PriDa ff-The bitter Truth:Note on pg52 (Index +ed)

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THE BITTER TRUTH - A PriDa ff Attempt
Part 1
Life had taken such a big toll for the brothers,knowing the truth was devastating! What had they done was wrong & in many ways irrepairable!! To top it all Damini being Chaitanya's daughter was hard to swallow!!Prithvi felt miserable!!'What had he done?' he questioned himself. Damnee had been so sweet to him changed herself completely for him,What did he give in return? Pure coldness,hard heartedness! He had to do something !! But what & how?------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Gujral Mansion
Prithvi entered his room nervously with a bouquet & the tallest Sorry card he could find in the market! 'Damnee'he spoke rather gently,unlike his commanding self!! Remembering their last night heated discussion Divorce papers kept crushed in his side pocket. This time he has to give the flowers as well as the card!!'Damini plz for once forgive me, I know what I did was wrong but plz dont give me such a big punishment for the same' he said calmly looking towards Damnee who had her back towards him.'Plz do think before taking such a big decision!' he added.Damnee finally looked at him' What do u think of urself!! & What do u think u were doing at the dinner table? Why are u doing this when i m finally giving u the freedom u so dearly wanted' Damnee sighed.Realizing it was best to leave , Prithvi placed the flowers on a nearby vase & kept the card near it & left without another word.While Damnee on the other hand, noticed the flowers as well as the card,reading it she did not realize when tears started dripping from her eyes. Clutching the card hard on her chest she finally dozed off to sleep.
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Plz press the 'like' button if u like it I know there r so many good ff creators & mine is just an attempt. Do bear with me for any mistakes ,suggestions are always welcome!
INDEX
Part 1-Page 1
Part 2-Page 3
Part 3-Page 4
Part 4-Page 6
Part 5-Page 7
Part 6-Page 8
Part 7-Page 8
Part 8-Page 9
Part 9-Page 11
Part 10-Page 12
Part 11-Page 14
Part 12-Page 15
Part 13-Page 17
Part 14-Page 20
Part 15-Page22
Part 16-Page 24
Part 17-Page 26
Part 18-Page 29
Part 19-Page 31
Part 20-Page 33
Part 21-Page 34
Part 22-Page 37
Part 23- Page 40
Part 24-Page 44
Part 25-Page 49
Note: I m a very lazy girl so never bothered to write the Index😆😆 so all those who wanted to kill me for not doing so earlier😛 I apologize sincerely coz when I myself updated the Index did I realize the inconvenience caused to u all .
I sincerely ask u all to thank Mayuri who asked me to do the same ( username : Mayuri.vet)
phew.......finally done with it😆😆😆

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Excellent 👏 tumne yeh mob pe likha?
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Thanks Amby! Ya mobile pe Likha!


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Originally posted by: mihirmishrafan

Thanks Amby! Ya mobile pe Likha!


Yaar tum kabhi apne pyaari ungliyon ko rest de diya karo...aur tera toh qwerty mobile bhi nahi hai...!1
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sweet start radz....do continue swty!

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Rads, am unable to see the pics - any idea why ?
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it is beautiful.. but how come there are too much of space in btwn 😕? anyways will be glad if u can continue it soon.
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@ Achu: u cannot see any pics coz i havent put up any dear!
@ sparkling gem: actually, i use mobile net & the spaces come on their own!

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Oh thanks Rach, there are these spaces between lines - so thot there are pics embedded .

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