Forever This Way Pt-11 Pg-22 - Page 8

Originally posted by: sanyamalhotra

I really find ur last part shocking Shreyasi!!!Suicide????????

Ne-ways it was good.

But u kno wats more shocking for me ..........U r reading The Gr8 Gatsby!!!!!!!!I've read dat.Its so boring yaar.U kno after reading dat book I was wondering for almost a week ki wat was so gr88888 abt Gatsby & still couldnt manage to get d answer!!!

Post nxt part sooooon.

i have to read great gatsby for school.. i actually have a presentation on it tmrw .. but i think its one of the best novel ever.. esp the personification of Son of God.. and the symbolism of dr t j eckleburg's eyes.. 😳 and just the story as a whole!!

and thxx for liking my story 😃

Originally posted by: kiran87

Hey What about the other cadets... Ali, Pooja Alekh, yudi... Do they have a part in this fanfic??

no .. sorry! 😃

omg!! i was wunderin it sounded familiar..so u read gr8 gatsby 2..n u 2 sanya..i cant believe it..most of my frnds hated it 😡 ..dis is so cool!! 😃
n d fics AWESUM shreyasi!!!! jus 2 gud..
lagta hai sadness season hai 😛 ...things r sad in my fic 2..
plzz continue soon shreyasi!! can't wait 4 d next part... 😳 😳

Nice work sheyasi 👏
Hope Rajveer does not commit suicide 😭
He is supposed to be the brave and understanding one 😭

Originally posted by: Nehavish

Nice work Shreyasi 👏
Hope Rajveer does not commit suicide 😭
He is supposed to be the brave and understanding one 😭

Sorry I had spelt ur name wrong in the previous reply.

Good Work!!!!

It is just awesome!!!
Huda's feelings when she turns around to Raj and mouths I love you silently...
Poignant!

too goood...!!!!!!!

please continue!

very good

The last part really made me sad


good work

waiting for the next

post it soon

Originally posted by: coolgirl_13

omg!! i was wunderin it sounded familiar..so u read gr8 gatsby 2..n u 2 sanya..i cant believe it..most of my frnds hated it 0 ..dis is so cool!! 😃😡
n d fics AWESUM shreyasi!!!! jus 2 gud..
lagta hai sadness season hai 😛 ...things r sad in my fic 2..
plzz continue soon shreyasi!! can't wait 4 d next part... 😳 😳

Even I hate it yaar!!!!!I read it only bcoz yeh mere final yr k course mein tha!!!!!Its not my kind of read!!!My kinda books r-Tell me ur dreams,If 2mrw comes or any of d MB series!!!!

Originally posted by: sanyamalhotra

Even I hate it yaar!!!!!I read it only bcoz yeh mere final yr k course mein tha!!!!!Its not my kind of read!!!My kinda books r-Tell me ur dreams,If 2mrw comes or any of d MB series!!!!

ohh! 😛😃 im more of a sci-fi and thriller person.. this is my first ..well.. third attempt at romantic novels. (the others are in the remix forum)..

is it good enough?