'A strange feeling '.THE END!(Note-Pg 84) - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice ud 👏 .plz cont soon.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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o god...update was soo cute and touchy...aweeeeeeeesum dear...u have described flawless emotions very beautifully...hats of to u dear...thanks for this beautiful update
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thankuu varsha lipi nd sweta rani...

special thnx to rani...thanku so much!!...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey dear
update was too good......
eagerly waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Too good!!!

But suspense also.....who was that man???

Raj...chance mila tha toh misunderstanding clear karleni chahiye thi!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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waiting for da update asap with long part now only asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part-6

Tears were rolling down rajveer's eyes...

The other person kept his hand on raj's shoulder..

Man--Itss ok Raj..I Am der na...but please tell me what exactly did you tell her...

Raj was still crying...

Raj--I dunnoo how to behave with her Aalekh..I relli dunnoo...I am going mad..

Aalekh--Chill Raj..I am here now...just tell me what happened..

Raj controleed himself..

Raj--She came to the office to give some file to navin...i saw her and spoke to her casually later i went to Navin;s cabin she was still there..Navin told me that I should sign some papers and give Naina a job in our company..I said I cant..There is a procedure and we have to follow that...I was a little rude in saying that..

Aalekh--Well what you said was right maybe you were rude but Naina wont be crying for that..I know her...WHat else happened?...out with it now..

Raj--Ahh we went to a coffee shop...She couldnt even look at me and speak..SHe started crying there...I drove back home she was fine then...

Aalekh--then??..

Raj sighed

Raj--Is my facee so stupid that you know the stry is not over and I am hiding something;.

Aalekh--Yes now continue pleasee.. 😆

Raj--Umm we were speaking down..She wanted to explain something...she wanted to speak about what happened 2 years back..I refused to speak about all that...and she walked off..

Aalekh--Why dont you speak to her?

Raj-You knoe Its tough aalekh..I cant do it..

Aalekh--did you say anything else by mistake which made her cry...I mean some old memories.??

Raj--Ummm actually I think I know why exactly she started crying?

Aalekh--So now you want me to bribe you tell me fast Raj..

Raj--Ummm I was about to call her something which i used to call her before..before wen we were together...

Aalekh--And your feeling shy to say that gawdd Raj ur a sample..

Silence..

Aalekh--So you called her Jaan by mistake...

Raj was shockedd

Raj--How on earth did you get to knoe that....

Aalekh-Well I was your friend at college and I keep track of my friends love life you see...Besides if your forgetting I am Naina's gud frnd too..

Raj--Ohh yess...So she told you..

Aalekh--I suppose..

There was silence...

Aalekh--You still love her dont you??

Raj looked up and then he looked away..he could'nt get himself to answer the question..

Raj--Aalekh I think you should go and take care of her...shes not in gud condition..

Aalekh nooded ...

He walked towards the door..

Aalekh turned around...

Aalekh--Raj I hope you know what you are doing...You know she still loves you..Pleasee think about it and dunt get carried away...

And before Raj could reply aalekh was off...

Leaving Raj alone..

I dont knoe what I am doing Aalekhh ...I really dont know.....I am confused....I want to say something but when i see her i say something else...she still effects me the way she used to before...she still drivess me crazy.....Still drivess me crazy...

raj remembers good old dayss and a smile appears on his face....

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Aalekh--Naina not fair I come here to meet you and you are sitting like this...

Naina realizedd that aalekh was upset she wipes her tears..

And goes and gives Aalekh a big hug...

Naina--I am sorry..

Aalekh--Thatss ok..I understand..So howw is my friend??

Naina--How do I look?

Aalekh--Not too good..

Naina--Ryt not too good...

Realizing naina was going back to it...he changed the topic...

Aalekh--Naina I am hungryy...

Naina goes out to get some food...

Naina thinks " he is the only one in this whole fat world who understnads me perfectly..He dint even ask me why i was crying...instead he said hes hungry...how much he eats..hell become fat in this fat worldd"

SHe gets some food for him..

Naina and Aalekh eat in silenece...

Naina--You dint ask me about why I was crying..

Aalekh--Dint wana ask you and make you cry again..sincce I already knoe..

Naina--Already knoe??

Aalekh--Yaa met that nut case and came before I came here.....

Naina--Nut case??

Aalekh--Ur boyfriend...

Naina-He's not my boyfriend you get that...Dunt you eva call him my boyfriend...(naina was now screaming....)Raj is not my boyfriend...u get that....boyfriend it seems...

She stood and went to the other side of the room...

Aalekh gave himself a smile..

Aalekh--Naina I never said Raj..Did I??..I met The watch man and came before I came here..

Aalekh started laughing..

Naina--Aalekh....Your d only guy who cracks me up evrytime..

Aalekh--ANything for a smile on yourr facee..

Naina was smiling...but suddenly the smile was converted into tears falling off her eyes........

Naina was crying...

Aalekhh put his hand around her shoulder..

Naina--He is angry with me..He hates me..He does'nt love me anymore...

Aalekh--Naina evrything will be finee.....Relaxx I Have come now Sweetie..I'll see what that Idiot does to you..

Naina--He doesnt do anything thats the problemm..

Aalekh--I have an idea.

Naina--Hmm..

Aalekh--Just forgett him...We'll get married...I am sure Navin wont mindd

Naina punched Aalekh in his arms..

Aalekh--Okk i was kidin..Atleas u smiled...

Naina hugged aalekh again..

Naina was hapy..She was sure aalekh would do somethingg for them...After all he was the only one who knew about their relationship....

Seeing Naina smile there was one more smile which spread across someone else's face...Who else Raj..
He was standing at the door and watched the whole scene and quietly walked away!!.....

Honestly Love is a strange feeling!.You dunt knoe what you are doing and why..You just knoe that you have to coz ur lovee is happy!...A strange feeling indeed!!.....


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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowwwwwwww
thats such a lovely, cute, sweet, feel good update.......really really nice
and alekh is a darling!!
glad he is here....... 😃

and loved teh last few lines........so cutely u have written abt love!!

on the whole a lovely update 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
awesome too good very nice waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it was soo beautiful.....i m speechless after reading this amazing update...Alekh is sooooooo sweet....a little smile was too spreading on my lip while our RN were smiling out of thier love pain....it was ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutstanding description of all feelings and emotions.....u r aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesum writer.....again hats off to u dear....

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