At the end of a rainbow -Updated Chapter 3, page 7 - Page 4

Hi great ff. Waiting for the next update.
pl Pm me coming part.

Dee......

Loved dis update......M loving d way whole story is progressing....!!!

Damini's plight aftr d truth is out....is described brilliantly ⭐️.....!!! Felt her pain.....touched by ur words.....!!! Kudos to u for dat 👏👏....!!! And Inder's character is shown in whole different light.....love dis as well 😊.....!!!

Great work 👍🏼.....!!! Waiting for next part eagerly.....!!!

Plzzz add me to ur PM list....!!!

-Nitika

Hey Diyaa !!

Great to see you back. Could you please add me to your Pm list

Dee, your second update, simply fantastic👏… Everything moving in fast pace, need to digest each & every part slowly and read again & again.. But actually I loved reading it agains timezz.. Damini not loving Inder, good for him.. All the sequences and swirls shaped so well.. Identity disclosure of Damz, Balraj staying and helping in odd and even ways for Gujrals, and Pri on his way to support his father, and Sam in his hi-figh form.. Just superb… You have built the strong setup of the FF, in the very beginning.. tooo eager to know what, infact how is going to be happen now..

Dee : You guys!! Please cooperate with me... I have an update due, like, last week, and you two won't get your act together!

Prithvi : *Looks up at this, smirks and gets back to washing the horse.*

Dee : *mouth open and nearly swoons*

Damini : *stomps her foot* Don't blame us for not being able to write. If you'd stop drooling for 5 min and actually think about the plot, you'd have finished the story by now.

Dee : *smiles sheepishly at Prithvi, who winks at her. At Damini's cough, she straightens up and frowns* It isn't my fault! I want to write a HOT scene and you guys insist on fighting...

Prithvi : Hot scene? As in HOT scene? With her??? *he quirks his eyebrow in Damini's direction*

Damini : *in a temper, as usual* What do you mean, 'her'? You insufferable, arrogant git!! What makes you think I'd even touch you?!

Dee : *begins to hit her head against the stable wall* Please, you two, please... I have people waiting for the update (I hope)... *makes puppy dog eyes at Prithvi, who visibly softens*

Prithvi : *glances at Damini* Oh well, I suppose we could... *his voice trails off as Damini tuns as red as a tomato*

Damini : Don't you dare get ideas!! I wouldn't touch you with a ten-foot barge-pole! You stay away from me, you horrible man! And you too... * she glares at Dee*

Dee : *closes her eyes and rubs her forehead, which is now considerably bumped from all the banging* Oh for the love of God! Prithvi, please do something... I swear I'll give you more dialogue AND the upper hand over this stubborn woman...

Prithvi : *smirks evilly* You promise?

Dee bobs her head fervently. Prithvi makes a 'trust me' sign before stalking over to Dee.

Prithvi : You know, if she isn't that interested, maybe you could find me another romantic interest...

He comes closer. The notebook slides off Dee's lap, and she scrambles up. Damini is looking on, visibly irritated.

Dee : Another interest? But you and Damini have such wonderful chemistry!!

He comes even closer.

Prithvi : Well, the chemistry is largely cos of me, you know. Put me with any other girl, and I'll recreate the same magic. Want a demonstration?

Dee : Ahem, errr.... *gulps and looks at Damini who is staring with her eyes WIDE open*

Prithvi stands right in front of Dee and crosses his arms. As expected, she starts staring at his biceps, pissing Damini off further.

Damini : *Stomps over to where Prithvi is standing* Magic, my left foot! I Who said you'd get to be with another woman?! *she grabs him by the shoulder, and turns him around* And what do you think you are doing?

Prithvi : You're the one who isn't cooperating. I'm only trying to help the poor girl out...

Damini : Poor girl? Ha ha... *turns to Dee* Back off and stay off my property! *Dee shares a secret smile with Prithvi*

Prithvi : Yours? Since when?

Damini : Since I said so... *proceeds to snog him senseless*

Dee retrieves the notebook and begins typing furiously.

Next update will be up on 22nd Feb. Sorry about the delay...

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

*still trying to stop laughing*

Is this supposed to be blackmail for calling KHUSHI.. Khush?

How dare you do this to me? I mean i'm sitting in the digital lab of my university here and I'm trying not to laugh out loud.. Pathetic attempt i tell you.. I'm veryyyyy sure everyone around me thinks I'm nuts... *Fixes Dee with a glare*

Ughhhhhhhhh.... Toooo good...... you are good at blackmail arent you.. Hmmmmmmphhh...

Okay I did say i would talk to you whenever it comes to PriDa.. Soo errr.. Khushi or Khush.. I'm still going to ramble but no hugs.. Though i really do want to hug you for this one..but.. Nope.. no hugging.. *look of firm resolve*

I sooooooo dont blame you for swooning.. No wonder you cant write.... Bang on Damini.. You DONT know how lucky you are... I lovvvvvvveeeeeeeedd this err note is it?

I want more notes then if you cant do updates.. :P

Loved PriDa fighting and you are going to write a HOT scene huh Dee? *looks way too eagerly before remembering she isnt supposed to*

Uff you have got me in a spot havent you.. *glares again*

Errrr... first you write a HOT scene.. I can see PriDa kissing giving you loads of inspiration 🤣

Works with me everytime.. *grins cheekily*

And yes I'm still not supposed to be talking to you so much..PriDa naa...saari izzat ka kachra kar dete hain... Hmmphhh

Still no hugs :P
Maham

Deeeee

@ Maham and Nan

Diyaaaa !!