'Don't Forget' - SHAHI - Part 4-Epilogue (P. 3)

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: *Eva*

LOL! My parents want me to become a doctor! ROFL! Aha, no problem! Anytime!😆😆😳

Actually, writing is in my blood ... they are all good writers. But I took the other road. They were too close to disown me. 😆😆😆

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#32

Originally posted by: bheegi
wonderful job Jake 👏👏👏

A tearful end to a beautiful story😭. Apt title for the short story.😊

Continue writing dear....write one with the lawyer and bar tender u mentioned earlier😃

Oh ... I already started one. I find this better somehow. My kinda story. 😆😉

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#33

Originally posted by: pallavi25
Woww Jake! That was amazing! 👏👏
Simply awesome!

It was so moving! 😭 Brought tears to my eyes! Really it did! 😭

They couldnt be together in life so they united in death! So poignant! 😭

Loved the lyrics of Demi Lovatos song to go with the story!

U shd continue writing! 😃 Ur really gifted!

pallavi

Not really. Like I said I take other people's work -- their imagination. I'm comfortable with it somehow. I don't like reading my own imagination. I find it ... the thing is I'm not a writer and that makes it ... cheap? Does it make sense?

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#34

Jake awesome story thank you s much dear.👏

I am crying at the end.😭 its mindblowing end they both meet with each other after death .

pl continue writing dear you are great writer.👏