RN ff kitana pyaar hai tumseNOTE 264 - Page 19

Originally posted by: cool@sify.com

soooooooo sorrrry maine tumhare update pe comment nahi kiya......... so stupid of me......... well u r always awesome .......... tum kya likhti ho......... tum jaldi se writer banjaoooooooo...........
tum hara har ek update marvellous hota hain......... ab jaldi se agla update karo ........ taki hum aage bhi comment kar sake............ u r always excellent......... and always keep ur update excellent......... we hope best frm ur site
👏 👏
love
sana

wow tumne itani jaladi ff padh liya ya pahele padh chuki ho ab plz tum bhi apna ff jaladi ud karo b/c mujhe bhi to kisika ff padhna mile.ok bye for now aur rahi baat mere ud ki to woh bhi jaladi ho jayegi.😉b/c abhi mujhe kisi k comment ka intzaar hai jab uska comment aayega tab main ud karugi.

yaar mainto sirf itna hi kehna hai ki lrl ke writers hataa kar sana ko is kaam par lagaa dena chahiye......yaar r tooooooooooooo goooddddd..... 😊 i just loved it......everything is so well imagined& written...........ur simply awesome....

Originally posted by: watch rajeev

yaar mainto sirf itna hi kehna hai ki lrl ke writers hataa kar sana ko is kaam par lagaa dena chahiye......yaar r tooooooooooooo goooddddd..... 😊 i just loved it......everything is so well imagined& written...........ur simply awesome....

hey tumne pura ff padha tha last time ya abhi padha hai aur ha ab main lrl ki writer ban kar kya karugi na raj hai na naina .anyways thanx for comments sweety love uuuuuu sooooo muchhhhhhhhh aur yeh tumhaare liye🤗ok ab hawa main udana mat 😳

👏 simply outstanding....par har baar aise words ki umeeed mat karnaaa mujhse...nhin nhin tumhaari story mein koi problem nhin hai vo kya hai naa main tareef ke liye words sochte sochte hi thak jaati hoon.....is liye har baar nhin likhungi.....thoda taras khaao mujh gareeb par thoda kam accha likha karo varna lrl ke writers ko heart attack ho jaayega aur uski zimedaar sirf tum hogi sirf tum 😆 😆 😆 hahahahahamain phir se filmy ho gai.....par sach mein mujhe bhut bhut accha laga......specially tab jab rahul ya rajveer jo bhi hai 😕 naina ah singh bolta hai....i think that was the best part....keep it up..im really impressed..... 😊

sana

i can't wait for the update pleaseeeeeeeee please pretty please update soon, i have had a really bad day with my history exam and all, 😭 i really want something to cheer me up, and your fic just does the magic 😊 so mujhpar reham karo aur ek accha sa aur bara sa update de do please, and i really can't wait to see what happens at the party and i am really wondering what naina is wearing that is making her feel so uncomftable, and i want to read more of raj and naina, once again pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee update asap. 😊

take care

yasmin

part 12

sab party k liye jaate hai aur raj naina ka wait kar raha hai.

raj:god naveen yeh tumhaari bahen bhi i know k woh kuch aisa hi karane wali hai.

raj naina k room main jata hai and he knok the door.

naina:rahul tum.. bas main woh ... aane hi wali thi.
raj:i know peechale 1 ghante se tum yahi to bol rahi ho
naina:woh yeh dress main mujhe .
raj:maine pahele hi kaha tha yeh dress mat lo par tumne meri baat maani nahin.
naina:rahul tum yeh sab kaise.
raj:yeh lo naina.
naina:yeh kya hai.
raj:tumhaari problam ka solution.
naina:kya.?
raj:ha khol kar to dekho isme time bomb nahin hai.😆

naina packet kholti hai jisme ek net ka black dupatta hai.

naina:yeh dupatta.yeh kis liye.
raj:god naina tum buddhu ki buddhu hi rahogi. idahr lao.😆
naina:par tum yeh kya kar rahe ho.
raj ab tum zara yaha aaogi.

raj naina ko mirror ke paas lata hai aur use woh dupatta pahenata hai.raj naina k shoulder par dupatta rakhta hai.

raj:now i think it's perfact .ab tumhe yeh dress pahenne main kuch uncomftable nahin lagega.aur yeh match bhi ho gaya dekho lag rahe hai na dono ek dam perfact.

naina mirror main dekhti hai. jaha raj bilkul uske saath khada hai.

naina:yes we r looking so perfact.
raj:naina tum hamari baat kar rahi ho ya dress ki
naina:tumhe kya lahgata hai.
raj:ofcourse meri aakhir main tumhaara itana khayal jo rakhta hoo.
naina:rahul tum mujhe itani acchi tarah kaise janate ho ,kaun ho tum.
raj:rahul kapoor aur plz ab yeh raj sir wala record wapas mat bajana .
naina:tum hamesha meri help kyun karate ho.
raj:b/c tum hi hamesha problam main aati ho koi aur nahin ab pooja aur sherry ko dekho kitani akalmandh hai dono.
naina:u mean main .
raj:ha tum todi buddhu ho.

naina raj ko gusse se dekhti hai.
raj:i m joking yaar.

naina with smile: thanx rahul.
raj:what thanx yeh lo.
naina:ab yeh kya hai.
raj:iska bill aur kya main pagal hoo. jo tumhe baar baar gift duga.
naina:what?
raj:ok ab jaladi neeche aa jao main ab aur wait nahin karuga.

rahul bahar jaata hai .

naina:bill de kar gaya hai mujhe stupid par yeh bill to nahin hai

naina kagaz khol kar dekhti hai jisme kuch likha hua hai

"ek khubsurat ladaki k liye khubsurat sa tohfa"
"ab jayada muskura na mat b/c"
"yeh film ki line hai meri nahin"

raj:kaisa laga.
naina:rahul i kill u for this.

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yudi:sherry hum to gadi main aagaye par rahul aur naina kaise aayege.
sherry:dont worry RK kuch na kuch to kar hi lega.
aalekh:suna hooda RK kuch to kar hi lega.😉
hooda:jayada bol mat kaidi rahul gaadi ka kuch karega naina ka nahin.😭
ali:are aap ab plz jagadna bandh kijiye.
aalekh:ha hooda ab tu rona start kar de.😆😆
hooda:tujhe to main dekh luga.

aalekh:mujhe mat dekh RK aur naina ko dekh.

sorry chota part hai par ab se main har roz ud karugi par choti i hope u like my ff plz comment dena mat bhulana b/c i love comments 😉

superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb update....................................wooooooooooooooooo ooo cont sooooooon........ loved this part

love
sana

awesome too good loved it immensely.

the last convo between aalekh and huda was absolutely funny....and raj naina in the mirror was really swseet. to me those were the best parts n update plzz a longone asap