PriDa ff-The bitter Truth:Note on pg52 (Index +ed) - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 4

Everything seemed perfect, everything devine, they could go on staring like this for years! Life suddenly seemed so beautiful! Just the 2 of them could fight the world for they were meant to be one! They both individually were cherishing all those wonderful moments they'd shared, a smile lighting their face . Yes , they knew they were thinking the same thing. No they did not want to break this silence,no they did not want to be disturbed,not now! Life suddenly seemed so beautiful, they couldnt think of anythink but each other. Nothing bothered them anymore.Automatically Pri starting coming closer to her ,she did not resist , both were in each others arms.While Rosh who had entered the dinning hall a few mins ago gave one of her sweetest smile watching her di & jeej lost in her own Varun world! 'OMG! Jeej is so so sweet' she thought! 'I do hope Varun also loves like this!'. Ila too seemed happy, her children were so happy ,' we're so lucky to have Pri' she thought! Damnee finally came back to her senses pulling herself away from him she said' Omg you're in a mess, why did you have to go the stable so early in the morning?'' you go & change we are waiting for you at the breakfast table' she said. Pri gave her a confused expression, coming back to his senses he obeyed his beloved wife's orders & rushed up to their room
While in the dinning hall both Ila & Rosh went about praising Pri! 'Di you are so lucky jeej is so handsome,so muscular & so romantic' Damini blushed & Pri dressed in a sky blue shirt overheard this & had a bright smile on his face' Yes, she is the one for me, the one i always wanted' he thought




Edited by mihirmishrafan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
nice yaar.......just read it.......pls make it a little longer........pls don't mind, if u don't like pls ignore it.........pls add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey aparajhita would continue soon!!


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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow excellent writing skills 👍🏼 just loved it all the way and please do continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 5
Coming back to the dinning hall Prithvi took a seat right next to Damnee. Damnee ignoring him started talking to her mumma asking her how things were going in the office. to her uttermost annoyance Ila told' Prithvi's handling things pretty nicely(a short smile came across Ila's face realizing that the 2 had fought) Prithvi amused by Damnee's reaction slowly starting filling his plate with the delicious food kept in front of him. After all he hadn't had anything since yesterday except a spoon full of rice he'd managed to have from Damnee's hand ,courtesy Sameer. This woman was more stubborn than he thought he would never go on hunger strikes again ,he thought to himself. Damnee was about to say some thing when Prithvi's phone rang, he had to go for an urgent meeting!!! 'Damn there goes my breakfast' Prithvi thought to himself & ran towards the room again to pick the files as he had to leave at that very moment but reaching to the table he froze as he suddenly noticed something he hadnt noticed earlier!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by Cool_Rads - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome love it keep going looking farward for next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow Rads,,,,pl break the suspense....

Good going loved it..

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Posted: 15 years ago
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too good.......next update jaldhee karna
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ayushimahesh:thanks dear
@ Achu: ya i will
@Sia: ok Sia
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 6
One look at the bed room said it all!!!!! The flowers were scattered all over the place, the bed was messed up & at the corner of it was the card that Pri had left the last night. he opened it to see the ink being spread due to water spilled over it. 'No that wasnt water but tears' Prithvi. The atmosphere of the room itself spoke volume. Damnee had cried, read his card as well as acknowledged the flowers. ' No I cant let this happen I dont want things to happen the way they are going, I have got to tell her my truth I m not gonna misuse her. I have always deeply loved her I cannot let our relation go any further on the basis of only fraud' he thought & said at the same time without realizing that he actually spoke it!! 'Fraud ? What fraud?'Damnee suddenly entered the room. ' Damnee wo...........................' Prithvi quipped looking extremely tensed!!!!!!!!!!

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