LNMDJ Poem in Hindi-updated pg 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago

Wonderful Sis!
Btw. Did u read my new ff!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Sistu

Bahut bahut accha laga. Kya kavita hai. Bahut umda kissam ki kavitha likthe hain aap. 👏

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Posted: 15 years ago

Awesome job sistu
Appreciate ur hardwork

Keep up the gud job

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sistu

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Posted: 15 years ago

@soni: better late than never dear. Tnx so much

@sonali: oh how sweet, tnxxxxxxx!

@achu: awwwww that is sych a beautiful compliment. Thank u so much.

@radha: tnx a lot. I did check ur ff....will soon leave a comment.

@jhaan: thank you so much

@gunseerat: thanks so much for appreciating my hard wrk. Feels great.

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Who-I-Used-2-Be

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Posted: 15 years ago

Sis, that was quite a poem..Dude, you have got some talent..👏

Keep up the good work..

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Posted: 15 years ago

Sistu....

this was totally awesome..really...

hats off...perfect rhyming and it made perfect sense..

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Rachel

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey sis...perfect lingo with perfect rhymes!

great job swts!

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Saadia

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi sweets ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Waooooooooooooooo hun fabolous, supreme, awesome ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; dazzling and smashing Poem,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, very

beguiled and sweetly idealized ,, everything,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,goes super

with your style of thinking and match with story...theme

fabolous work,,, as usual

Keep it up and hun please i am mostly inactive just login to check updates and

,......................... to update shop ,,,,,,,,,, to comment in friends shop

,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, so don't mind if i miss any update but i always comment on new updates

but sometimes forget hopefully you don't mind,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

With lots of love and fun,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; Saadia aka Rozain

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Posted: 15 years ago

Sis 🤗

Awesome yaar .That was quite something ..i mean it is so well written and perfect rhyming too. 👍🏼

Waiting for the next part....

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dee86

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Posted: 15 years ago

Sis, this is sooo COOL!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏

I dunno how you write so well in Hindi; it's simply brilliant yaar...

The rhyming was perfect and you narrated the story really well...

Please continue soon!

You rock!! And thanks for the pm...

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