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PART-4

That day at about 1.30 in C&G....

Rajveer was engrossed in his file...suddenly he felt something..he felt someone actually...how could'nt he...when it came to her he would come to knoe just like that...He felt her presence he looked up...THere she was...Standing at the door...Through the glass he could see her..she was lost in him...she realized he had seen her...she smiled

He gestured her to come in...

Raj--What are you doing here?

Naina--Actually came to give a file to bhai he left it at home...just happened to see you on the way..lost in the file...u have changed havent you??

Raj-evryone does..and if i am right this is the person you wantedd....umm...nyway navin's cabin is 3rd one on the opposite side....

Naina--Thanxx...(she said with guilty eyes)

Raj looked into his file again...but naina dint go..

Raj looked up too see her still there.

Naina--Raj We need to speak...Are you free in the evening..

Raj--Umm nooot really i am very busy today...We'll speak some other time...i m sure its nothing important....coz i dunt think we hv ny imp topic to spk about..

Naina--Seeeu!..(is wat she could manage to say)

And she went offf...

Raj--Sorry naina...i am sorry but i cant get myself to speak about what you want to speak...i cantt!..

raj shakes her out of his head and back to work!...

After 20 mins!.

Raj goes to Navin's cabin to discuss a new project..

He enters the cabin

Raj--Navin see this new pr...(he stops seein Naina dere)

Raj--Ur still here??

Naina--umm...ya actually..

Navin--Raj I ev got a awesome idea...Naina has given a superb idea..

Raj was cnfused....

Navin--See she helped me with this new add comercial....she has got a fab concept...

Raj-Ohh thats nice but Navin its illegal....Though she is your sister...we cant..

Navin--I knoe..SO what i thought was here who is the adminstration and employement head??

Raj--Umm as far asi knoe till yesterday it was me!..

Navin--Saddd one!...anyway so you just give the job to Naina..Thats it!..I'll get the papers and stuff ready...just sign them...you dunt have a problem right??

Raj looks at Naina..SHe looks down..

Raj--Umm Navin look I know Naina's ur sister but ummm Navin there are certain rules and formalitites of this office...I am one among the highest posts overe here in delhi...I cant afford to be biased just cause she is your sister....Then tommorow even the pune will say my sister wants a job what will I do?...So i am sorry blindly I am not giving a job to anyone so be it your sister also...

Navin-Raj you knoe Naina's capabilities..CMon!

Raj--I am sorry Navin..Its not right!..Let Naina follow the procedure come as any other person would prove herself and get this job...I would more than glad if it happens that way!..

Raj loooks at Naina not with anger but with a look of helplessness...

Naina--I guuess Raj is right bro!..We'll speak about it later...

Naina looked at Raj her eyes filled...

Naina--I'll come later!..Bye!

Naina ran out of that place..

Navin--Raj you could have beenn more polite...

Raj looked at him..."Sorry" is all he managed to say and stormed out...

He went to his cabin he was also upset he shouldnt have spoken rudely to her

cmon your behaivng like a pig Raj...Grow up...You can hurt her!
...he closed his file picked up his fone...and called her....

She saw it was him...dint knoe whether to pick or no...she picked it..

Raj--Umm..how about coffee in 15 mins?

Naina--Umm..ok!..

Raj--I'll seeyou there..

Naina--Where?

Raj--Do i need to say where?

Naina--No!..ill be there

********

20 mins later!..at the coffee house which raj nd naina always wentt too..there was a weird silence raj broke it

Raj--umm...Naina i am really sorry!..I dint mean to be rude...But you knoe its my duty i cant be biased...I was rude i am sorry about it..

Naina was looking down..

Naina--Its ok i aint feeling bad..

Raj-Naina you can look at me and talk..

Naina--Hmm..(but she dint look at himm)

And she started cryinggggg!!...

Raj dint know what to do...Whether to console her or what to do...how should he say anything to her...

Naina--Can you drop me home?

Raj--Sure!

THe go out in get into Raj's car!..The drive to home was silent!...Noone dared to speak a word...

Throughout the journey Raj was thinking what he would say to her after they reached home...He had to say something..he was being to rude and too angry towards her...He had to move on..how long could he behave rude with her it was hurting her...and deep down he knew he cant do something which hurt her!..

Raj looked at her she was lost in her thoughts...She wasnt the girl he knew two years back the girl whom he loved...she had changedd too!...He had also changed and he was hurting her too...atleast she dint say anything which would hurt him!..Raj was lost in his own thoughts too!...

waiting for the drive to enddd



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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome too good waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very nice!!!!

Hope they clear out their differences soon!!!

Pyaar karte ho Raj toh keh do na......she also loves you!!!

Jab ankhon mein aasu aaye toh pyaar hai!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it was again a fabulous part by u..........

all d dialouges wer too good.......... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnx sweta shiana nd lipi.....werss my frnd iqbal_palavi....missin ur longg commentss!... 😃
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it was marvelous....situation was very well described as usual..u deserve this always 👏fabulous
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update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap with long part now only.
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PART-5
Waiting for the drivee to end!!...

finally they reachedd to their building...

Naina got down immediatelyy not even looking at himm or saying anything to him.....

Raj wanted to bang his head somewhere....

I ev messed it all up....ur one idioticc pigg raj...Raj was just thinking when he saw Naina go behind the building rather than into the lobby....Raj immeiately got out and went behind her...

Raj--Naina Naina listen..

Naina stopped....

Turned and looked at Raj...her nose was redd she was about to cryy any minute...

Raj--Naina you knoe i cant see you like this...pleasee i am sorry...

Naina--Why cant you see me like this??...who am i to u??...why do you feel for me??

Raj-Naina its not like that...

Naina--Not like what Raj??..Pleasee thanku for dropping me I am on my own now....

Raj--Naina please listen

Naina--I am not intrested...

Raj--See actually what happened was you knoe i was a little upsett and you knoe i have changed now...i was in work and i just happened to be rude...naina its tough for me..i am fighting with myself...

When Raj looked up to Naina...She had her faced turned the other side and was walking away...

Raj was horrified..

Raj--(rasied his voice)Bladii hell I am talking to you and your running away......jus liten to me ok..

Naina turned...

Naina--Feelinn angry??

Raj--Obviouslyy I am talking to you ad your not even listening..what do you think of yourself..

Nain--Thats how I felt when you were'nt responding to me.....

ANd Naina walked away...

Raj wanted to beat himself up...

Raj ran behind her..

Raj--Naina sorry again..

Naina--Its ok Raj....

Raj--I dunt think you have changed much na...Still the same giving others a dose of their medicine..

Naina dint reply..

Naina--I dint want too...But i dint have a choice.....I dint expect that from you atleas...I thought you were the one who knew me the best....You know i hate this silenece treatment...I could'nt live...it was sufforcating....You know that dunt you...orr you have forgotten that too..

a tear rolled down Naina's cheek.....
She stopped walking and Raj stopped too...

There was silence...

Raj--Naina I am sorry ..Its realy tough for me...

Naina--You knoee its veryy easy for me...
SHe said disgusted..

Raj--I knoe its not easy for you also jaa...(he stooped).....He wanted to say jaan....thats what he always called her...

Naina looked at him nd den looked down....
there was silenece.....
Raj--everything is going wrong..i am sorry naina...

another tear rolled down naina's cheek..

Naina--Raj you dint bother to ask me even once...You never called...You never even enquired why??..why did you do that?...you could have spoken to me...i never had the guts to speak to you coz i thought you would be angry...

Raj was silent she was taking him back to the past...2 yearss back...he dint want to go there...but for how long could he run from it...

Naina--i want to tell you what i did why i did....give me a chance i will explain..

Raj--(sighs) Naina i dunt think anything is gonna help.....

Naina--YEaa you still are running from it Raj..you will have to face it one day....Some day...And that day you will regret not having cleared the misunderstanding before...

Raj looked down with guilt...
He dint want to go back there...he wouldnt be able to control himself...He wuldd burst out in front of naina...and dats somehting he dint want....

Naina started walking towards their house...

Raj still standing there...confused amazed...shocked evrything...he had told himself to stayy away from her...and here he was standing and chattin with her with a little it of quarelling too..

Raj knew this could'nt go on any longer....Naina wouldnt sit quiet for long..she would tell him the storry weneva she gets a chance...he did knoe partly why she left him and went...but he knew naina if gets angryy she would catch his throat and tell him to shut up and listen....raj dreaded for that day...

Raj goes up to his house...and there is a surprise visitor for him....but the surprise visitor iss angry...

Raj opens the door and sees him...

Raj--Ohhhh hii how are you??..what are you doing here..

Raj gives a fake smile....

Man--What exactly happened between the both of you??..

Raj--Both who both??(raj said getting a little nervous)

Man--dunt actt...U and naina....she went into her house cring....came to meet her but she was cryingg....now shut up and tell me what happened??

Raj--Me and Naina!!??...Wat do you mean...she came to officee and then i dropped her home...i dunoo nythin else..

Man--Rajjj....you wont tell me??....grow up man.....u cant lie for nuts....what did u tell her....hope you dint shout or scream....

Raj broke down.....

Raj--she is angry with me...in another few days she'll be angry with me......i dunno what to do....i alone noe what i feel when i see her....its lyk controlling my heart with my mind...i want to be with her but i cant...what should i do??

Raj was cryingg now....Tears falling down his cheekk.....




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awesome too good very nice waitin for next asap with long pasrt.
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