PriDa ff-The bitter Truth:Note on pg52 (Index +ed) - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
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ya niki our Prithvi is brave enough to face the truth as well as the consequences!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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rads its too good.good going yaar.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
Rads...👏

I dunno how I missed this FF of yours....

I read all the parts in one go.. and they are superb... loved it....👏

loved that Pri tells Damz herself and Ilaji knew abt it...
loved all the eyelocks PriDa shared so far...

please do PM next time.. so I won't miss it...

Update soon

-- Mru


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks Mru! Ya will sure add you in the pm list!


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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 11
Prithvi was unsure what to do next. He'd just lost his love of life, he knew he would never be forgiven,& even if he does it will take a long,long time for Damnee to accept him! His very existance seemed a burdon on him! Helpless! He moved abt aimlessly & bumped straight into Ila. One look at him told her that he'd told her the truth! Slowly she placed her hand on his forehead. She could understand what could have been going on his head ,she herself never had the guts to tell Damnee that she was Chaitanya's daughter! Prithvi looked up at her ' Aunty..... Damnee.....needs you......she's shattered.......she needs your support.'He choked & went straight out without another word. While Ila simply tried to comfort him all this time but in vain. She now went straight in Damnee's room & saw an equally helpless ,lost Damnee. She silently knocked at the door so as to grab his daughter's attention.Damnee looked straight into Ila's eyes ' Mumma that Prithvi is a fake man,Jai isnt Jai, even Varun is one of them! He even went on to say that you know all this, how dare he!! He's just the biggest liar I have ever met! How can he even think that everything will be fine if he tells me..tells me this cooked up story. & he was .......was making a false comment on you already knowing it ,right?? Say something mumma. This isnt true , right?? Mumma say something' Damnee spoke in an angry tone.


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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
hey Rads!..sorry for being soo late in reading your FF!!....just read all the parts now...loved it entirely the way the truth is known to Ila and Pri confessing it all to damz....great story so far rads!..do continue 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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rads thank u 4 ur new update.

loved it how prithvi told lla aunty 2 take care of damini.
i wish lla aunty would convience damini n bring prida together.
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks Sonika! Will update soon!


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Posted: 15 years ago
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That was very very nice....Rads...

Hope Ila Gujral helps them...poor souls...
Loved how Prithvi asked Ila to help Damini.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oh myy.... Poor poor damini!
Short and sweet update Rads !
Good job !
Rach

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