PriDa ff-The bitter Truth:Note on pg52 (Index +ed)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

i wish there were a love button rather than like😳

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Radsy! Awesome start!!!! 👏 ....nd on mobile!...way 2 go yaar....continue it...u r good....very very good!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

@ achu: any day sweety
@ Soni: omg! Thanks!

@ San: thanks dear. Would continue maybe tomorrow!

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liv2laugh

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Rads

That was awsome and fantabulous ⭐️

I loved it. Please continue when you get a chance. 👏

Loved loved loved how Prithvi got the "tallest" card on the market. 😉. Was it as tall as him?

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

@jhan: thanks! No not as tall as him but as tall as Rosh's biggest teddy!!

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liv2laugh

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: mihirmishrafan
@jhan: thanks! No not as tall as him but as tall as Rosh's biggest teddy!!

Awww 😳

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

dat was soooo gud dear..⭐️ a gr8 start.... 😳 😳 😳

n yaaaaaaaaa plzzzzz plzz plzzz make the m patch up... phuleeeej ..** makn a puppy face ** hehheee..😆
no seriously plzz.. patch them up, so dat v can see mre cute cute scenes.. err.. sry read.. no errr.. sowie again.. "see" , was crct i guess.. i mean i cud really imagine it !!!!!!!! n congrats 2 u 4 dat !! 4 makn it so realistic !! 👏

n yaa.. hope he does all cute cuddly stuff 4 wooing her.. aftr al its our damzie , da queenie pie.. she does need 2 b pampered b4 gvn in , rite ??!! 😉

waitn..

PS : shrt updates wnt do !! plzzzzzz i want mre ...😳 😳 😳

- luv niki..😊

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Rads

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Oh thanks niki ! Thanks for the suggestions! Nice ones!

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sparky

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: mihirmishrafan
@ Achu: u cannot see any pics coz i havent put up any dear!
@ sparkling gem: actually, i use mobile net & the spaces come on their own!

thanks for the clarification. when r u posting next part? and plss dont make Damini too stubborn.. 😆

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Rads

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

PART 2
Next morning Damnee woke up with a start , the card still clutched in her arm, her eyes reddened with all the crying. 'What was it that woke her up suddenly?' she asked herself. There was another knock at the door'OMG! Pri isnt in the room !what if its mumma? What will i say , where is Pri, he had left the room yest & its too early in the morning' Very nervously she got up, placing the card at the side table , she slowly went up to the door & finally opened it! To her uttermost horror, it was Ila indeed! 'Did I disturb u 2' Ila asked calmly,not realizing Pri's missing as the door was half open,'Mm no mumma' Damnee spoke nervously'I was thinking of having breakfast with the 2 of u today so meet u 2 at 9 & sorry to disturb u again' ila said. 'At 9, its still 8 thank God!' Damnee thought.' But where was Pri?', she dressed herself in a beautiful baby blue suit & casually yet carefully went out of the room to find Pri! She took almost the whole round of GM but was panicked in the end when Pri was no where to be seen! She asked the gaurds, the servents,went everywhere but did not find him!

Edited by mihirmishrafan - 15 years ago

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