Forever This Way Pt-11 Pg-22 - Page 9

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plz put up d next part shreyasi! 😳
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n shreyasi...in sci-fi..wat do u read?
n btw..ne1 read d artemis fowl series? n luv story by erik sehgal?

He twirled the bottle in his hand. The name stood out really clearly. Potassium cyanide. In the next few moments it would be over. He had chosen his time as 12:16. It was 12:10. He had six minutes. Six minutes before everything is finished. Six minutes.. for him to think about his life. He had always thought his life to be a pretty powerful one, but now here he was, almost in his deathbed.. and all he could think of was how he had messed everything up. His life had been nothing before she came. And now it was again nothing when she left. Irony isn't it?

In good old times, remember my friend

'Cadet Naina sir. Cadet Naina – ah – Singh.'

The moon was so bright and so close to us sometimes

'I don't have treacherousness in my blood sir. One day I will be proud to say that my brother, Captain Navin Singh Ahluwalia was not a traitor.

We were still blind and deaf, what a bliss?

Painting the world of our own, for our own eyes, now?

'Don't worry, sir. The girl who will come along for you will be very lucky. After all, everyone's lucky when they are with you.'

Friendship unbreakable

Love means nothing to me

'You're my friend. Perhaps the best friend I have ever gotten.'

'Call me Raj' he said

'Raj it is.' She smiled

Without blinking an eye, I'd fade if so needed

All those moments with you

If I had you beside me now

'Hey Raj! Close your eyes'

'Why? What's wrong?'

'Oh, nothing. Nothing at all.'

And before he could say anything else, a snowball hit his face, and her melodic laughter could be heard miles away.

One cloudy day, we both lost the game

'Look up, Naina.'

'What?'

'We're under the mistletoe.'

'Oh!' she blushed. 'Well, we might as well do it.'

And then his lips met hers, and he knew it was divine. Reluctantly he pulled away.

'Naina.. I've been meaning to ask you this for a long time. Will you be my girlfriend?'

'Yes! Oh Raj, of course I will.' And she leaned in for another kiss.

We drifted to far and away.. away

'Guess who!'

'You! Of course.'

'How do you always guess it, Naina? Its no fun' he pouted.

'Because I love you enough to care' she had whispered.

I was unable to cope with what you said

Sometimes you need to be cruel to be kind

'Don't you love me?' her eyes were sad and anxious, almost begging him for an affirmative.'

'No,' he whispered, even if it broke his heart to do so, 'No. I like you, I care for you.. but I don't love you. I'm sorry.. I'm sorry Naina.'

Child that I was, could not see the reason

Feelings I had were but sham and a lie?

'But now, see what you gave me, nothing? You're careless, sir, very ditzy, and would do anything to get what you want. See, you don't give a damn about the aftermath of what you have done. But maybe, just maybe sometimes you should care about what others want, and realize it before its too late.'

I have never forgotten your smile

your eyes, oh Shamandalie

'And in our case, it's too late already'

Time went by, many memories died

I'm writing this down to ease my pain

'And in our case, it's too late already'

It had been almost a week and since then Naina hasn't talked to him. This is the right way, he convinced himself, and this is the best way.

He looked at the watch. It was three seconds to 12:16. It was now or never. He must, he will do it now. Slowly he took out the last remaining capsule from the bottle and put it into his mouth. Closing his eyes, he swallowed the pill as everything around him turned black.

He spun around and fell down.

His favorite mistake.

Naina Singh Ahluwalia.

here you go guys! next part posted! 😃

just to remember:
the bold letters are the flashbacks
the bold italics are the lyrics of the song 'shamandalie' by sonata arctica..

and plzz plzz reply as fast as you can.. and tell me if you dont like it?

sad isnt it?

happy reading!
shreyasi

ohh.. and i wanted to write out some dialogues originally as it happened in hindi.. but i cant do it im srry you guys my hindi is..well.. nt very good!

so he committed suicide.. but i got two pms asking if the story is ending here? of course not.. there is a lot more to it.. but lets see what happens now that he has committed suicide!! for that you have to wait for the next part ..

ohh and people also asked me if there was going to be a funeral. well lets see! **smiles devilishly** 😈 love keeping you in suspense!! 😈

Wow its really gud. I like the way u combined the song with the story too gud 👏 👏
Except please please please dont let Raj die 😭 😭 😭
Make Naina cum and save him. 😭
Please 😭

tooooooo good.. .but he died...
or wait a sec... he has taken the pilll... but the pill might not be cyanide, or even if it is, somebody comes and saves him... don't they???? ❓ ❓ ❓

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tell me if its bad guys.. i'll discontinue

Your img. story is good...... plz keep going.

Your img. story is good...... plz keep going.