DREAMS...DO COME TRUE.. NEW UP-pg 42 - Page 17

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Posted: 17 years ago
well, u r rite but m eagerly waiting 4 ur update.......... update soon & yes ur update should be long one okk m waiting fast....................
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Posted: 17 years ago
yaar intezar ki pal bitana bhaat hi muskil hai.
anyway waiting........................
enjoy ur coll fest .it's a best stage for a lot of fun and enjoyment and frndship
ok...........
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Posted: 17 years ago
but give a long updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
varun_sujjal thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
u r promise to update today where is update
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Posted: 17 years ago
o !!! im realli sorri !! i knw im being so irresponsible... but wat to do i had a test 2dai.... n well whch dint go well at all is another matter ...😡😡 n had an boring extra class too ...😡😡😡 so came realli late... but u ppl hv to excuse me once again... i hate dng this.... but ... plzzz 4 the last time plz excuse me 2dai also... i will write a loooong update n post it 2mrw... as i dint start writing yet.... ...i better dnt promise..... coz...wenevr i promise i m nt able to keep it !!!


luv niki !! 😕 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
update please

that too a long one
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Posted: 17 years ago
yaar ye sab kya ho rahe hai?????????????????????????
kitne din aur??????????????????????
mujhe to ab lagne laga hai ki next update me tum Raj & Naina ki baby ko le aoge.....
isliye itne din..................................
intezar
oh no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it is quiet unbearable to wait so long!!!!!!!!
at least 1 update to karo
itne irregular maat ho............
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
yoginisahakari thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey where are u ?

kintna wait aur karvaogi dear?

pl update fast
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Posted: 17 years ago
he gentli kissed the album n carried it gentli to the balconi again...n dis

time sat on the floor...leaning against the cream colored grills...n jus

startede to flip thru the fotos... nli dat after seeing each foto a storm of

memories emerged 4m his heart...thei fogged the present he was in nw...it

each foto felt heavi... heavi due to the heaviness he felt in his own

heart...n as he turned...the pages in the album...his silence broke or

sai...it was time to let go of his feelings... he spoke..he spoke to

himself..." navin...." those were the 1st words wch came out of his

mouth... Then he continued..staring at the foto wer ..he n his best

friend..navin were sharing a trophi...n evribdi joked...dat these two had to

share evridng..even the 1st prize trophi...n wud nevr let the other one

loose.." kahan hai tu yar..." his sobs becom even more uncontrolable

nw..."kya tu dekh nahi sktha... hi yahan kya ho raha hai..?? tu apni behen

ko yun rothe kaise dekh saktha hai...??...apne sabse best friend ko yun

akele kaise chod ke jaasaktha hai...?? agar tu hota...to yeh zindagi itni

zooni nahi hothi yar...itni bematlab nahi hoti... hum tho isse zindagi ki har

kushi mein tumhari hi chera doondhthe hain....aur hum samajh lete hain ki

agar humari chehre pe muskurahat aayi tho tum bhi hume dekh karkush ho

rahe honge...isliywe har mouke par kush rehne ki koshish karthe hain...

magar yar... kuch din aise hote hain ki hum apne aap me kaabu nahi rakh

paate...aur baavnaomein beh jaathe hain...woh koobsurat yaadein... aur

woh dard bhari saachayi-yan.... mein ...mein yeh sab aakle nahi seh saktha

yar... mein uski aankhon mein aasun nahi dekh saktha....tu...tu...ho sake

tho wapas aajana ...plzz yar...wapaas aaja...." saying this he sobs badli...

his sobs almost fill the air ...n some of it even manages to pass into the

rum nearbi... rum which belonged to his dear naina...who like him was

sitting in her balconi....drowned in her emotions....
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Posted: 17 years ago
she was also sitting in the balconi till then thinking abt few of the good dais of her past life.... n the ineviatble bad memories asusual were not lagging behind to b remembered.... she was remembering certain light moments dat she had shared wth her famili.... she thout of scene wen she had asked the meaning of naina wen she was still a small kid... n her papa
had replied..." sweeto, naina ka matlab hain aankhein.... aur maina yeh naam thumhare liye isliye rekha hai ki tum usmein kabhi aasoon nahi laaogi... aur humesha hasthi hi rahogi..... samjhi...??"" n dat dai she had promised
her dad as a small kid dat she wud alwais stand upto the meaning of her name....dat she wud never cri.... but as thei sai....life is full of
ironies.... nw d same dad who had taken a promise 4m her nt to cri is responsible 4 all those tears which r flooding in those deep dark eies......
there were dais in which her dad was the whole world to her.... not dat
she dint love her mom.... but as thei sai.... a daughter is alwais the pet of her dad.... watevr she asked....she wud get it exactli the veri net
dai.... 4 evrthing she asked seemed veri logical one 4 him..n 4 which he felt responsible dat he shud provide his little darling wth it...coz 4 him his
daughter was the perfect daughter n she wud never ask anithing dat he cudnt afford or anidng which wasnt realli worth having... he believed her
judgement was alwais rite.. in fact perrrfect ...but life..life nevr allows us to take it 4 granted.... evri single thing u believed wud change 1 dai......
or perhaps u percieve it has changed...wen it is still the gud ol ' thing....
n this came true in naina's case too...her world had come to a stand still dat dai.... wen she had to take the veri important desicion in her life...dat fateful dai....she had to choose
b/w the 2 most precious things in her life.... her love nor her dearest parents....it was n still is the most saddest desicion she evr made in her life ....

her memories trail to dat fateful dais events..... n thei were.......

FLASH BACK SCENE.....
the scene starts...4m the voices heard 4m the Aluwalia hosehold....there v hear voices which r increasing becoming loud due to anger n another which is becoming less n less audible due to tears which were choking them...n another continous sob in the b/g....

nw the camera zooms into the house....
we see an ordinari living rum wth wth minimal furnitures scattered here n there........then v c... an ladi sitting on the sofa n sobbing..... she is middle aged ... n her eies r red wth hours of continous sobbing .... n she it seems is ....MRS.NITA SINGH ALUWALIA.... mother of naina singh aluwalia.....

then towards the right v c.... a gal who is in simple black n white
chudi.... tring to convince sombdi..... but her voice was bcoming bleak
n bleak due to the tears dat were choking her throat.... her face seems tear stained.... n the other person whom she is tring to convince is also a middle aged man... seems quite soft wth his demeanour.... but 2dai ..he seemed outraged... or to sai utterli disappointed....disappointed wth smbdi...whom he trusted the most in his life.... disappointed wth his dear daughter.... his voice showed his dejection....his feeling of feeling
betraied.....bi.....bi his own daughter ...!!!....n thei both r ...as presumed... naina singh aluwaliA...n her father... MR. RAJENDAR SINGH ALUWALIA...


THE SAD CONVERSATION IS AS FOLLOWS...
NAINA: papa.... plzz... aap plzz samjhane ki koshish kijie....

MR.ALUWALIA: NAINA.... bas.... mujhe joh kehna tha maine keh
diya.... abb tumhare haath mei hai faisla....ki tum kisse ke saath dogi....
tumhare papa ki ya.....

NAINA: PAPA ...PLZZZ.... unki koi galthi nahi hai.... woh bekasoor
hain.... aur yeh aap bhi jaanthe hain.... phir bhi aap unhe kyon saaza de rahein hain ???

MR.ALUWALIA: BEKASOOR ???????!!!!! BEKASOOR ??!!! TUM yEH KEH BHI KAISE SAKTHI HO ??!!! Naina mujhe tumse yeh umeed nahi thi... itni jaldi apni baai ko bool gayi tum ...?? tum yeh bhool gayi ki ...woh aadmi joh bahar kada hai.... woh.... woh.... tumhare bhai ka kaatil hai !!!!! usne tumhare baai ko maar dala hai... mere bete ko.... humari poori zindagi.. ujadh gayi uske wajah se... aur tum... ussi ke saath apna jeevan bithana chaathi ho ???!! tum itni besharam laisi ho sakthi ho....

NAINA: PAPA..... PLZZ.... MAI...[ SHE STARTS SOBBING
UNCONTROLLABLI...]


she jus cudnt bare those words... which came 4m her dearest dad
....it was filled wth hatred towards the nli person she evr loved n wud luv all her life....n here she was in the worst situation of her life.... wer
watevr she did to support him was falling on deaf ears... n the situation
was even more worse as her beloved... was standing outside the house near the door witnessing all these miserable happenings....

next scene

we c raj standing outside the aluwalia house... he is standing near the
door hiding behind the wall... he is hearing evri bitter word being said abt him... we c his eies swelling wth tears n slowli overflowing the walls of those dark emotional eies.... those tears depicting nli a part of the pain he is feeling in his heart.... he felt as if his heart was being poked wth hundred needles on evritime he heard the word " murderer ,
traitor....".... he jus cudnt bear those words...... for nli he knew the
entire truth.. the truth which wud shatter mani more lives...it wud shatter the lives of all those accusing him ....thei wud nevr b able bear to dat truth....... but... he was determined to keep his frenship.... he wud never reveal that fateful truth.... he wudnt mind acumulating all the
hatered in dis world....4 his frenship..... eventhough.... his fren mai not
b alive to accuse him of nt keeping his frenship... he is a true frend... n
nli...frens die... FRENSHIP NEVR DIES...........


Edited by cutipie.niki - 17 years ago

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