that he left his friends and went over to mahi.

shabd: mahi!!! looking absolutely stunning

mahi: thanx shabd!! tum bhi bure nahi ho

shabd: oh thank you miss...now we wil go do our work.

they both went to do their own works and after sometime, angad got down to an applause. he looked handsomest in the room in his black n black combination. in a few minutes kripa was bought down by mahi. her entry made "oooohs" and "aaahs" throughout the room.
angad just kept on looking at her till she had reached him. she was gorgeous than ever in her pink lehenga.

they exchanged rings and had taken photos. it was starting to get pretty boring when somebody said "arre angad ke sagaai hai...koi gaana waana nahi hoga kya???"
naina came upto angad and kripa and said, "tum dono ek gana gao."

kripa: mummy jee...gana...abhi???

angad just shusshhed her. he pointed at the middle of the room were shabd was standing.

shabd: attention everyone.!!! aaj mere bhai ke sagaai par me ek gaana gaana chahtha hoon. {applause}

he started off with "mahi ve " of kal ho na ho...kripa started singing with shabd in between and danced around with him.


Maahi Ve Maahi Ve That' s The Way Maahi Ve
Tere Maathe Jhumar Damke
Tere Kannno Baali Chamke Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Tere Haatho Kangana Khanke
Tere Pairo Payal Chance Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Naino Se Bole Rabba Rabba
Mann Mein Dole Rabba Rabba
Amrut Ghole Rabba Rabba
Tu Soniye
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

That' s The Way Maahi Ve
O Tere Aankhen Kali Kali
Tera Gora Gora Mukhdha Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Tere Rangat Jaise Sona
Tu Chaand Ka Tukda Hai Re Maahi Ve
Tere Gaal Gulabi Rabba Rabba
Chal Sharabi Rabba Rabba
Dil Ki Kharabi Rabba Rabba
Tu Soniye
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Barse Rangini Kaliyan Hai Mehki Bhini Bhini
Baje Mann Mein Halke Halke Shehnaiya Re
Jitne Hai Tare Aanchal Mein Aa Gaya Sare
Dil Ne Jaise Hi Li Angadayee Re
Tu Jo Aayee Sajhke Mehndi Rajke
Chal Bajke Oh Soniye
Dil Kit No Ka Khaye Dhajke Oh Soniye
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Chanhda Meri Chanda Tujhe Kaise Mein Yeh Samjhaoon
{gayatri

joined in}
Mujhe Lagti Hai Tu Kitni Pyaari Re
Khusiyan Jitni Hai Sab Jitni Hai Sab Dhoondh Ke Laoon
Teri Doli Ke Sang Kar Do Sari Re
Tu Jo Aayee Sajhke Mehndi Rajke
Chal Bajke Oh Soniye
Dil Kit No Ka Khaye Dhajke Oh Soniye
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Tere Maathe Jhumar Damke
Tere Kannno Baali Chamke Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Tere Haatho Kangana Khanke
Tere Pairo Payal Chance Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Naino Se Bole Rabba Rabba
Mann Mein Dole Rabba Rabba
Amrut Ghole Rabba Rabba
Tu Soniye

Jind Maahi Ve Jind Maahi Ve Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi

Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve



angad just kept on looking at kripa who was swaying and dancing to the song with the others. he was lost in her. he wanted her. now he knew....that he loved her. he smiled and joined the dance.



next day however it was news in all the papers that angad got engaged. now only one question stood. WHEN IS THE MARRIAGE??? it was all over that kripa, angad's fiancee was his new lead singer for the upcoming concerts. the story given was that they were childhood sweethearts and long since been in love. seeing all these news angad only had a smile. he dint care wat was true. all he knew was that he loved kripa now.

he went to see kripa. he found that she was in her room. he entered the room without making much sound. he saw her stand with her back at him talking over the phone.

" nahi muje kuch nahi sun ni... tum meri sagaai pe nahi aa sakte?? muje ye sab excuses dena band karo...... ohhh....ohhh...toh ye baat hai meri jaan...chalo theek hai,..maaf kiya!!!", then she started laughing over the phone. she then turned over to see angad. she was prettu shocked to see him in her room like that. she hung the phone.

angad: kaun tha???

kripa: tum muje question karne aaye ho/??

angad: mera haq banta hai.. i am ur fiancee

kripa: bas fiancee hi toh hai... prem tha

angad: oh prem!!! haan...i shud hav guesd. aur haan me tumhara mangetar hoon.

kripa: mangetar hona itni badi baat nahi hai. jaante ho sagaai kabhi hi thod sakthi hai.

angad: kripa ye tumne kaisi baat ki???

and he left the room all angry. he felt sure now something was up between kripa and prem. she wanted to break their engagement. for THAT PREM. how she had been laughing silly with him... he banged his room door and hit his hand on the table





to be contined....
do comment guys,,, next part coming up sooooooon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
woah... wat a twist in the plot... kripa all of a sudden kinda sounded mean.... =[ bue i guess we'll just have to see =D

continue soon =D
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
the story is getting very interesting.I cant wait to see whats gonna happen next..kripa did sound a bit mean...is she into Prem?? I also want to see what happens with shabd and Mahi. I like that Angad and Mahi have such a nice relationship. I cant wait to see Prem's younger brother..and whether he's gonna fall for mahi. please continue soon..waiting..thanks for updating
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
wow
superb FF 👏 👏
I've read 4 parts yet 😛 will read more parts laterrrr 😛
keep it up dear 👏
Edited by Vandu4ever - 17 years ago

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