LNMDJ Poem in Hindi-updated pg 4

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

WoW !! dat was da whole story written poetically !! kool !! 😃 😃
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Gr8 job Sis..👏👏 👏 👏 cont soon ..!!!!!! 😃

luv niki..😊

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aparajhita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

it is fabulous.........lnmdj ke quick recap ke liye CVs ko tumhare paas hi aana chahiye yaar.........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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sistu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

@sarah: tnx a lot pal, those words coming frm u means a lot.

@zain: loads of hugs!!! Tnx so much.

@rachel: thank you!

@nidiz: thnx so much.

@rozain: even being inactive u took out time to read my poem, tnx for that. And thank you so much for ur kind words. I defo visit ur shop whenevr i have time.

@priya: very sweet of u dear, tnx.

@diya: thanks so much for the appreciation.

@niki: thnx so much. will continue soon.

@aprajhita: awwwwww thas so sweet!

Edited by sistu - 15 years ago

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

This is soooo good sistu!!

I just had some trouble reading it, probably because I'm not used to reading poems in hindi.

But I have to say this is amazing!

I can't wait till you continue it!

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Maz

@Maz.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Amazing Sis you write in hindi so well!...described everything wonderfully..perfect rhyme..bravo!..will look forward to the rest of it!

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sistu

@sistu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Continued from last part:

Varun ko mila ishara

Nahi kiya ila ne unhe besahara

Ila ne kaha Prithvi se ki

Balraj ko bachane ki thi kaamna

Hua Prithvi ka sach se saamna

Bhaio ne ki ek tehqiquaat

Aur nazar aaya unhe ek raaz

ki Ila aur damini ke bure the halaath

Nahu hua bahyion ko apne pe naaz

Manaa ki hui hain ek badi galti

sudharni hogi use jaldi

Dene lage jab apne pyaar ko awaazein

Toh dekha ki bandh hain sab darwaazein

Tootein dilon ko jodna hoga

hawaoin ke rukh ko modna hoga

Maan mein leke yeh vishwaas

Chal diye apne nayi manzil ke paas

Maafi milne lagi haule haule

Ladkiyon ne socha ladke hain bbhole bhaalein

Daraar hone lagi kam rishton mein

Lekin khushihaan aayi thi kishton mein

Ladkon ne sach bataanein ki ki koshish

Lekin vidhataa rach raha tha ek aur saazish

Hua jab ek press conference ka aayojan

Sabhi ka hone wala tha manoranjan

Manana tha woh jashn dair tak

Ek paagal andhi ne di apni dastak

😊Hope you guyz will like the continuation😊.

😊Plz do press the like button and leave a comment😊

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Rachel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

thumbs up sis 👍🏼

your hindi is so awesome....seriously i should crown u and jhan as the 'perfect rhyme queenies'....aww!!

Poem was fab!

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sistu

@sistu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

@rachel: thanks a lot. Every bit of encouragement means alot. Thank god that the rhymings worked and i liked them.

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Archna

@achumen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

Wow Sis that was awesome, just too good.

Lovely verses and rhyming. No words to appreciate.

Just too good Sis - do keep them coming.

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Maz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Sis that is excellent..perfect lines..words..keep it up!👍🏼

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