'A strange feeling '.THE END!(Note-Pg 84) - Page 3

Good!!!!

Par yaar hua kya tha!!!Pyaar yaha bhi hai pyaar waha bhi hai......toh phir kya baat hai???

that was beautiful, the last part was quite touching, hmm so they loved eachother but naina broke off leaving raj hertbroken.... bechara raj, why does it have to happen to him, it's always him, 😭 😭 i feel so sorry for him.....anyways great update 👏 👏

@@ *Rajeevian*, aarsow, fanatic 21, quietrajpri1623

thnxx thanku so much!!....dat scene did touch me also...glad it did d same to u ppl!

@shaina
areey wahi toh story hain 😛 😛 ...thoda sa suspense...keep readin pata chal jayegaa!! 😃

@iqbal-paallavi

thnx!...d last scene was touchin i agree!...well as far as raj nd his heart is concenered sorry that u dint lyk dat part...but thats d stry yaar....sry bout it...nd once again thnx!

CHAPTER-3

Next morning..
Navin gets up early but Naina is still asleep so Navin decides not to disturb her..He goes to Raj's house..

when he goes there he sees Raj is trying to bandage his hand...

kya hua yaar? he askd raj

raj--kuch nahi mann...kal raat woh glass tuut gaya aur woh lag gaya chota sa ghav hain

navin--chota sa...have u lost it raj..jus look at it its such a deep cut..

raj--wteva now stop analyzing dat nd help me wid the bandage..

Navin help Raj with the bandage..

Navin--Breakfast mere satth kar le..

Raj--I Would be fine..yahin kar leta hoon..

Navin--abeey 10 km chalna padega na 😆 😆 ..chup karke chal..naina se bhi mil lena jab woh uthegi..chall na...10 km chalna hain...

Raj--Navin nahi sudhrega..chal 10km chalna hain

Navin and Raj just walk ut from on door nd get into the other...

At navin's house

WEn navin reahes he sees Naina is in the kitchen

Navin--Morning sis..

Naina--mrngin bhai..kahan gaye the subhe subhe...kahin morning walk ki achi aadat toh nahi lag gayi..

Navin--Nahii aisee aadatein meri nahi ho sakti...mein toh 10 km dur Raj ke ghar gaya tha..

Naina--Sad on bhai...next door hain uska ghar..

Navin--joke tha naina...tum Foreign returns nahi samjhogey..

Naina--Yeah ryt!.. 😛

Navin--Waisey bahar Raj bhi aaya hain...so breakfast for 3!..

Naina-ok!..

Naina was unsire about wat to say or do outside in front of raj

And navin joins Raj..

Naina brings breakfast for them..

Naina--Hi raj..

Raj--Hi!..

Jus den Navin sees Naina's two fingers are bandaged..

Navin--Sis haath mein kya hua??

Naina looks at her hand...

Raj too looks at wat Navin is seein...it made instant sense to him...

Naina--umm wohh glass chub gaya...ek showpiece tha bag mein...tuut gaya it hurt...

Navin--God naina...u shd be careful...tum duno doost ho hi aiseyy...yeh dekh raj ka haath...glass chub gaya isko bhi...

For a second Naina was upset..Raj was hurt but she realizedd Raj would nt even speak to her

Raj nd Naina look at each other...perfectly understanding the condition in which the other wld hv been hurt ..

Navin--Wait a min...kahin kal raat mere soney ke baad tum duno sath mein kahin gayye?...aur whaan duno ko lagi...

Raj--Navin kya bakwass kar raha hain...

Navin--So its a co-incidence ke tum duno ko haath mein lagi??

Naina--OFcourse bhai!..

Raj--Naina was so sleepy last night kahan jate?

Navin--Wen it comes to you both...i cant trust you guys...jab se maine tumhe naina se milwaya tum toh badal hi gayee...har baar naina ke satth gang up karke mere vaat laga deta tha...itne saree pranks gawd....those days were fun!..

Raj--Yeah they were fun....

Raj looked at Naina with a sarcastic look!...
but he added looking ryt into naina's eyes "they wont ever came back"


Navin--Ok mein abhi ready ho kar aata hoon...

And Navin leaves...

Raj nd Naina sit in silenece...eating!..

Raj was just holding his injured hand..

Naina was hesitant but asked..

Naina--Dard ho raha hain??

He looked straight into her eyes..
there was anger agony pain restleessnes in them

Raj--Dard...Well Kuch zyada dard nahi ho raha...Dard ki toh aadat padd gayye hain..so dunt worry...i knoe you'rnt worreid infact you are sad dat mujhe zyada dard nahi ho raha.....jitni kooshish kar lo naina...yeh choote chote ghav kuch nahi hain us ghav ke samne....
So stop trying to find happiness in my hurtss..

Raj said all this looking right into her eyes...

Every wrd of Raj pricked Naina...She was shattered...there were tears in her eyes but she dint let them flow...She just sat there silent!...

after 2 mins

Naina--Tumhe ab bhi yahi lagta haain ke mein tumhare bura chahti hoon??ab bhi gussa hoon mujhse??

Raj looked up at her ..
He stood up nd after a small pause said

Raj--Thanx for the breakfast..Mein chalta hoon..Have a good day Ms.Naina singh!..

Naina--Raj please..

And raj was gone!..

tears just flew down Naina's eyes.... 😭 😭 ....
*****

Raj went to his house...

He tried not to think about her and got ready for office!..

******

Half-an-hour later..

Navin is fully ready to leave

Navin--Naina mein chalta hoon kam pe..dunt wry tum aaj rest karoo nd catch up wid frnds phir weekend sath mein bethayengey...

Naina--Kool!.waisee kafi handsome lagteyy hoon suit boot tie mein.

Navin--Ohh naina main jo bhi pehnta hoon na i look handsome.. 😛 😛

Naina--Yea!..Apni girlfriend ke liye toh topless also u look handsome...umm u noe hot!..

Navin--Naina you are my little siter..so stay in limits... 😃 😃

Naina--yea!...Mr.hotty!..

Navin smiles..

Naina--Bhai you have 2 mins?

Navin--Ofcourse bacha...tell me.

A tear rolled down Naina's face...

Navin--Heyy kya hua??

Naina--Bahut saaloon baad you called me bacha..

Navin--Naina!...U are like my bacha only noe!..

Naina--Hmm!..bhai i need to ask you something

Navin--GO on

Naina--Wat dooes Raj do?I mean is he working??

Navin--Ohh weird we never spoke about this in 2 years..We both work in C&G...we started together..Hes ahead of me though...Hes very hard-working...sara din files mein hota hain..Hes not that old Raj nymore Naina...infac office ke time pe hes so serious...Arrey if he sees any of us flirting with the staff nd all...he gets so pissed...he doesnt flirt around now...nd hes so committed to work!......hes a perfect gentleman!...
Y r u askn??...any probs?

Naina--No bhai wohh he was behavin very dffrnt so i tght i wil ask you...wonderin ke maine kuch gala kiya hain kya

Navin--Yes hes changedd aissa hi hain...dunt wry!..

Naina smiles.

Navin--Ok i m late..bye!..

Naina--Bye!..

Navin goes..

Naina starts crying again...Navin's words repetaing in her head! 😭 😭 😭



We both work in C&G...we started together..Hes ahead of me though

Hes not that old Raj

Hes very hard-working...sara din files mein hota hain

he doesnt flirt around now...nd hes so committed to work!......

hes a perfect gentleman

Badal gayye hoon Raj..Bahut badal gaye ho!...I dunno whether to feel happy or sad!..Aggar tumhare badalav meant lossing you then i want the old guy back....i want time to rewind!..y cant we continue from wer we left....y cant we??...ur so rude too me...i noe u r angry...but what shd i do now??help me !...helpp me godd!!

Naina was cryingggg...
😭 😭 😭

it was a very nice 1.......loved rn dialouges....

Uh huh!!!!Nice!!!

But yaar yeh raaz hai kya???

Hi
the fic is really fabulous!the emotions you put in RN senes are just superb. waiting to know what is going to happen next so plz update soon

keep smilling😃 keep writting 👏
Namita

fabulous ud 👏 👏 👏 plz cont soon...

fabulous!!!!! awwwwwwww i just feel sad for the two hope they clear they're misunderstanding soon, but i am still confused at to what happend that made raj like that i mean i know naina broke off with him but why? hmmm so many question anyhooooooooo!!! once again an amazing part loooooooooooooved it naveen is soooooo cute, but are the other in it as well i seem to be missing alekh alot.

take care 😃

yasmin