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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks nyle & leaves45. & yes, the groom is Prithvi. I'm probably going to continue today.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice story ... 👏 Plz continue... Hope to see more PriDa moments.... 😊

Edited by RonMione4ever - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Ron. I'll be updating this shortly.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Damini wakes up not realizing when she fell asleep. As she opens her eyes she sees that the bed is empty & she's the only one on it. She instantly gets up thinking that maybe all this was just a bad dream. But as her eyes start adjusting to the darkness she realizes that it's not her room, & she was not dreaming. She takes a look at the clock & it says 3:00. She starts moving her head in a circular motion to relax it a bit. As she was moving it, she happens to look out the window & sees that there's someone sleeping on the sofa. She gets up from the bed & slowly makes her way to the stranger. As she gets closer, she starts seeing some of his features like; his strong muscles... his soft, fluffy hair... his chain. When she reached the sofa, she could see his face from the moon light. If she hadn't already fallen in love with someone else then she was sure to have fallen in love with him. She slides down to her knees & stares at him. At his closed eye lids.... his nose... his lips. She stops staring at him when she feels something wet on her cheek. She touches & sees a tear on her finger. She then looks back at him & back at the tear.

"Why am I crying? Why am I feeling so bad?" she thinks to herself. "I don't even know him. &... today is the first time I saw him... then.... why do I feel like seeing him all the time? Why do I feel like staying her with him? Why do I feel like I should give this marriage another chance?"
She comes out of her thoughts as she sees him shiver. She gets up & goes get the blanket. She puts it over him & tucks him. As she was tucking him in, she smelled his perfume & thought that it was the most sweetest fragrance that she has ever smelled. She starts staring at him so more.
"He looks like an angel when he sleeps." she thinks.
A smile spreads across his face as if he heard his thoughts. Seeing his smile, she couldn't stop smiling.
"That's the most cutest & most adorable smile that I have ever seen. Just like a new born baby's."
Not knowing what she was doing, she gently comes over & kisses him on the forehead. As she opened her eyes, she realizes what she just did, & is about to leave but she gets stuck as her mangalsutar & his chain get tangled. She tries to get it loose but is unable to & looses her balance & falls down on him. Damini gets scared as he starts shifting but instead of opening his eyes as she had expected he locks her into a strong grip & keeps her close to his chest. She tries to come out but is unable to. She feels how close she is to him & doesn't feel bad. She actually likes the feeling. She looks up at him & smiles. She places her hand on his chest & closes her eyes smiling & dreaming for the first time about someone else other than Arjun.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great part and great FF, just read all the parts and liked how you gradually develoing the story.👏 i'm also curious to know how much prithivi heard before going out. i'm also kind of upset at damini for not letting a chance to her marriage, at least she can try to forget the past and go with the marriage. but i guess now she will at least think to do this after the night😉
i'll be very glad if u can pm me next time u update, but will understand if u can't
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aaaww. Thanks Fiona.🤗
I have the story track in my mind it's just going to take some time for it to actually get typed out.
I'll try to pm you, if I can remember. 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg that was soo cute.........moved super fast and made me smie.......great update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😊aage kya hua???? Awesome update!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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gr8 ff yaar....very interesting.... plzz add me 2 ur pm list .......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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such a cute FF. i read all parts yesterday and i was hoping u had posted another one today....its such a cute story and i love the way its developing.....i hope u update soon.

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