PriDa ff-The bitter Truth:Note on pg52 (Index +ed) - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: mihirmishrafan

I knew you would love this part Soni!!!!!!!!!😊

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Now u know me quite well
i hope u don't mind as i said damini shd not say any thing u know me i m lil crack
Edited by pridafan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
Lovely part Rads!!! Eagerly waiting for how Damini will react!! loved how Prithvi couldn't concentrate on anything but Damini!! 😳 Bring on the truth!! 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Note: Sia, Rach, Soni, Niki,Fatima your wait is over !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
here I go!!!!!!!!!

Part 9
Prithvi finally entered the room,nervously he stood beside Damnee who was ready to blast him off with her question & eager to know the answer!!!!!!!!!!!!!
'So' she calmly asked'how was your day, did you have any problem? I know things would have gone smooth. After all mumma trusts you!!!' she said .' And you? do you trust me?' Prithvi inquired.
But even before he could finish his sentence Damnee quipped in' Ofcourse I do' & then she blushed & looked the other way.
They were silent for sometime. Damnee thought to herself' I know you are gonna say it today its written all over your face!! what are you waiting for then , just say it. I am eagerly waiting'
While Prithvi on the other hand was feeling helpless. 'From today onwards you will never trust me Damnee , I shoudn't have hid my true identity, but under those circumstances I was compelled to do so , I did not have any other choice left, the only thing going in my mind was revenge!!!!!!!!' he thought
'So' Damnee finally broke the silence' you wanted to tell me something important in the morning 'she said calmly, trying to hide her excitement
' woh darasal Damnee' Prithvi said nervously ' woh darasal se aage Prithvi' Damnee said impatiently.
'Damnee.......I have really hurt you these past few days & I am really sorry for it , I should never have asked you to leave the company, it belongs to only you!!!!!!!! Here are the P.O.A papers I want you to resume your job.' he said handing her the papers.' Is that all?' Damnee asked.
Edit:sorry had to leave half way
Prithvi said 'No, there's more before I can express my inner feelings to you I have more things to confess!!!!!!!! There are a lot of things I want to tell you Damnee & only after hearing those if you still forgive me I will say the thing you must have been waiting for a long time!!
'Damnee you must have wondered about my strange behavior towards you havent you?' Damnee nodded ,but before she coulod speak Prithvi cont. 'I want you to know why, you are my wife & you have the right to know everything.'
He stopped to catch his breath , he was sweating really badly & looked extremely dis-comfortable. In fact, anyone who saw him right now would think that he was very,very ill!!!!!!!!!
He cont.' Have you ever realized that you dont even know the person with whom you got married to's background properly!!!!!!!! Dont ever trust people blindly Damnee'
'What do you mean.......' Damnee said anxiously !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by Cool_Rads - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
Rads finally read all the parts from 6 to 9 . it was lovely .

pl.do continue..you ppl never let us down unlike the CV's
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
u killing us with the suspense.....will he b able to say it all to his darling wife
if he says it now my dami will b heartbroken.....broken beyond repair

edited😉
oh....so his
confession is still in process ............

woff...o dear .....
damz u will need this
🤗

Edited by sia88 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
editing completed!!!!!!!!!!!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
Wonderful update.

I cud feel dams anger and pri's helplessness.

Wonderfuly, radha!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
rads,a fab update.liked it so much.
but i'm so dissapointed.why r u writing short updates n keeping us with suspense.
plz give us a lenghty one next time.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@Sis: thanks dear
@jyothy: ya, sure
@ Sonika:ok pal
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 10
Prithvi went on,( trying to avoid eye contact with Damnee)
'I am Prithvi Saxena, son of Balraj Saxena, yes your ex chief security officer's son!! I have 2 siblings too, Sameer & Varun. You happen to know both of them:
Sameer Saxena, you know him by the name of Jai Chawla
Varun Saxena , you have been working with him in the office!!
We had come to Mumbai to know the whereabouts of our dad who hadn't come back on the D-day, nor could we contact him in any way. When things started falling into place i.e., when we finally hired a lawyer & were sure dad would be out we found him dead in the jail itself. Ila aunty had kept quiet for long. it was obvious for us to take her to be the culprit!!' ignoring Damnee's interruptions & angry glances he went on 'We entered the GM to find the truth but things just went beyond repair when we found out that dad was no more, the only thing going in our mind was revenge. We started thinking of ways to revenge our dad's death...'Prithvi was saying when Damnee cut in '& then used us all the 3 of us as your weapons , thought of making us fall in love with u all & then destroying us completely , right?' she added anger filled in her eye , a few tears ready to flow anytime.
'No, listen to me 1st Damnee' Prithvi said helplessly' Enough Prithvi !! why dont you kill all 3 of us instead, how dare you think of our mumma like that & us , you 3 used us for the revenge?'she said, anger still overcoming her.
'Plz Damnee listen to me first' Prithvi spoke.
'Let me call mumma, Avni as well as Rosh so that they too know what their fav. Daamad/ Jeej is upto!!' .'Ila aunty already knows about it Damnee' Prithvi quipped in.
'What?????' Damnee said in disbelief.
'Yes Damnee' Prithvi cont.' We never intended to hurt you all!!in fact to intended to involve you all.But then circumstances lead us in this direction & none of us realized............ that.............., that we were falling in............ love with you all. Thats why all of us tried to stay away from you all, as much as we could.When finally we thought our revenge was complete by taking the P.O.A ,We'd thought we will create huge loses to G M , I had gone up to Ila aynty to tell her everything , by taking the P.O.A papers upto her I had thought of telling her who I really was & making her to confess everything , but things turned out the other way Ila aunty was innocent, she herself was on the look-out of the person who killed our dad, she herself had his bail papers ready for him'Prithvi stopped, he couldn't face Damnee anymore . Damnee on the other hand was shattered she did not know what to do / what to say , things were going in a haphazard way' i knew you'd confess, but not in this way, you've hurt me deeply Prithvi' she thought to her self.' This is it the end of our relation' Prithvi thought helplessly.
Breaking the silence, he cont. ' I know what we did was completely wrong, I know it will be very difficult for you to ever forgive us. But plz Damnee try to understand our situation, plz once place your self in a similar situation what would you have done if someone hurt your mom???Forgiveness is the only thing I can plead for. I can ..wait for you to forgive us my whole life coz.........coz...........I ..................love..........you & will go on loving you till the end of my life!!!!!!' Prithvi stopped, taking a deep breath, wiping off his face as he was sweating badly , his body was completely shaking , his eyes were wet, a few tears rolling down his cheeks, he gave a last glance towards Damnee & left the place without another word.
Damnee on the other hand was in a confused state , she was angry, surprised , frustrated, devastated all at the same time. She did not know how to react , a part of her wanted to kill Prithvi the other part said atleast he spoke the truth!!! Mumma knows the truth? still she did not tell her?' 'Jay isn't Jay but Sameer?' 'Varun too is one of them?' 'I cant believe it' Damnee said , totally devastated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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