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Posted: 17 years ago
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its very nice 😊 .......continue soon......
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
The last part was great . Captain Randhawa worried for Vidya that's nice.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice update πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ..gunny worried abt vidya 😳 ..sounds good..pls update soon!! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 9

As the cadets continued to stare at Gunny, he was too busy reflecting on his past. All this time, he was confindent about himself, he strongly believed and advocated that whatever he did, he didn't regret. He was sure of himself, that he didn't care about anyone else's feelings. Maybe Major Sharma was right.

Flashback

Major Sharma was doing her usual rounds of KMA, as she did in the absence of Brigadier Chandok, when she saw an unexpected figures sitting by the fire of the martyr. She approached him with caution, not because she was afraid but because she knew what was on the figure's mind.

Major Sharma: Captain, there is two minutes to light out. What do you think you are doing here? (she spoke in a calm but firm tone, she didn't want to pester him anymore then needed)

Gunny for a few minutes didn't say anything. Major Sharma got altered due to this and wondered if he heard her or not. When she didn't hear any reply from him, she spoke again with a knowing tone.

Major Sharma: Remember, you told me once that whatever you did, you don't regret it. But I suppose that the guilt has finally caught up to you, right? (She looked at Gunny to see his expression, but all she got was a blank expression, before continuing she sat down beside him). What I am going to say to you right now might make you feel worse but I think this is the right time to say it. What you did, was terrible, you are an army officer, you are there to protect the civilians, not to harm them, and I mean both emotionally and physically. She turns her whole body towards him). You know Captain Randhawa, what you did can cause you court marital. But, I don't know why but I think, just the guilt of what happened with no forgiveness is a big punishment already. (She got up to leave but turned back once more, when she heard someone sobbing. She wanted to say something more but fearing that it would make the situation worse, she decided to leave but once again changed her mind). Captain, it doesn't not matter how much you hate your father, you are still his son. Being proud of even your own mistakes runs in your blood.

Major Sharma leaves but not before she notices blood shot red eyes look up in suprise.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
LOVELY PART πŸ‘ πŸ‘ BUT I REALLY FEEL VERY SAD FOR GUNNY 😭 😭 😭 HE'S JUST LIKE RAJVEER WHO NEVER SHARES HIS FEELINGS WITH ANYONE... WAITNG FOR THE NEXT PART....


RANU😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part 9πŸ‘ and leaving us surprises πŸ˜• 😊. thanks and please continue .
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks again for the compliments! I agree, Gunny does seem like the sort of person who doesn't like to share his problems with others, just like Rajveer.

Part 10

Present
Gunny suddently comes out of his trance like mood, only to be confronted with sixteen pairs of eyes staring at him weirdly. He stood there for a couple of seconds, trying to gather his scattered mind until he decided that there is no point in asking them about their behaviour.

Gunny: Cadets, ten rounds now!

The cadets just looked at each other in suprise, but when they saw the strict stare Gunny was giving them, they started running. As Gunny continued to stare aimlessly at the cadets as they ran, he heard a voice behind him. Thinking that maybe it is Vidya, he turned around only to be confronted with an angelic devil.

SD: Hello Captain, how are you today? (When she got no response besides rolling eyes, she continued). Well, seems like the rumors are true after all.

Gunny looked at her with questioning looks but SD just merely smirked and walked away. Gunny just shook his head and wondered why all this is happening to him. He has enough problems to deal with and now this rumor. Great! While Gunny was lost in his thoughts, a pair of eyes were observing him from further away.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice update yaar 😊 ...seems like lrl writers are nt at all interested in gv track 😭 ..so its good to have a fanfic!!!!
pls update soon!!!will be waiting!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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TOO GOOD PART πŸ‘ πŸ‘ POOR GUNNY HE'S SOO MUCH DISTURBED FROM THE THINGS HAPPENING AROUND HIM 😭 😭 AND THAT SD; SHE IS GIVING HIM ANOTHER TENSION 😑THANKSS FOR THE PART.... PLS UPDATE SOON 😊

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RANU 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey, thanks for the comments! Finally, yesterday we got some GV scenes.

Part 11

He seemed so tensed to her, as if he was regretting something. But, what was he regretting? Proposing to her or... hiding his reality from her. She couldn't decide between forgivinghim or punishing him, both options would end up bringing more pain to her than him. She looked away from him and noticed her friends running, they were also really tensed. Maybe, her decsion has hurted them, but she had to take this decision. She has to leave KMA, this place has only given her pain. As Vidya was lost in her thoughts, a pair of eyes were observing her as well from right behind her.


Major Sharma: Hello, Cadet! (Vidya jumped from surpise and turned around slowly to face the Major. Major could see tension on her face and it didn't take her long to put two and two together). What's your decision now? (Vidya who by then had lowered her eyes, looked up with confusion. Seeing the confusion, Major continued). I mean to say...I know all about your's and Captain Randhawa's past. I know you do too, so have you decided to do something about it?

Vidya wasn't sure what to say, time was ticking and Major Sharma's peircing eyes were scaring her. Major Sharma cleared her throat, which clearly meant that she wanted an answer soon. Vidya gathered all her courage to tell Major Sharma her decision.

Vidya: I have decided to quit KMA, maam.

Major Sharma's eyes went from peircing to confusion to pain and finally they displayed so much angry fire to burn anyone looking at them.

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