DREAMS...DO COME TRUE.. NEW UP-pg 42 - Page 15

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Posted: 17 years ago

@ diya

dear... plzzz dnt b angri wth me....i dint update....not bcz of the fall in the replies.... ...i realli was jus too busi in koll yesterdai...n wen i came bak...was admittedli jus tooooooo lazi to write the update .... im realli sorri !! 😕 😕 😕 .... i hope u 4give me ....
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Posted: 17 years ago

To all mi dear frens...

im gng out 2dai... so most probabli will tri mi best to update at nite... well if not 2mrw mrng...coz...well i hv holidai 2mrw...yay !! 😃 😃

n to compensate the delai... well i wont promise a long update but... sureli some interesting things will come up !! the stori will take a turn.... Aniwais im nt gng to reveal it too much...so jus gotta wait n watch...i hope i stand upto all ur expectations.... 😊😊

so bye 4 nw evribdi
luv niki !!
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Posted: 17 years ago
u r just awesome ....

cudnt reply earlier just got caught up .....

but u r amazing.... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
@niki..

Arre don't say srry dear..me wanted d upadte..n so thought of showing fake anger so that u update as soon as u see my comment 😉...how can I be angry with such a cute writer!! 😳 ..anywayz..if this time u don't keep ur promise then next time it won't be fake 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

god he jus cudnt bear to c those beautiful eyes moist...n dat too bcoz of him... he jus cudnt forgive himself.... he was feeling miserable 4 dng this to her... .he never intended to remind her....remind her of those dark times...those dreadful days ...he had alwais dreaded this day 4 the past few years... he was alwais careful not to remind her...n alwais fill her life wth haapiness....but nw... .he had to face it ....there was jus nthng he cud do to help her... he felt helpless ... he jus cudnt do anidng to fix the past.... it was beyond his abiliti... all he cud do nw was.. well jus hug her tightli n hold her hands thru the rest of their walk.... neither spoke a
word...4 thei both knew...wat was gng on in each others heart......

next scene...
thei both reach their mansion in complete silence...each guilti of reminding the other of the past....as thei reach the house thei both go to 2 different rums..... not angri wth the other but determined to change their own mood to make the other person feel better...coz...thei jus knew the nli kei 4 their dear's happiness lies in their own happiness....it seemed as if thei had literalli exchanged hearts.....or jus...it mite b wat is called true love...

raj enters his rum slowli ,i.e their common bedrum...n naina enters her private rum sadli...how much ever she tried to hide....todai....it seems...thei memories wernt gng to stop behind the dam of her strong will power.... thei wer jus too determined to over flow....


next scene...
we see raj standing in the balconi... silent... thoughtful....n hate to sai it but...also morose....he was staring at the happi blooms in the garden below n was tring to imbibe their happiness...but.... not 2dai... 2dai it was a dai wen nothng can change the mood...he jus had to let the emotions take over 2dai....2dai thei jus had to take the better of him...thei jus had to win...
As he stands...unknowingli silent tears start to flow thru his warm cheeks...he dint even notice it...until thei started wetting his hands which he had kept on the balconi grill below...he tried wiping it...but thei thei
jus dint plan to stop...
he then went inside their rum...n went to his the sidetable near their bed... there was a loker in it... it was the nli loker he alwais kept loked... no it contain monei or ani other costli possesions... but ss... it did contain few things which was more precious than his own life.... n the nli things which he wudnt want even naina to c....no... it wasnt like he wantd to hide it 4m her... it was jus dat he dint want her remind her....of all the things which were equalli precious in her life too..or mite b still is...
he opens the loker wth still tears free flowing .... he takes out a album n a dairi....the album...it was a treasure trove of memories....memories it contained were all beautiful... immortal ....happi..... but nw...all it
reminded was...sadness nothng but sadness....despair... helplessness...
n the dairi... it was his personal dairi ...he had maintained it regularli till...till those fateful events happened.. now-dais he wrote in it nli wen he jus cudnt share his feelings... even wth naina.... he wud tri his best to put it into words....n 2dai was 1 such dai...
he gentli kissed the album n carried it gentli to the balconi again...n dis time sat on the floor...leaning against the cream colored grills...n jus started to flip thru the fotos... nli dat after seeing each foto a storm of memories emerged 4m his heart...thei fogged the present he was in nw...it each foto felt heavi... heavi due to the heaviness he felt in his own heart...n as he turned...the pages in the album...his silence broke or
sai...it was time to let go of his feelings... he spoke..he spoke to himself..." navin...." those were the 1st words wch came out of his mouth... Then he continued..staring down at the foto wer ..he n his best friend..navin were sharing a trophi...n then evribdi joked...dat these two had to share evridng..even the 1st prize trophi...n wud nevr let the other one loose.... n well it was the truth too..thei jus wudnt let the other person loose....but....life alwais has plans of its own...
" navin....kahan hai tu yar..." his sobs becom even
more uncontrolable nw..."kya tu dekh nahi sktha... hi yahan kya ho raha hai..?? tu apni behen ko yun rothe kaise dekh saktha hai...??...apne sabse best friend ko yun akele kaise chod ke jaasaktha hai...?? agar tu hota...to yeh zindagi itni zooni nahi hothi yar...itni bematlab nahi hoti... hum tho isse zindagi ki har kushi mein tumhari hi chera doondhthe hain....aur hum samajh lete hain ki agar humari chehre pe muskurahat aayi tho tum bhi hume dekh karkush ho rahe honge...isliywe har mouke par kush rehne ki koshish karthe hain... magar yar... kuch din aise hote hain ki hum apne aap me kaabu nahi rakh paate...aur baavnaomein beh jaathe hain...woh
koobsurat yaadein... aur woh dard bhari saachayi-yan.... mein ...mein yeh sab aakle nahi seh saktha yar... mein uski aankhon mein aasun nahi dekh saktha....tu...tu...ho sake tho wapas aajana ...plzz yar...wapaas aaja...."
saying this he sobs badli... his sobs almost fill the air ...n some of it even manages to pass into the rum nearbi... rum which belonged to his dear naina...who like him was sitting in her balconi....drowned in her emotions....
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Posted: 17 years ago

hai evribdi !!!
im realli sorri 4 the late update...those stupids had kept half dai koll wen thie had announced thei wud give holidai 4 us .... 😡 😡 😡 ... n the worst thing was dat there was no class either.... 😡 😡 😡 total waste of time !! 😡 😡 .. 🤢
aniwais sorii 4 bugging u all wth mi sob stori... 😆 ... nw bak to the update... the update isnt complete.... im yet to write naina's part... but to sai frankli.. mi hand is aching tiping... so plzz.. i shall continue it in next update...

nw plzzz im hoping more replies 4m evribdi... n do sai me how it was...??? coz its different 4m the usual haapi haapi updates !![ i jus luv to write "haapi" rather than "happy"...i dunno i find it more cute to read !! 😆 ]...SO plzzz sai me how it was !!


waiting eagerli 4 ur replies....
luv
niki !!
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Posted: 17 years ago

@ fanatic 21
thanks a lot yar... i hope u like 2dais upate too... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

@ diya
im glad ur nt realli angri wth me dear... 😳 😳 😳 ... 😃 😃 ... well hope u wait was fruitful n the update was upto ur expectations....🤔🤔 ..well if not plzz sai me... i hvnt read it yet... or to sai im feeling scared to read it miself... wat if it was isnt upto the standards.... 😔😔 😕 😕 ..well ...jus 4get it ...me n mi own stupid inhibitions... 😆

well aniwais... dear ...im waiting 4 ur truthful repli.... 😳 😳

luv niki !! 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

n hei i jus noticed ...it is a looong update...isnt it ??!! 😆 .... it shud have kept it short... coz... i hv found i get veri few replies 4 looong updates !!! 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
i loved it 👏 .......so wens next update coming???

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