FF-SAATH...wid u alwys[part29UPDATEDpg21] - Page 12

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Posted: 17 years ago
again sorry i couldnt comment before... ive been really busy... GREAT part! this mahi/shabd story iss getting REALLY good... waiting eagerly... =D
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanx to evryone who has read and commented...next part coming up
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PART TWENTY FOUR


mahi was starting to feel nervous now that shabd would be here any moment. she had been handling all his works though she should hav just did her photoshoot and went home. engaging herself in shabd's work had given her some sort of pleasure...but she wasnt sure whether this was love yet. she dint know wat to tell him.

she was only glad when aaliyah asked her to go with her for some necessary shopping. that would save her from facing shabd at the moment. she went with aaliyah.

shabd came home a few minutes after mahi left. he wanted to run to her and listen from her own mouth that she loves him.

angad was home for a change... he greeted shabd.
"shabd...tumara flight toh aaj jaldi aa gaye..."

shabd hugged his brother: bhai... jab dil betaab hota hai...waqt ka hosh hi nahi rehta...

angad: impressive... canada me shayari ki classes li kya tumne???

shabd laughed out loud...

shabd: waise...bhai...ek baat poochu???

angad knew wat was coming. he had seen the desperateness in his eyes as they wandered around the house, restless to see someone...

angad: me jaanta hoon...mahi shopping ke liye gayi hai aali ke saath

shabd was embarassed his brother knew his question...

shabd: me woh nahi poochne wala dha...ye pooch raha tha ki...
he beckoned angad a bit closer...angad leaned over to him...

shabd: ye pooch raha tha ki...muje chacha kab banane ka iraada hai???

angad: battamizz!!!!

shabd had already fled befor angad could even put his hands on him. but angad smiled.... even he hadnt thought about that...

mahi was came back only late in the evening. aaliyah had a dinner date with shabbir and she left from the mall itself. wen mahi reached home, no one was there...or to her...


the cook informed her that naina and angad went to get some work done. prem took kripa out... apparantly mahi was alone in the house.

she slowly walked into her room, thinking about shabd... he should have come by now. nobody told her about his arrival. mahi locked herself up in her room and sat on her bed. she was in deep thought.

"kahin mere baare me toh nahi soch rahi ho???"

mahi was startled and started looking around for the source of the sound. she spotted shabd on her bed, just behind her.

mahi: tum yaha kya kar rahe ho???

shabd: abhi tak toh kuch nahi... kuch karu kya???
and he started moving towards mahi...mahi stood up and moved away.

mahi: shabd, mazak mat karo

shabd: theek hai,,,, phir kya karu???

mahi: tum bas chale jao

shabd: kamre se ya tumari zindagi se???

mahi was shocked...

shabd: u dint say anything.

mahi still dint say anything. shabd walked towards her and stood in front of her. this time she dint move.

shabd: mahi...

mahi: shabd...muje thoda aur waqt chahiye... maine abhi tak poori tarah socha nahi hai... muje faisla karne me aur waqt chahiye

shabd's expression stoned...: muje nahi lagta ki tume zyada waqt deke kuch faida hoga... tum mujse pyaar nahi karti ho aur me ye jaanta hoon

mahi: aisa mat kaho...

shabd just turned around to leave.

mahi held his hands from behind.

mahi: aise chodke mat jao.

shabd: muje jaana hai

mahi: shabd...hum dost toh reh sakte hai na???

shabd: maine tumse pyaar kiya hai... dosti ka naam leke me us pyaar ko chupana nahi chahta...aur tum toh yehi chahti ho... kyunki tum mujse pyar nahi karti

mahi: maine kab kaha ki me tumse pyaar nahi karti...???

shabd looked at her: tumne ye bhi toh nahi kaha ki tum mujse pyar karti ho

mahi: shabd tum bachcho jaise baat karte ho...

shabd: shayad... ab muje jaana hai...

and befor mahi could say anything, he left the room. he knew wat mahi was trying to say...she needed time to tell him... but he was playing too... he wanted to speed mahi up... and being angry at her would help...

mahi thought, "ab me kya karu??? shabd mujse roothke gaya hai... me use chahti hoon par kaise bataau... kaise... me nahi jaanti... par muje ye pata hai ki uske bina me adhoori hoon... shabd muje mujse behtar jaanta hai... muje use apnana hoga... par kaise????"

a thought striked her...and she smiled in spite of herself... its shabd's game back at him... the best way to give him back love...


...to b contd...
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was sooo nice..I liked seeing Shabd and Mahi close..can you please write the next part soon.. cant wait..
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sl032597

that was sooo nice..I liked seeing Shabd and Mahi close..can you please write the next part soon.. cant wait..



thnx for liking.... i wil try to put up the next part sooon dear...thing is i am doin another ff...so wil hav to update that also in betwn...hehe... tc
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey
cute mahi shabd parts
hope she confesses soon!
plz continue soon!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
woah... two games... hopefully it'll speed the whole process up =D
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Posted: 17 years ago
PART TWENTY FIVE




"prem...tum muje yaha kyu le aaye ho???", kripa was disturbed at the moment.. 2 months hav passed since angad and kripa had consumed their relation and ever since she was avoiding him or maybe he was avoiding her. she used to be busy with the concerts and now with aaliyah's wedding. and now prem had bought her in front of someone she was trying hard to ignore.

prem just smiled at kripa. angad was feeling nervous. kripa had eyes for no one but prem at the moment. wat does he want to do?

kripa: prem, mere sawal ka jawab do... aise is raat ko muje beach le aane ki kya zaroorat dhi???

prem: kripa kripa just relax... tume toh raat ki beach ko dekhna achcha lagta hai na???

kripa: lagti dhi...ab nahi lagti

prem looked at angad... angad was busy staring at kripa. how beautiful she looked wen she was angry.

prem: lagti dhi??? matlab???

kripa was flustered. she dint know how to explain.

kripa: bas aise hi... kyu le aaye ho yaha???

prem: ek baat kehne ke liye...

kripa: jaldi bataao...muje jaana hai...

prem: tum angad se baat bhi nahi karogi?? dekho kaise ghoor raha hai tume...

angad came bak from his dreamworld. he looked embarassed. he smiled at a winking prem. kripa glared at prem.

prem to kripa: aise mat dekho muje... sharam aa rahi hai...

kripa smiled a bit...

kripa: tum... aur sharam???

prem: okay okay... woh baat chodo... tum dono ko is liye bulaya maine kyunki muje laga kayi mahino se tum dono ke beech kuch theek nahi chal raha hai

angad looked at prem in surprise. prem looked at angad now.

prem: aur muje lagta hai ki tum dono ke beech ke daraar ka gunegaar me hoon...

kripa: ye kaisi baat kar rahe ho tum??? aaj kal kuch zyada hi bak raha hai...

prem: kripa...me bak nahi raha hoon...kyu angad???

angad put his head down. he couldnt tell that he had misjudged prem. he seemed such a nice guy now...

prem: muje pata hai angad...aur isme tumari galti nahi hai... ek pyare pati ka possessiveness hai...

kripa: ye kya ho raha hai???

prem: humari closeness ko angad ne galat samjha dha.. aur isme humari bhi galti hai kripa... humne kabhi socha nahi angad humare baare me kya sochenge...

kripa dint know wat to say...

prem: issiliye toh angad ne mishty se dobara dosti ki...haina angad??? kripa ko jalane ke liye???

angad just kept on looking at his feet,,,, every truth was coming out...
kripa looked at angad...

prem continued: kitna pyar karta hai tum dono ek doosre se... kabhi baat ki??? aise apne pyar ko chupake kya mila tum dono ko?? taqleef ke siway???

kripa had tears in her eyes... angad's expression was still not visible... he hung his head in shame...

prem: waise....ab kuch mat bolna...mere jaane ke baad hi apne pyar ka izhaar karna...me kahin sun na loo...

kripa and angad smiled. they looked at each other and smiled too.

prem: waise ek aur baat kehni hai... kripa... humare plan successfull ho gayi hai???

kripa: sach???!!!!

prem: arre...is baare me me mazaak kaise karoo???

kripa: ye toh bahut achchi baat hai... i am sooo happy today.

she ran towards prem and hugged him.

prem smiled at kripa: and its all thanks to you

kripa: jo kuch bhi tumne aaj kiya hai...uske liye toh muje thanx kehni chahiye...

prem saw angad's confused expression.

prem: i think someone is missing something...

angad: u r right...kya ho raha hai???

prem: tumare biwi ke wajah se muje apne pyaar mil gaya hai aaj...

kripa smiled out of shyness at being addressed at angad's wife. angad still looked confused.

prem: arre...mere shaadi hone wale hai... apne pyaar...heer ke saath,,, jaldi hum shaadi karenge... kripa ke wajah se hi me apne pyar ka izhaar kar paya hoon... aur dekho woh pagli kaise apne pyaar ko chupakar bbaithi thi...khair chodo... me jaa raha hoon... me aaunga heer ko leke shaadi pe tum dono ko invite karne...

angad: jaldi aa jaana... muje dekhni hai aakhir kisne apne prem bhai ke dil ko jeet liya...

prem smiled and left... leaving kripa and angad together at that lonely beach.

angad: kripa...mujse bahut badhi galti ho gayi...

kripa covered his mouth... she dint want to hear anything...

kripa: hum dono ki galthi hai... us baat ko chod do...

angad: kripa... if i dont say this today also...i wil go mad

kripa: bataao angad...

angad: bataane se baat nahi banegi... ab chillana hoga...

kripa: kya???

angad ran towards the sea and screamed..."I LOVE YOUUU"

kripa ran upto angad in joy and hugged him...

kripa: I LOVE YOU TOO...

in a few seconds, their bodies were close that they could feel each other's breaths... angad came closer...kripa dint move... their lips met... both of them closed their eyes in passion...their first ever kiss...

angad broke off after sometime. he looked at kripa...he could see the same love he felt in her eyes...

angad: kripa...me tume kuch dikhana chahta hoon

kripa: kya???

angad: its another beach...but trust me...u wil like that one better.

kripa: i trust you angad....wid my life

they went hand in hand to the car and angad drove kripa to his house. the house he had bought for kripa {i hope you guys remember...}... the house that faced the sea...where nobody would disturb them...

kripa looked at the cute banglow in awe. it was exactly like she had always wished.

angad: liked it???

kripa: bahut!!! ye kiska ghar hai...

angad leaned over to kripa and whispered in her ears: humara!!

kripa had tears of joy in her eyes: sach??

angad: bilkul.... ab me ye aansoo nahi dekhna chahta in aankho me

kripa wiped her tears... angad walked out of the car and called the watchman and asked him to leave for the night. and he took kripa to the house...

both put their feet together and entered. it was a very pretty house both inside and outside... due to angad's constant arrivals, the house was kept clean everyday... he showed kripa the house... she couldnt help but marvel at angad's love...

he took her to the little shrine like room he had created in their house... kripa folded her hands in prayer...angad jus kept on looking at her...

kripa: bhagwan se kuch mangoge nahi???

angad: muje jo chahiye tha...woh mil gaya...

kripa smiled at angad and turned to leave but angad held her..
angad: kripa...aaj humari shaadi hai...

kripa: humari shaadi toh ho chuki hai na..

angad: woh bas samjhotha dha kripa... aaj humare pyaar ki shaadi hone jaa rahi hai...

and he lifted her dupatta and put it over her head. he went towards the diety and took the platter for 'pooja'... he took out a small sindoor box and put in on kripa's forehead.

kripa was overwhelmed... she couldnt believe she missed this love for so long... he took her out to their backyard...oops back sea... there was a wonderful private beach where no one could see them for miles...

angad sang... "churake dil mera" from main khiladi tu anadi

churaake dil meraa goriyaa chalii - 2
udaake nindiyaa kahaa tu chalii
pagal huaa diwaanaa huaa
paagal huaa diwaana huaa
kaisii ye dil kii lagii
ooo...churaa ke dil teraa chalii main chalii
mujhe kyaa pataa kahaa main chalii
manzil merii bas tuu hii tuu
teri gali me chali

churaa ke dil meraa goriya chali

churake dil tera chalii me chalii

they ran at each other and rolled over on the sand....

abhii to lage hain chaahato ke mele
abhii dil meraa dha dhakanon se khele
kisii mod par main tumko pukaaruu
bahaanaa koii banaa to na loge

agar main bataa duu mere dil me kyaa hai
tum mujhase nigaahe churaa to na loge
agar badh gayii hai betaabiyaa
kahiin mujhase daaman chhudaa to naa loge
kahataa hai dil dha dhadakate hue
tum sanam hamaare ham tumhaare hue
manzil merii bas tuu hii tuu - 2
terii galii main chalii

churaa ke dil meraa goriyaa chalii

churaa ke dil teraa chalii main chalii

angad took kripa in his arms and took her to their room upstairs. he had always wished for them to be together there... for their loving nights... he slowly switched off the lights... and opened the balcony door...just like the night they consumed first, moonlight was coming in today too...

nahii bevafaa tum ye mujhako khabar hai
badalatii ruto se magar mujhako Dar hai
naii hasarato kii naii sej par tum
nayaa phuul koii sajaa to naa loge

vafaaen to mujhase bahut tumane kii hai
magar is jahaa me hasii aur bhii hai
kasam merii khaa kar itanaa bataa do
kisii aur se dil lagaa to naa loge
dhiire dhiire chorii chorii chupke chupke aankhe mil
Toot naa jaaye pyaar bharaa dil
manzil merii bas tuu hii tuu - 2
terii galii main chalii

churaa ke dil meraa goriyaa chalii



angad held kripa...close to him... and slowly peeled away all their dresses... he kissed her again and they loved all night...


...to b cntd...
sowwiii guys...i knw u were waitin for shabd mahi scenes buh v shudn forget angad and kripa na...hehe...keep commenting
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Posted: 17 years ago
this was so romantic...so the truth about Kripa and Prem is finally revealed. I so happy that Angad finally got to fulfill his dream. please write soon..I am waiting for Shabd and Mahi part..thanks
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey
very cute update
finally they confessed!!!
plz continue soon!!

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