PriDa ff-The bitter Truth:Note on pg52 (Index +ed)

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Posted: 15 years ago

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I've cont. For u all!

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its too short i need moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😃

i know i m bevcoming desperate but wanna read more😃

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sistu

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Very nice radha, the aprt where she wanted to tear the card.... u understood.her feelings really well, she is angry with Pri yet she loves him a lot.

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really hope you update soon!

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Posted: 15 years ago

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cool radz...glad you continued it!

it was short and sweet.....i understand typing on mobile must be really hard na! i wonder what happens next in the story!

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Would try to update soon!

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Posted: 15 years ago

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thanks for continuation of the story but it was soooooooo shortttttttttt. plss try to post more

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@ sparking gems: it becomes difficult to type at a stetch on mobile! Plz have patience,would try to update soon!

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Rads

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Part 3

Damnee was now extremely tensed,' where could Pri be? Ofcourse, how could she forget, the stable!! ' she thought. She went upto Danny' Where is your Pri bhaiya? She demanded but the man had no idea. This even deepened her tension! She finally decided to take a stroll throughout the horse stable,she'd almost given up when she saw something white over a hay bundle near toofan's stable! Remembering Pri wore white shirt yest she paced at a stretch to the place. To her biggest relief it was Pri lying all cudled up over the hay bundle. She kept staring at him, coming closer to him . His forehead was all creased up showing his tensions of yest,his eyes slight watery, he was looking so handsome while sleeping ,some sunlight facing directly on his cheek making him look more vulnerable! She was abt to touch his face when suddenly his eyes opened. She was caught offguard,their eyes met. The 2 of them kept staring each other,Pri's eyes gave a guilty,helpless apological look while Damz eyes gave a hurt,tensed,angry yet concerned look. The silence between them spoke volume of unsaid things, it seemed like ages & yet their staring continuation did not break! Finally Damz's phone rang, it was 9:30 'OMG Mumma!!' Damnee spoke to her own self rather than anyone else. Taking Pri by his arms she made him sit up. She wanted to shout at him, question him why he came here,she was deeply concerned! But now there wasnt any time left. 'Mumma must be waiting' she thought. She told Pri' mumma's waiting for us for breakfast Come quick' Rather confused he did not know how to react,so simply chose to follow Damz. They'd almost reached the dinning table when Damnee realized that some hay was hanging from Pri's hair so she slowly stretched her hand there to pull it off. Their eyes met again. The 2 of them yet again kept unblinkingly staring at each other while Ila from a distance saw all this, a sweet smile came across her face & she decided not to disturb the 2!

Edited by Cool_Rads - 15 years ago