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Posted: 10 years ago

HI Naila

👍🏼 Very much enjoyed the UD Roops had a son and Dutta named him Rumaan. The conv between roops and dutta was very nice and she Is right dutta should tell nakku everything. Pls Ud really soon

Thanks as always take care now
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi nailaawesome ud...i prayed for ur sis...niece or nephew ...great news😊...i liked the roops & dutta's convo...naku & their last meeting looking frwd to...what went wrong ...ud soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi naila
loved the ud...will be back😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .LionHeart.

reserved for Sherlock :P will be back after work sunday. Working through weekend


Watson is waiting. ;P Hope work goes "swimmingly!" ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kichu.m74

Nice update 😊 First things; WELL HELLO :) how are you? Lovely to see you on the forum firstly, but then I'm even more delighted to see you on my humble thread :) I read your ff in on go..Really? Snap! Another binge reader...we are an elite type ;) Ask Daya ;p No honestly I am humbled. I don't even know how to express how flattered I am ;)

Daya suggested it 😊 Watson owes one to Sherlock now. Daya is a sweetie pie honestly. Thank you fo thinking my fic was worthy enough to be rec'd to someone and thank you Kichu for the taking the time to read it :)
& love the story..Awww shucks! ;P

was still confusing @ the beginning but once you get hang of the story line then you enjoy reading it..Yes all the time jumping. Plus I know it's hard when I withhold a lot of info too LOL.

You will be able to switch between past & future happenings..😊 I'm glad you've said that, as that was one of my concerns, namely that the switching of time would confuse the plot. Please continue soon..😊


HOnestly, thank you ever so much for taking the time to read my fic and commenting. I appreciate it. I shall try my best to update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: FASSBEN


HI Naila Hiya Fassben, how ya doin'? ;p

👍🏼 Thumbs up! You are very sweet!

Very much enjoyed the UD Thank you for saying that...I am aware it was much shorter than the rest and in hindsight, nothing much happens...but of course that is a writer's ploy for a build up hmmm ;)

Roops had a son Seems to have kept the Patil family tradition alive huh ;)

and Dutta named him Rumaan. Yes! Ok confession time: I was stuck. And I mean stuck when it came to naming the kid. For a while I didn't have anything, but figured I'm going to need something. I then toyed with a few names (by few I mean about five!) but in the end I didn't think anything of them fit. So I decided you know what let's merge the parents names. And then Rumaan came to me. I don't even know if it is a name, or not (although I have heard of a similar name, with one or two sound/letter alterations...) either way, I thought it'll do! (LOL good job I'm not in charge of naming the new arrival in my fam ey?)

The conv between roops and dutta was very nice In the last update they bonded and I really wanted to show that two years later in the present, they have made up-long made made upfor the years they missed out on. and she Is right dutta should tell nakku everything. Dutta ha a lot of answering to do. In fact so does Naku. So erm 'talking time maybe?'
Pls Ud really soon I shall try my best, thank you for reading.

Thanks as always take care now

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: uwith

hi naila Hiya Uvi :) awesome ud..Thank you do much :) .i prayed for ur sis...niece or nephew ...great news 😊...AWWW that is so sweet. I appreciate it so much. THANK YOU! THANK YOU! honestly. I shall keep you all informed lol.


i liked the roops & dutta's convo...I'm glad. Nothing like a bit of banter/heart to heart between a brother and sister ey? ;P

naku & their last meeting looking frwd to...what went wrong ...ud soon Well they've met, and it seems as though they are about to get some privacy. While I can say something went 'wrong' I also want to point out, that it may to be in the way you initially assume. Let's not forget these two are extremely independent and vociferous beings, so is it really just a case of 'clash of the titans''?

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi naila well hello Nakusha :)

loved the ud...will be back😊 and I shall wait ;P

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Posted: 10 years ago

hi naila

Wonderful ud

Dutta & roops bonding too good

Dutta's nephew is cute

Dutta marriage is a mystery ...

You going to be aunt ...congrats

Don't worry the mom & child be fine...just take it easy

Pls ud soon😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm back!!! 😎
Gotta say, I'm glad to finally put up my feet after a busy weekend at work! I'm off for a week :D
Time for some R&R...and what better way to do that then with your wonderful FF?

Chapter Fourteen
First off, great UD...thoroughly enjoyed it...I have a soft spot for kids...so I find stories with em so adorable...

All of what was his fault...? That is a very vague way to put things! What's she stuck in the middle of...besides the obvious...?

Me grinning at "Mama Data" and Rumaan. How adorable are they! So cute na? 😆😛 I do love to see that Dutta kept to his promise to be a part of his sister's life. He even made peace with his BIL!! And the easy teasing relationship between siblings is sweet and shows how far they've truly come.
And bonus, it's easy to see that he does share his life with her...she knows a lot...more than we all do that's for sure. Hmmph🤓.

OH, here we go with the tid bits again!

"I know given the chance again you'd go back and do exactly the same. You'd marry her again. You'd turn your back on your happiness for the sake of a friend"

Good to know, care to share more? For the sake of a friend, what exactly did he do???

I am glad Roops has taken the role of knocking some sense into him! I do encourage he pursue the future he wants, especially considering fate seems to be paving the way for them to find each other (finally and permanently?)

What 'right thing" is Dutta doing...sheesh woman...you know how to keeps us begging!

Ah Naku acknowledging he was right is clearly big but for me...I'm more interested in the situation surrounding how and when those words initially popped up!

I have to say I love how casual their meets are...how easily they fall right into the moment despite the time that's lapsed.

Eager to find out more...continue soon!!

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