If Only - A PriDa FF Part 6 updt on page 13 - Page 12

Excellent diya!! Loved the last part the most!!

beautiful 🤗

Nice one Diya... its so heart warming... I just see PriDa suffer silently in this sweet pain... pls do redeem them from this agony and let them get close to each other.. pls do make them realise that they are meant to be close to eachother and not vice-versa... Nice update Diya really very nice

Hey Diya and Nisha!!! Awesome FF!! Just caught up with all the parts and just loved them!!! Waiting for more, update soon dearies!!! 😊

awesum post diya

fantastic & fabulous too

Hey Diya and Nisha 😃

Omg Diya it was beautiful, how you guys write very beautifully? Seriously i was totally in the scene and couldnt feel all their feelings, their emotions. Beautiful, simply awesome work 👏.

Wow.. that was a great little fan fic hiding away from me all of this time! ... Truly, amazing job Diya and Nisha!! ... Its really well written and I could feel the angst, especially at the end of the latest chapter. This was seriously the best part of LNMDJ. The inner battle that Prithvi had to fight, the angst that he felt. The creatives could have gotten so much more mileage out of such an amazing situation. But no, they have to hurry it up, as always, and introduce these cartoonish negative characters! (sorry about this unexpected rant!)

Can I please be included in your PM list? Pretty please? .. And also, please continue writing! Especially when these days the old lady and the 2 random character have destroyed LNMDJ and I crave for some good PriDa scenes, and yours have it all. The angst and the love!