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hapinezz13

@hapinezz13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

beautifully written Diya!!

She stood at the window, unaware of what a striking picture she made - a slender figure, framed by the rays of the setting sun, a soft breeze playing with her hair and dupatta...
Loved this description of Damini!! I have notices Prithvi always gazes at her hair...n how wonderfully u brought out the angst between the two.....Kitne paas kitne door.....described them perfectly!!

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snehakapoor

@snehakapoor

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Posted: 15 years ago

#102

hey diya tht was sucha pleasent update........i loved it......loved it how even after so much happenned they still can understand each other from theiur eyes.......

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Nirjhor105

@Nirjhor105

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Posted: 15 years ago

#103

so sweet update. it's fabulus. thanks for the pm

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Bhavana Bhaskar

@bhavana92

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#104

Hi Diya & Nisha!
I'm actually new 2 LNMDJ forum & the moment i started reading ur ff, i fell totally in luv with it....itz a relief 2 read ur ff, especially when the show's track has turned boring....plz continue soon.....& cud u PM me?

Bhavana

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#105

awesome update Diya! I was listening to O Meri Jaan from Life in a Metro while reading it.

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nikita

@beauty_niki

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#106

ohhh my goddd..diya...what a par😍😍😍t!!!...that was exceptional...the way you described damini's feelings and prithvi's helplessness ignoring his feelings...was just awesomeee👏👏👏!!!....loved every line of this part⭐️⭐️⭐️....and at the end...wowwww..that was sooo gud🤗🤗🤗..atleast they smiled at each other without thinking about anything else for the first time👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...hmmm....i really want this trip to be a memorable one in their lives😳😳😳....conitinue soon plzzzzzzzz......will be waiting for the next part eagerly😊.

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Mrunal

@Mru_bee

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#107

Loved it Diya...👏👏👏

esp the line "Yes, but I'm in your life now..."... absolutely fab....

loved the part where they are standing by the window...

loved it...

waiting for more,

-- Mru

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leaves45

@leaves45

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Posted: 15 years ago

#108

Diya the last line of the scene is apt for your fic as well..........'I wish it would never end'. That's how I feel when I read your stories.

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#109

wow an awesome ff do add me to ur pm list hope prida have some romance soon

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Archna

@achumen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#110

'He didn't know what she saw in his face then, but a brilliant smile dawned on her face, a smile that he returned whole-heartedly, both of them conscious of the love that still bound them together, both of them wishing that the moment would never end...'

Awesome Diya......Loved every bit. The last para was gold....brought back the fond old Prida memories....so near yet so far....poor Prida....

I always had this scene in mind where one day Pri would bring Damz to Manali and show her around...his den.....the garden....the placed he worked .....the horses.......the valley ...this is just gold Diya....🤗

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