If Only - A PriDa FF Part 6 updt on page 13

Sonikins

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Posted: 15 years ago

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awesome kheerani

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Maz

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Posted: 15 years ago

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pink floating teddies🤣....undercover spy..hehe...roshni and potatoes😆...definitely not made for each other!...so aloo parathas it is....yay!..can't wait to read what prithvi feels about it.

good going Nish!..lovely part👍🏼

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Nidoo

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Just read both the parts.. This is the very first FF I'm reading here.. and the start is just amazing 👏 👏 👏...

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Ekta

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Diya & Nish .. you both are fantastic!! Coming together to write a FF .. is Super Fantastic!! 👏 👏

Awessssome start!!! Looooved it! I went from (at Damini's pain) to 😃 (Rosh & aloo paratha's!) in a matter of a few minutes!! Loved every bit of it!!! Brilliant! Please update quick .. and if you don't mind .. can you add me to your PM list as well?! Thanks 🤗

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Keva

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Awesome I really liked the story.

I am looking forward to reading the next part.

Can you add me to the pm list.

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leaves45

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Nisha that was awesome...I actually LOLd at the pick teddies....superb job...please continue soon. I am guessing you guys are taking turns so suppose diya is next?.....whoever writes it I am happy to read.

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kheerni

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Posted: 15 years ago

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To everyone who responded, thank you so much for your kind words and letting us know how we are doing! It is much appreciated! 😊

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Archna

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Nisha, Diya, that was great - Part 2 - loved every bit of it.

Pink teddies - ROFL.....Am sure Prithvi thinks of Rosh something on those lines.

Great job - wish our Cvs were more generous with prida - they could take a few cues from the FFs here.

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Pl contiue...

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Arya311

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Awwwww Nish!!!! loved loved loved the part 2!!!! especially caz you gave me a sweet adorable Prithvi-Rosh scene!!!! aaaaaaahhhh i so want more Prithvi-rosh scenes in the show!! but they don't seem to fulfill my wishes!!!

i know i can always count on you and Diya!

ooohhhh after reading this part 2....something struck my mind......

you see the truth comes out next week, right?! and we know that damini will be mad and Avni will be returning to the water works department.......so what if my sweet lil rosh actually saves the day! i mean what if she and Varun play the cupids in bringing Prida and Savni together.......

you see Varni were the least affected couple...and i'm glad that it was that way! these two kiddos should not be shedding tears and all...that is for the married people......these two need to get back together.....and actually knock some serious sense in to their elders!

Imagine Rosh helping her both Jeejs and Varun helping his both Bhabhis......aawwwww wouldn't that be super super super adorable...!😆

anyhow.......i'm eagerly waiting for the next part!!!!😃

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