FF: Chalk and Cheese Chap 3 Pg4 Upd-1/7/2009 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thx a lot ash……..was waiting for ur update and finaly here it is. Hey ur forgiven……ur going very well .......don't do hurry. Just eagerly waiting for the Prida meeting.

I liked the Pri ur depicting. Just one request pls do keep your Damini as the reellife powerpack Damini.

Keep up.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I really like Pri the way you have depicted him in your story but pls keep Damini her original self but minus that heavy attitude and ego... I mean little bit is ok but not much.. b'cos I don't think that a guy like Pri will like a grl like Damini who is so full of attitude and ego.. let her be subtle but strong at the same time... Confident but not egoistic.. Soft but determined... little bit of stylish attitude but polite at the same time... b'cos here Pri is not forced on her he is not her B.G. he is working in her company and she can't be rude to the employee at the first meeting itself.. as for Rosh... well we love her the way she is bubbly and cute and full of life.. no adjustments there I hope..looking fwrd to your weekly update... pls pls pls do add me in your P.M. list pls
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome i really love it i m eagrly waiting for prida first meetingggg
pm plz next time
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
Hey Guys thank you for the feedback.🤗
Damz/CS which we see onscreen is Cv's character sketch and she needs to be fire cracker there,which is flawless from CS end.
In my FF,I have only taken the names of the ficitonal character we see onscreen ,yes the actors too😉 but Damz is not like the onscreen one in my FF.
She is very matured,knows what to speak,when and with/to whom to speak .She is very sensible and does not indulge in things which she does not like to,very restrained.She is different and like any one of us in real world.😃
"Chalk and Cheese" is more to do with the lifesytle's of Damz and Pri, how 2 different people change for each other to an extent by accpeting things (not completely though) and leads their life.
P.S:Sorry,I have not written anything for this monday as my father took me to the same movie twice -Malleyale jotheyale(Kannada) and had been to shopping this weekend with my family,I enjoyed my holidays very much😛.I could not give any time for FF.If possible I will try to post the next chapeter by this weekend or next week possibly.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
hey ash..
Damz is different in this fic..thats nice to know..its a gud change..n they change themselves for the other..thats sweet..
oh, ure from Karnataka?..i live there too..but dunno Kannada at all!..its okay we understand..will wait for ur update..
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Ash, got to read the entire ff today...
Awesome - very well written ..loved your style of writing...
Keep the updates coming....
👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chapter 3

(On Saturday)

At Gujrals:

ILa works till afternoon from home and informs Poonam to follow up with rest of the work before the major projects meets its deadline .

She listens to Hindustani music in her room , goes near the cupboard to get one of the Rabindranath Tagore's book but her eyes falls on her favourite Kishore Kumar's collection music of her time which she has got replaced from old tapes to new CD which was given by Damz and Shash through e-bay .She changes the CD being played and goes back to her seat ,closes her eyes listening to the songs of her time which brought back her past wonderful memories she shared with Mr.Gujral . She recollects how Mr.Gujral used to sing those songs during her college beating around the college compound with two of his friends though they were all dressed up like they all belong to a good family and came following her till the bus stand then whistle those songs at her from a distance. How much Ila used to get scared at that time ,reach home at the earliest catching the next bus immediately even if there were no seats for her to sit. After reaching home, Ila used to blush and burst out laughing reaching her room recollecting what happened with her couple of mins back.

Later when they got married after her graduation , How Mr.Gujral used to sign those songs to her again and make her blush or to see her smile. Ila still recollects those lovely memories and admits that Mr.Gujral was always romantic but he was very much fond of music and both Mr.Gujral and Ila made Damz and Rosh to opt for music during their school days and also bought the costliest piano during their time for Damz which is also the best one even today and Rosh learnt Guitar. Mr.Gujral used to enjoy few musical notes which was being taught to Damz from her music teacher.

As the CD comes to an end, Ila comes out of her beautiful memories, opening her eyes content smile playing on her lips and hears to music being played by her daughter from the hall. She climbs down the stairs and joins their daughters .Seeing their mom ,both rosh and damz winks at each other knowing and changes their slow beat song to fast beat only to make her mom dance to it as Ila is a good dancer too. Ila knew her daughter very wel only to keep her daughters happy Ila does perform few steps,Damz and Rosh are too happy to see their mom dancing ,hey enjoy watching it. Goldie comes in and Ila slowly stops her dancing and gets back to normal and daughters end their music too.

Rosh takes Goldie to her room. Ila and Damz goes to drawing room .Damz asks Ila about her new job I mean mama which department/section will I be working in Gujral Enterprise coz its too huge and has collaboration with soo many company and we have our own independent projects too. Will I be working in for magazine section , advertisements, marketing section, documentary section ,print section or '..?

Ila says I know which one my daughter would start with very wel to which Damz smiles knowingly and says "documentary section!!!" to which Ila says "No" plainly. I do not want you to do it at this age, its too early for you and a very serious job.I want you to enjoy your job since you are fresher and I want you to work for media advertisements, a very creative/innovative department you will enjoy it for sure , you need to have fun.Since,her mom has decided so Damz agrees to it as it would be correct decision like always.

Both Ila and Damz goes to have dinner. Rosh and Goldies comes down and informs Ela they would have their dinner outside as goldie is taking me to her home for dinner. I will be back home after 3 hrs.She kisses her mom and sister and leaves home saying bye to bruno.Il and Damz have their dinner peacefully and goes to their respective rooms to sleep.

(At Saxsena's )

Pri had been to watch movie in one of the best multiplexes in mumbai but returns home much before the intermission coz the seat he got to sit had loads of bedbugs which bit him all over his hands and back. Was it a multiplex theatre problem? No its not a theatre problem as the guys who sat at the other end were not having any problem and were enjoying the movie. May be he/she who sat here before this show had bedbugs in heir house I guess which they carried along with them .WTH???? He goes to wash room, puts water on his hands and around the neck as it was burning like hell for him. Takes few tissue papers(thick ones) wets it and rubs it against his back and takes few more dry tissues and wipes them against it, pulls his shirt down and leaves to home.

Without having his dinner , he goes to his room to sleep. He does push the curtains only to see the girls room lights turned off which is opposite to his .He sets alarm and sleeps and prays to GOD!! to plz give him an opportunity to see this girl atleast for once as you know we (including GOD) are doing quite a hardwork by waking up early in the morning which is definitely not me to wake up early in first place but you who wants me to just to have one glance at her and you have already invested soo much of my time on her which is all your will not mine and I am just being part of it that's it so plz be in my side whether its good or not but remember we(him and GOD) are always and will be partners in crime forever .(smart prayer but everyword is true as he prays, pure and sincere in his prayer)

(On Sunday)

Pri wakes and goes to terrace , watches the girl in the opposite doing Yoga along with her dog and getting in after she is done with her regular Yoga.

Varun is busy doing coding and designing a new software game and spends rest of his day working on it.

Balraj starts to give his gyan session to Pri after their lunch in the afternoon which continues almost till dinner time .

( At Gujrals)

Ila ,Damz and Shash sits and watches the documentary about "Mumbai Red Light life" on TV news channel which Gujral Enterprise has associated with media together to shoot it , with enough footage and enough evidence on it.

It was very sad to see and hear those females who did not show their faces , especially to hear about this one female who shared her experience of life as to how she is still unable to pay back the debts of Rs.2,00,000/- even after 20 yrs of time after she has joined the line of prostitution.

All the 3 (Ila,Damz and shash) had tears welled up in their eyes by the time documentary came to an end.All three some felt soo much for those females .Damz turned off the TV and turned towards her mother and asked "why is life so harsh on them? What will those females do after few yrs as one of the female said where they cannot earn any money after couple of yrs .Is there no end to her problem and cant we do anything to them to come out of it? ."

Ila understood her daughters frustration and Ila explained her helpness to Damz saying "how government could really help them if they(females) wants to come out of it ? but the question is to what extent is Government ready to stick to their own words I mean after sometime ? how would they be treated in this society if anyone around them would get to know .Their life would get even more worse, society would be too harsh on them and they would treat them as untouchables and these females would find it too hard and difficult to adjust to the society and would like to get back to their place from where they came .All we could do is help them by giving money to lead their life so that they do not starve that day, again it could be a problem if we directly give them food packets as they would sell the food packet for money ,its really difficult for the person who goes to help and also for the person who takes help but they can be moved to rehabitation centres so that their basic needs would be taken care off then again its their call whether they like to move or not. It not so easy as it sounds damz , its too difficult. "

Damz understood the complexity of the situation being a sensible one ,just comes to Ila and puts her head down on Ila's lap closing her eyes ,sobbing silently.Ila wipes damz tears and gently gives massage to damz head.

Shash is sitting beside ela and watches this lovely sight in front of her eyes and is always touched by mother daughters relationship,where Damz never hesitates to come up or discuss anything with her mother(anything for that matter ,damz is very vulnerable with her mom) ,who is always open and readable when it comes to those who are very her close to heart ,Ela is more like a true friend of Damz than a good mother.Shash also wishes she had her mother alive to experience this peace and bliss she is witnessing in front of her eyes,shash unknowlingly rests her head on Ila's shoulder.Ila bends her head affectionately towards shash and pats shash gently over her cheeks.

Seeing Damz resting her head on Ila,bruno comes to damz and rest its head on damz lap making way for itself to sit comfortable around her.

After sometime, all the 3 are back to normal after going through whole lot of emotions .Shahs hands a book "Nothing Lasts forever" to Damz to read as damz is fond of reading when she finds time be while traveling or when she is free ,always goes through a book.Shash always makes point to collect some books from library to damz or gifts her books or CD which makes damz very happy.Rosh joins them later and Shahs would be really late to go the studio (radio station) ,she bids good bye to reach on time to start her show.

Gujrals have their dinner and goes to sleep. Damz keeps her ipod,book gave by Shash and a water bottle in her bag .She picks white dress (her favorite colour) with nice sky blue floral prints on it , a knee length frock ,which matching synthetic scarf to go along it and a matching sandals for her work place. She sets alarm on her mobile and goes to sleep.

(At Saxsenas)

Balraj warns Pri to behave wel and not to flirt with any girls in your office, stay in limits I will not take any crap and to be responsible for his job. Think about your father reputation first and behave accordingly.

Pri is listening to his fathers since afternoon time and he is not feeling hungry as his fathers gyan is enough for him to have it digested for rest of his life, saying this to himself he goes to his room with a burp.

As he enters his room, he sees the light turned off in the opposite room as the curtains and windows were open in his room. He thinks to himself "Is my timing wrong when I peek at her room always or Does this girl really spend any time in room or not?" making a pout face,he goes to sleep after setting the alarm clock.

(On Monday)

Damz wakes up early than her regular wake up time and instead of spending 1 hr for yoga, she spends half an hour for it and goes to kitchen and instructs butler to make omelette from tomorrow and to pack some sandwich or non oily parata for this afternoon and fruits and milk for today breakfast .She goes to her mothers room to wish her good morning and to take her blessings for her first day first job at Gujral Enterprise. Ila refuses when Damz bends down to take blessing instead she hugs Damz and kisses her on the forehead.

Pri does wake up in the morning and tries to spend some more time in the terrace thinking that the girl could be late and expecting the girl to come .However, he does check his wrist watch, whether its working or not ? No luck for Pri ,sun starts to shine brightly and he leaves to his room disappointedly to get ready to the office. he has not kept anything ready for his new office and the vision of his father comes in front of his eyes. He comes out of his sleep and goes to washroom to get ready as he had enough of his fathers lecture last night.

Damz goes to her room, gets ready within half an hour and joins rest of her family at the breakfast table. Collects her stuff ,wishes everyone bye!! ,pats burno saying "I miss you and plz behave wel",she looks at Ila again and says with a smile "I will meet you in the office" .Calls the driver to get the car outside and she leaves house from GM's gate # 1.Ila also leaves to the office in another car.

Pri has his breakfast and takes blessings from his father , he was reminded again through Balraj stares to remember what he said last night to him. He collects his bag and car keys. As he parks his vehicle out, he once again sees a new foot wear being cut again.(its bunty's work),he ignore it and leaves to work.

After 1 hour of drive , Damz reaches the office. She greets few as she passes through them. She checks with Poonam where is the induction class conducted today though there is only few new joinees for advertisement section. Poonam says "Induction class is in meeting room "Ferrari", go straight and take left you will find it and Illa has already reached the office and could be in meeting room any moment." Damz heads towards the meeting room direction thanking Poonam .

Pri reaches the office, unsure about the parking and the security takes his sweet time to give him direction at parking inside the office. Finally, he does park his car and takes elevator to 7th floor and checks with Poonam .Poonam immediately says him to go to Ferrari meeting room towards the left as he is already late. He goes to the meeting room only to find induction program has already started. His eyes fall on a empty chair beside the girl who is soo engrossed in Ila speech and turned her face towards Ila .Pri simply comes and sits beside the girl wearing white and blue print dress though there were empty seats at the other side of the meeting room.

(To Be Continued')

P.S: Ignore my mistakes and sorry for the delay .Again in hurry especially the Monday part however, I did justice this time for Saturday and Sunday part. Thanks for all the feed back and patience. I will post the next part when I am done with it.Plz leaves your comments /suggestion,negative feedback is always welcome

Edited by ash_cosmic - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow....awesome
@covered the issues[social] vv well👏
@liked the prithvi -God thing😆
wonderful part⭐️⭐️

Edited by sia88 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
Thank God for the update... you don't know who eager I was for the update... Pls do the nxt update soon sweety... Loved your update as usual... but pls pls pls pls do the nxt update fast.. can't wait for the PriDa meeting for first time.. I'am so thrilled
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
yar plz let prida meet
ok i m sorry just being crazy
Oh Love that par it was awesome
except pri did not see my dam😭

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