At the end of a rainbow -Updated Chapter 3, page 7

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Nandini

@Nan08

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Dee...

Thanks for being back wid ur writing...... it was absolutely gr8 start...it will be interesting to see how u will b taking it frm here .. start seems similar to our show.. i am guessing u have lots of things up ur sleeve... eagerly waiting now to see wat hppns next...

reading abt Elaji, Suman, the girls running around n the boys banter.. haan including Inder bot back all those lovelllly memories which have not faded even after almost a year yaar... thnkssssss soooooo mch... pls plsss update as soon as u can...😛

nandini

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skorpion

@skorpion

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Suman finally gets a chance to EMOTE !!
yaY yaY Dee to share ur work again
Looking forward to updates
Life is beautiful...
2011 rocks.

skorpion

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Dee Dee......

Why did I not know that you started the FF!!!!😲😡....You want jhansi ki rani..i will give you jhansi ki rani...next time you dont tell me when you start your FF.😛

Anways, putting drama aside - Lovely lovely update. Awesome sibbling chemistry as usual. Looking forward to a different track that will still get the soul mates together. The stage is all set for PriDa.

Agree with Panna - 2011 is finally looking up. Looks like it just might rock😊.

Thanks for this new year treat Dee...cant wait for the next update.

Love the name of the FF btw.

- Khushi.

Edited by jakhushi - 14 years ago

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Maz

@Maz.

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Dee so wonderful to read an FF from you again..really long time! :)

Liked this chapter loads.. the brothers nautanki always adorable...loved the 'dupatta dikha nahin ki dum hilate hue pohonch gaye' line 😆

And Jhansi ki rani..waiting to see how she meets her Prince ;)

Do continue soon.

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..Waves..

@..Waves..

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Diyaaaa......

WOW....dat was really amazing update ⭐️....!!! Just loved d boy's convo with veggie....!!! Dis is our old LNMDJ.....!!! Pri –Sam-Var nok jhok was tooo good....!!! 😆😆 @ sam's comment regarding Zansi ki rani....!!! Hmmm...sam know exactly wat his Bhaiyan want 😉😛...!!!

Ahhhha old Damzz backk.....gosh no one can handle her temper....except....well u know who😳😉.....!!!

M loving dis entire ff.....plzzz continue....!!! And update soon....!!!

-Nitika

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Diya babe...just loved d 1st part.....d bro teasings..nautanki Sameer..fiery PriDa..d ever graceful Ela...n Inder Bandar's intro was just perfect..loved it to d core..n i m so happy u decided to write an FF after such a long time..had been eagerly waitin for this day....
cont soon n do add me in ur pm list

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RagSia

@RagSia

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

nice 1! 😊

loved d fightz!👏🤣

pleeeeeeeeez keep Inder negative!

so my macho will get to show some........ uhm..uhm..☺️

actually ff'z should have seperate arrangement! u dont have ny idea of it runnin till it comez on first page😔!

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Akansha

@akansha_lnmdj

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Hey dee..do continue soon.. Luved d first part nw i realy want my show back....nd luved d sam's dialogue jhansi ki rani"

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Perspectives.

@Perspectives.

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Diya...what a wonderful beginning👍🏼
really nice to see veggie mom interact with humans! and the boys convo...loved sam's nautanki
And jhansi ki rani 😆...waitin to see the gujrals in manali
plzz do add me in ur PM list..