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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwww......tht was one cute scene...let me guess...when kripa is gonna come there...shabd's gonna get confused..hehe...lols....and awwwwwwwww.......my prem bhayyu's entry...lols....am waiting yaaar....jaldi se unka entry karva doo......wow......sooon....kk..

luv nans
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART FIVE



"GOD!!! she is so sexy!!!", shabd thought.
"toh ye hai shabd... ye mujhe aise kyoun dekh rahe hai??? GOD!!! he is smiling at me...lagta hai use pata nahi ki hum yaha aa rahe hai.. aur ki me mahi hoon. pata chala hota tho abhi se abhi shuru kar diya hota ladayi... par ye bhi to ho sakta hai ki wo mature ho chuka hai. waise... dikhne me to bhure nahi hai...," mahi thought and smiled.

everybody stopped laughing and naina introduced shabd to everyone and told shabd," beta ye hai humare purane padosi aur sabse achche dost, suryaban aur gayatri sharma. tumhe to mahi zaroor yaad hoga!"

"DARN!!! ye mahi hai??? woh mahi jo mujhse har waqt ladthi rahthi dhi. haye bhagwaan...ye bahut khoobsoorath hai. aur lagta hai ki mujhe usse kaafi attraction ho gayi hai... ok shabd! aaj se ye ladaayi khatham....ladki to patana shuru!" shabd smiled wickedly.

suryaban and gayatri and mahi smiled at him. shabd went and took suryaban's and gayatri's blessings. he went and sat near mahi. mahi sensing trouble excused herself and went to the bathroom{where kripa alrdy is!}

she was almost near the door wen she bumped into kripa, who had washed and dried her dress. mahi was breathtaken. wen kripa asked wat hapend she said about shabd being there and wat hapend wen kripa wasnt there in the room. kripa smiled and nudged mahi teasingly. kripa left mahi in the bathroom and went over and sat next to shabd.

shabd was taken aback in seeing a new dress on mahi as he had forgotten about kripa. he felt smthng was different in the way she looked now. but he dint mind. she was looking awesm in the new look too.
he leaned over to kripa and murmured, ''arre ye kya hua? itni jaldi dress change kar li?? waise mahi...u looking hot in this one also".

kripa looked at him and gave her best smile.."waise jeeju..."
shabd got a shock and quickly remembered about kripa...his thoughts went back in flashback...

>>>>>>flashback<<<<<<< ;
child shabd, angad, mahi and kripa were playing. shabd and mahi fought over mahi's doll and mahi got angry and she ran away crying. angad and kripa sighed and then frowned at each other. angad got up and went after mahi.

kripa rounded on shabd and smiled at him..."tum bhi na shabd. humesha usse ladthe hi rehte ho"

shabd: i love irritating her. she looks so nice when she frowns...

kripa: tum dono aise ladthe ho jaise mamma papa ladthe hai.

shabd: kripa!!!

kripa: aisa lagta hai ki tum dono pati patni ho... toh me aaj se tumhe jeeju hi bhulayenge...

shabd: kripa! khabardaar jo tumne aisa bhulaya toh.

kripa: okay...i wil call you only in private. just wen we are together.

shabd: watever! bas mahi aur angad ke saamne kuch math bolna.

kripa: achcha baba theek hai!

they laughed and hugged.

>>>>>>>>>>>flashback ends<<<<<<<<


shabd was bewildered he forgot about kripa and dint recognize her first. he was completely humiliated. kripa was someone she always loved as a sister and both were together since childhood. he was more close to kripa than he was to angad during those days. now also he felt that affection towards her.

"pata hai woh compliment mere liye nahi the....but still jeeju...thanks a lot", kripa smiled at him widely.

shabd hissed back,"kripa!!!!! bas bhi karo abhi... i am completely embarassed"

kripa: why my dear??? tumhe mujhse kisi baat ki embarassment nahi honi chahiye. i am ur closest friend and jus like ur sister. kaafi saalo se baat nahi ki to iska matlab ye toh nahi hua ki wo sab badal gaye. aaj bhi hum aise hi hai jaise saalo pehle hote dhe.

shabd: shut up duffer. me uski baat nahi keh rahi hoon. i knw i need not be embarassed about anythng to you. aur ye embarassment meri us baat ke liye nahi. i am sad that i dint recognize u first of all.

kripa: its okay shabd. chodo bhi yaar. ab mujhe apna ghar nahi dikhaoge?

shabd: of course kripa.

they excused themselves and went to see the house.





how do you tnk it is??? plz do post in your replies!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
sorry for the short update!!!! wil update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nandini90

awwwwwwww......tht was one cute scene...let me guess...when kripa is gonna come there...shabd's gonna get confused..hehe...lols....and awwwwwwwww.......my prem bhayyu's entry...lols....am waiting yaaar....jaldi se unka entry karva doo......wow......sooon....kk..

luv nans



nan....if u dont stop guessin in public like this, its gona be realy difficult for me, ketto??
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
this update was small but sooo good, please update the next part soon, I think you should definitely have a confused Angad entry. update soon 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
kripa/shabd scene was cute... eagerly waiting for next part =D
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART SIX...


shabd showed kripa all around the house and showed his room. shabd's room was full of his photographic equipments and different photos of places he has visited and awards he has got for his brilliant photography. shabd's room was huge. it was the place he worked and relaxed. perfectly ordered and pretty well arranged, it dint show how much shabd liked to fool around. then shabd brought kripa to the room next to his. on reaching the door, shabd turned around and smiled stupidly at kripa. he opened the door to kripa's utter astonishment. the whole room was full of angad's huge pics and his musical instruments. it was almost as if angad wanted evrythng within his reach. he had his drums, his piano, violin, guitar and even his punching bag and treadmill in that room. angad's was huger than shabd's. there was an extension to angad's room where he kept his exercising and music stuff.
kripa was kind of dazed by the mess that met her eyes because in the case of arranging his room, angad seemed to be a bigger dunce than shabd. his shirts and jackets were strewn around almost everywhere as if he had a really bad time deciding which shirt to wear before he left.

they got out of the room pretty fast because kripa thought the more she looked at the room, the more complicated stuff became. the room was such an utter mess. almost how mahi would make hers. but there was a little difference there. mahi knew how to straighten her room after she made that mess.


the khannas and sharmas spent the day well enuff and while they were having their dinner angad called shabd.

shabd: angad! kaha ho tum yaar?? kitna der kartha hai. you have to see this. mom and dad has a surprise for you. what??? wat do you mean you cant make it for two days??? oh oh... chalo...mom se baat karo! i dont want to get scolding for your dumb excuse.

shabd: mom...angad hai. keh raha hai do din ke liye ghar nahi aa payenge.

naina talked to angad and she found out the same reason too. she kept the phone and explained to everyone that angad had gone for arranging the music for his next major album "kaisa ye pyaar hai" that he will hav to spend 2 days with the music director so that he gets exactly wat he needs.

kripa heaved a sigh of relief. mahi glared at her.


the next day, shabd took kripa to angad's studio. she was to start her practise for the album. naina and dilip convinced her well enuff to start rehearsing befor angad came so that she could do the next concert woth him. shabd introduced kripa to everyone in the office and also o shabbir, angad's best friend and manager of the company. shabbir was surprised that this was angad's childhood friend with whom angad used to spend most of his time fighting. shabbir gave kripa the cd's of the songs that angad had kept for the female lead of the show and made her comfortable.

shabd meanwile, left kripa in the studio and left for home where mahi was. this was time to start off with some work, shabd thought.
he found mahi in the hall reading a magazine.
he stealthily went upto her and picked her magazine from her hands.
mahi was shocked to see this kind of behavior. she had thought he might have matured after all these years. but apparantly he hadnt. since childhood he always used to take her things and run around with it making her run behind him. this time that wont happen, she thought, i wont run after him.

mahi: shabd, woh magazine mujhe de do.

shabd: no. nahi doonga.

mahi: shabd, maine kaha mere magazine mujhe wapas de do.

shabd: mahi, maine bhi kaha ki me nahi doonga.

mahi: magazine de do warna...

shabd: warna kya meri jaan?? tum kya karogi??

mahi leapt from her chair and tried to pull the magazine back from his hands. but shabd was too fast for her. he ran with it. mahi ran after him. hearing all the chaos naina came downstairs. shabd went and stood behind naina. mahi came was still trying to get back the book.

naina was bewildered for the two were covering her from moving anywhere. "ye kya ho raha hai??"

mahi: mummyji, dekhiye na. magazine nahi de rahe hai shabd.

just then shabd ran upstairs and mahi followed him leaving naina laughing. "abhi bhi bachche hai!"

shabd ran into his room, mahi at his heels. reaching shabd's bed both started pulling the book and at last shabd gave in. in the course, both lost balance and fell on shabd's bed. both of them were shocked for words to see both of em over one another.
at last shabd smiled. he got up from her and said, "hey u run kind of well. did u knw u jus outrun a district 800m champion??"

mahi smiled back at him, "no i didnt knw. all i knw is i kept my record of winning every running competition i hav attended."

shabd: wow mahi! awesome. we could really get along together, you knw.

mahi: shayad....{with a sad expression on her face}

shabd: shayad...??? woh kyoun??? we can be friends you see. do you mind being friends???

mahi: of course not shabd.

both shake hands and went downstair with a big smile on their faces.




two days went without much happenings other than naina and dilip convincing suryaban and gayatri to stay for a week more. they had planned something for the coming week. wen just the foursome were together, they talked over their great plan.

naina: kal angad aayega aur hum usse aur kripa se baat karenge. agle hafte hi dono ki sagaayi kar denge.

gayatri: lekin naina....angad...usko kisi se...

dilip: bhabhiji...hum jaante hai angad ko. woh hume zaroor ataayenge aisa kuch hai toh. hume nahi to maa se ya phir shabd se.

suryaban: theek hai. hum angad ke aane ke baad dono se saath me baath karenge aur un dono ki sagaayi karwake wapas jayenge.

all four of them smiled and suryaban and dilip hugged each other.




do comment guys...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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this story is just soo cute. This chapter was also very well written I loved the shabd and mahi scene. I cant wait till angad, prem and prem's younger brother make their entry. Is Prem's younger bro meant for mahi..i mean to further shabd's and mahi's relationship??? please update soon will be waiting for it. thanks
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sl032597

this story is just soo cute. This chapter was also very well written I loved the shabd and mahi scene. I cant wait till angad, prem and prem's younger brother make their entry. Is Prem's younger bro meant for mahi..i mean to further shabd's and mahi's relationship??? please update soon will be waiting for it. thanks



thanx...i am jus waiting for the right moment to bring the other charecters... angad's entry is crucial and so is prem and his brother....😃 wil update as soon as possible
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART SEVEN.......


the second day came without much ado and that very fine morning kripa was out in the studio rehearsing her songs. shabd had dropped her off at the studio and gone off for his work. shabd's work kind of was funny to mahi and kripa because he rarely goes for them. he just hangs around with them all the time. today however he had important stuff to do and he left immediatly after dropping kripa but she could see how he was whining over the fone just not to go for it. but he thought he would go after he saw kripa smirking at him.

back in the studio kripa had been in there for a couple of hours and she was quite used to sitting in the extension next to Angad Khanna's cabin. nobody told her not to or that Angad wouldnt like it because they all thought of kripa as angad's childhood sweetheart, she had every right in angad's stuff. even though angad had an open door policy, he dint like anyone using his cabin or prowling around in it or opening his drawers n stuff.

at that moment kripa was in her own world with the cd player plugged to her ears and her eyes closed, she was singing openly....

{its the song from jo jeeta wahi sikandar...pehla nasha...}

Chaahe tum kuchh na kaho maine sun liya
Ki saathi pyaar ka mujhe chun liya
Chun liya
Maine Sun liya... {just then someone came into the cabin. yes its our own angad...he is quite surprised to see someone in his cabin... someone very beautiful...he scolded himself for thinking so... then corrected his thoughts...someone with a very beautiful voice...she simply had to sing with him in this concert...he thought he wil stealthily listen to the whole song..}

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar{kripa opened her eyes...angad hid himself behind a cupboard from where he could see her clearly and she wouldnt see him. Angad's cabin was curtained thoroughly that no one could see wat was going on inside..}

Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin { she got up and started dancing around with open arms...}
Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin
Ek kar doon aasmaan zameen
Kaho yaaron kya karoon kya nahin

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar

Usne baat ki kuchh aise dhang se
Sapne de gaya vo hazaaron range ke
Usne baat ki kuchh aise dhang se
Sapne de gaya vo hazaaron range ke
Reh jaoon jaise main haar ke
Aur choome vo mujhe pyaar se..

just then unknowlingly she stumbled on the chair in angad's cabin...her dance brought her in there...lolz... she almost fell. but how could she wen our hero was waiting to rescue her...hehe...angad's strong muscular arms caught her by the waist. kripa kept her eyes closed as if she was dreaming... seeing this angad quitely touched her hair and sang the rest of the song...actualy thats the end bit...

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar



kripa opened her eyes and looked at her rescuer. she felt as if she would faint again after seeing who helped her. angad...angad the rockstar...the same angad who would hav dearly pushed kripa off balance so that he could hav the fun of seeing her fall. but now he was holding her so long so that she wouldnt fall, so that she wouldnt get hurt. both looked at each other and were lost for words. angad was intending to ask her who she was...but the very second wen she opened her eyes and he looked into it...he felt a kind of trance. he was lost in those eyes...how he wished he could look into those eyes forever...

just then shabbir walked in. he was quite shocked to see kripa and angad in such a position and his entry hadnt made any difference to the two. he slightly coughed and angad startled looked up, still holding her as if she were made of china.

shabbir: tumne kripa se mil li??? i thought we would make a surprise about this. but u dog...always ruins the plan.

angad's mind raced a bit... kripa??? surely not THAT kripa.

angad: kripa???

shabbir: haan haan...wahi! tumhari childhood sweetheart...kripa sharma!

angad: KYA???
he was in shock...the same kripa he used to fight with every second in childhood??? unknowingly he let go of his hands and kripa fell down with a ickening thud. kripa got up rubbing her back and looked angrily at angad.

kripa: wat do you mean by putting me down like that huh??? you are still the same brute. tumhe koi fark nahi padtha na mujhe kuch ho jata toh???

angad: nahi padtha...aur mujhe afsos hai ki tumhe abhi bhi is baat ki doubt hai.

kripa glared at angad and left the cabin.

shabbir: o dear...o dear...u guys arent quite the sweethearts we expctd. itne ladhte ho kya???

angad: yea well...bachpan ki aadat hai. nikal nahi paayi.

shabbir: kya yaar angad...aate hi...?? hai wai toh bola hota...

angad: time kaha mila???
he started laughing with shabbir. after a few minutes, angad went outside to find kripa and say sorry to her. he searched the whole floor but dint find kripa. he then thought he would ask the receptionist.

angad: hey lily...tumhe pata hai kripa kaha gayi???

lily: angad sir,...woh toh bahut mushkil se chalne ki koshish kar rahi dhi...shayad kahi giri hogi. i was about to call her a cab...wen somebody came over to see her and she went with him.

angad: somebody came over??? kaun tha??? somebody from home? shabd tha kya???

lily: patha nahi ghar ke koi tha...par shabd sir toh nahi tha... i can recognize him well enough. {lily giggled. angad was very much annoyed by the news that somebody took kripa and the stupid giggle made him even more impatient. he jus smiled }

angad: par koi naam toh bataaya hoga...

lily: bataaya sir... handsome tha kafi... naam...naam...kya tha...??? ha!!! mila... PREM JUNEJA.



....TO BE CONTINUED....

now who is this prem??? i gues those who watch kis des me hai mera dil...will knw...its prem juneja the hero of that serial. now wat is he doing here...??? will let you knw soon... do comment guys... and soon
😉
Edited by giggling gurl - 17 years ago

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