'Don't Forget' - SHAHI - Part 4-Epilogue (P. 3)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I wanted to dedicate this story to our Shahi. Actually, it was a fiction written a long time ago. Heart-breaking one. Again, not my original idea. I'm like a director who takes a novel and turn it into a movie. 😆 I hope I did a good job with it. It's not more then 5-6 chapters. Don't kill me after reading it. 😉😆
Here goes nothing ... if you do not want to get embarassed by crying ... don't read. 😛 By the way, I didn't know Angad's last name so I used "Khanna". You will know why ... 😉😆
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Chapter 1: Her Headstone
A yellow convertible screeched to a stop front of the graveyard. A well-rounded man gets out, with flowers held lazily in his left hand. With long, semi-unruly hair, piercing blue eyes and bulging biceps, he walked into the graveyard ...
As 28 years old, Shabd Sareen placed the flowers on the fresh dirt of the grave as he wiped away his tears. God, how glad he was that nobody else was there except him, as he had spend the last couple of minutes bawling his eyes out. Hell, it hurt so much to think about it. He had refused to allow himself to feel anything for last couple of days. But he couldn't help it. Couldn't help himself. Standing front of her headstone -- brought all those memories back. Sweet. Sour.
Mahi Malhotra, his closest friend in the entire world, was dead. Murdered. Brutally murdered by her abusive husband, Angad. Angad Khanna.
Shabd could never understand how Mahi, or any woman, especially Mahi, could live like that. Yes, she had left him several times. He would wait, then beg her to come back. Every time, it took some time, but she always did. Why? She was always such a head-strong person, why would she go back? To him? He asked those questions to himself a lot of times ... but did he have answers to those questions? Guess not.
Shabd still remembered the last time vividly: When she had shown up at his door with the girls, he didn't hesitate. Her daughters. Her beautiful daughters: Sur and Diya. Of course, they could stay. They always did. The girls got the large master bed, Mahi got one of the couches and so did he. The next day, when he knew Angad would be home and Mahi would be occupied, Shabd gathered Taya ji and his cousin brother, Jeet together. Having tried other ways in the past, they spoke to Angad in a language he'd understand: Fists.
Of course, even that hadn't worked either ... or Mahi couldn't have been ...
Sighing, he remembered the day she decided to go back to him. That last time, she said. He'd begged her on his knees, not to go. He was so afraid for her, for the girls. Things had gotten so intense, he had almost let his secret slip. That he ... But he'd choked it back. Once she was gone, he had broken down completely. Why did he hold back? Why didn't he just tell her? Maybe, if she knew, she could have stayed. Something, kept him from saying it, every time. Dammit, what was it?
It's too late now. The woman he loved is dead. He knew that part of him felt like he had killed her with his own filthy hands.
Shabd thought he was alone. He almost jumped out of his skin when he heard a familiar female voice: "You loved her, didn't you?"
Edited by Mahi-lover - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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i loveedd the first chapter! Awesome!👏

cant wait for more!😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kripangad 4ever

i loveedd the first chapter! Awesome!👏

cant wait for more!😛

Thank god .. it's not a long one. Good you didn't kill me. 😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey that was really good, Jake! 👏👏
But it was very sad! Angad killed Mahi? 😭😭
Awww Mahi is already dead? How will we see shahi scenes now? 😭
Plz continue soon. 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ohh..its really good !! Sur is such a beautifull name for Mahi's girl.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i like it but why Mahi is already dead ...so sad😭
any ways loved her daughter's name--sur and diya...lovely😳
waiting for next😳
btw good job jake😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That's why it's not long. 😆 Bare with me. After this, I'm starting a new one. It's a comedy love story or I hope so. You will enjoy it. 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for the PM Jake
So the story is in flashback? Great wrting. I am glad u started a ff at last
THis angad is the angad from Maayka (Indraneil...right?)
PM me next time when u update as i don't come to maakya forum regulary
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: bheegi

Thanks for the PM Jake

So the story is in flashback? Great wrting. I am glad u started a ff at last
THis angad is the angad from Maayka (Indraneil...right?)
PM me next time when u update as i don't come to maakya forum regulary

I'm updating it in not more then 10 minutes. No, it's not a flashback. Mahi is dead. You know what she thought about all this. Pretty soon. 😉 I mean did Mahi love him too? Let's see ...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2: Without Her

Shabd Sareen whipped around at the sound. Suhani. He noticed, Suhani, his ex-wife, was standing next to him. "What?"

"You loved her, didn't you? You loved her. It's so obvious."
"I don't know what you are talking about . . .", he whispered.
"SHUT UP!", she spatted. "If you're going to lie, shut up! Forgodsakes, Why do you think I left you? Why do you think I got involved with somebody else?"
"You tell me.", he stated simply.
"HE. WAS. THERE. You spent so much time with Mahi and the girls. Away from me, your own wife, dammit! Did you even notice that we had only made love once in the last year together? As much as I loved you, I couldn't take it anymore. I went to him to talk, and things ... developed. That's when I really realized ..."
Shabd laughed without a sense of humor. "What, that you love him?"
"My husband loves me, Shabd. Deeply. Loving him was so different than loving you. I knew you loved somebody else. Hell, it didn't take a genius to figure out who it was."
"Is." Shabd corrected her. Finally admitting the truth. "Her death doesn't kill my love for her, Suhani. I still love her. Always will."
"I know." Sighing, she continued, "Shabd, I-I know you don't like me right now, but you need to know this. I never wanted this for her. She did not deserve this. Nobody does. She was such a generous person. Even when I found out ... I couldn't bring myself to hate her. Crazy that it sounds ... it's true."
Later, he'd realize the depth of this moment. Not now. Now, he wanted her to leave. She was one of the last people he wanted. "Please go.", he whispered.
She was stung by that, but had expected it. She placed the flowers she brought on the grave. "Lilly. They were her favorite.", she said and left.
And again, Shabd was alone. All alone.
Again, reality punched him. She was gone.
He wanted to shout. Shout away his pain. Shout away everything he held inside.
"MAHI!"
, he cried. Shabd fell on his knees, and sobbed his heart out.
Edited by Mahi-lover - 16 years ago

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